Everyone else has posted testimonials, but it doesn't matter if I post it or not.

Because there are really few brothers watching, I just wrote out the testimonials, and what I saw were those brothers.

But,I'm a person who likes to chatter.,A lot of times the author at the back of each chapter says that he has to send some emotion.,Today, there is no author at the end of the chapter.,Just move it to the shelf testimonial.。

Anyway, I will be able to eat full attendance tomorrow, for a person with such perseverance as me, it is inevitable to continue to eat full attendance, this book has never been broken since the signing of the contract, two shifts a day.

So everyone knows the purpose of my listing, and the subscription must be pitiful, so I can only think of millions of gods to encourage myself.

Many readers said that my writing, and driving too much, some readers can't understand it, I agree, I definitely didn't expect Marvel fanfiction readers to be so young. I still blame myself for not understanding the market and not understanding the readers.

Some readers even said that the first paragraph of my book was copied from the original text of Journey to the West, and I asked him to take out the original text, or copy this paragraph of mine to Baidu, to see what can be found? After saying this, I regretted it a little, and I suddenly felt that although this reader was a little confused, this was a disguised praise for me.

The reader said that I can compare with Wu Chengen, I am so happy that I explode, of course, the gap between me and the old gentleman is 108,000 miles.

It's still good to have more books, at least you can know that you have stepped on those pits, those poisonous spots are you released, and the next book should improve somewhat.

Through the testimonials on the shelves, I also analyzed the poison of this book.

Of course, the mismatch between the writing style and the reader's market is the biggest problem, and now I only talk about the poisonous point.

First, Zhu Bajie is the protagonist, which can be regarded as a poisonous point, if modern people cross into Zhu Bajie and then go to Marvel, the sense of substitution should be better.

Second, the combat power systems of Zhu Bajie and Marvel were different, so at the beginning, it was said that Bajie was Da Luo, and he made a lot of mistakes, but he changed it later.

Third, Marvel's Avengers and Spider-Man are both well-known positive characters, who were constantly played by Zhu Bajie, and ran away with many readers, this can't be helped, the writing style and plot have been fixed, and the reason why Bajie was sent there is because of Bajie's ability.

Fourth, the early Bajie did not get items and upgrades to cool points, which is also more dissuading to the audience, now the pace of online novels is fast, come to the first chapter out of the system, even if it is cool and attractive, the attribute panel will be lit up every one or two chapters, the strength has been added a little, and the IQ has been added by two points, which are all cool points.

Our novel, 300,000 words, Bajie learned a four-wheel drive technique, but it was subdued by a group of awesome subordinates, which can be regarded as a gain, but compared with the cool point of the system that gives you some benefits at every turn, low is not good.

Fifth,In terms of plot, the author is basically a completely original plot.,So a lot of friends who read the same people come to see this book.,I originally wanted to follow the plot.,The result is all stories made up by the author himself.,And a lot of the plot is still abusing the Marvel protagonist.,There's novelty and brain holes.,But for some readers, it's a poisonous point.。

Sixth, because the plot goes quickly, some friends who read the book too fast will miss a lot of details, and a group of people will be changed in three chapters, and the map will also be changed, and they are very uncomfortable, in fact, this is also determined by my writing style, one or two thousand words is enough to get a character done, and there will be no water for many words.

I accidentally wrote the sixth article, so I won't say another one.

Seventh, driving, it's really not white enough, and the main plot came out relatively late, Bajie's purpose for coming here was too late to leak his eyebrows, and until now Bajie doesn't know what he wants to do when he comes to Marvel. Some of the lines are so long that perhaps the reader forgets them.

The above is the big problem that I summarized, of course, there are many small problems, so I won't talk about them one by one. This testimonial is almost longer than the text.

Maybe in my novel, the protagonist is a modern person dressed as Bajie, and then ran to Marvel and went to the Marvel Awakening system, which was made by Sanqing, and then sent a task to Bajie, which needed to arch a few widows and destroy the superhero's character. In this way, it is reasonable for the protagonist to do something, and Bajie bullies Iron Man and the like, readers will not blame the protagonist, but feel that the Sanqing system has deep meaning.

Of course, it is also reasonable to pull out the later plot in this way, and it is also in line with the reading habits of current readers.

I think it's good to change it like this, but I'm too lazy, the first 300,000 words, how much content to change. And the part that drives in front of you will get 404 if you are not careful, so this book should be used as a lesson.

I'm still going to try to write it, try to write it.

Those who can see the testimonials on the shelves are true love, thank you.

The sky is high and the sea is far away, and my story is never boring!