It's done.

From October last year, it has lasted ten months until now, with a total of 1.5 million words.

Thank you for your popularity.

To summarize the lessons learned:

The role of the protagonist Zhan Liu was not well shaped, and he completely became a tool man.

There are many reasons for this.

On the one hand, the character design at the beginning was not done well. The character image is relatively thin, and there are no special habits or oral fetishes and the like, and there is a lack of memory points and recognition.

On the other hand, there are too few scenes of the characters. The roles between the main and supporting characters are completely unbalanced, and the protagonists are often hidden.

The root cause is that the positioning of Zhan Liu is not done well.

In the original outline, I wanted to write some destined stories in the Marvel world.

The fate of mutants, the fate of Captain America, the fate of Spider-Man, the fate of Asgard......

If fate is restricted, the general plot will not deviate from the original MCU film and television drama, and it will be easier to write, as long as you kill the past one by one according to the timeline.

The positioning of Zhanliu is to guide and promote, and it is a relatively transcendent existence, which belongs to the positioning of Marvel's martial ancestor.

Those little people who are shrouded in the fate of superheroes, who can neither mutate nor rely on technology, can get a chance to turn over in the Ultimate Infinite Pavilion.

However, due to the limited pen power, the fate was not written, and the writing collapsed, and hundreds of them were booked, so I quickly deleted the outline and some chapters.

Then the revised outline is more erratic for the positioning of Zhan Liu, and the original appearance plot is gone.

And during that time, in order to deliberately pursue Riwan, I didn't sort out the new outline well, which led to fewer and fewer opportunities for Zhan Liu's appearance in the deleted chapters, because I didn't arrange a good position for Zhan Liu.

When the King of the Nine Realms was in that volume, he actually wanted to bring the perspective back again, so he took Zhan Liu as the core and took a space journey, Sandar, Sovereign, Asgard, and Earth...... However, in the end, he still gave up.

Ragnarok could have been written as Zhan Liu, and then Thor went berserk to take revenge, and the master and apprentice killed each other or something.

In fact, all the volumes, the leader is replaced by Zhan Liu, just change the name, and even the plot does not need to be changed, it can also be the protagonist as the core, so that people have a sense of substitution in the story.

For example, the emperor of the United States, let Zhanliu collude with Hydra to run for president, lead the superheroes to resist the Zetarians and the like, or simply do everyone's work alone, kill the aliens, and push back to destroy the Zetari home planet and so on.

Or the crazy god scroll, let Zhan Liu take the lead in resisting the Zerg or something.

I knew it was the right thing to write, it would be more immersive, and the number of subscriptions would be higher, but I couldn't break through myself.

I can't!

The problem of amateur writers is that they are always unable to break through their psychological constraints, and they always feel that writing like this is unreasonable.

What the I wrote is, it's all fake, it's cool, and the reasonableness of a fart?

But just like OCD, I look at plot bugs, I can't write anymore, I always want to revise them!

I now regret that I changed the outline in the first place, and I messed up everything that followed, and what I wrote was no longer what I wanted to write.

It is very painful to write what you don't want to write.

Most obviously, there is no passion for writing anymore.

When I wrote the first few volumes, before the chapters were written, some wonderful passages appeared in my mind like a movie, which was very graphic, and then I just wrote it down in words.

But then, not to mention the movie screen, there is not even a PPT!

The obvious result is that the words written are emotionless, dry, and the lines are not passionate, and everyone must feel it.

At the end of the seventh volume, I hesitated to leave it at that, because most of the holes I had dug before had been filled.

But in the end, I decided to finish the outline and give Zhan Liu, Peter, and the others a complete ending.

As a new author, no matter how good or bad the work is, at least there is a beginning, a process, an ending, and a complete creative experience, which must be of great benefit to the next book.

In addition, in addition to the problem of the protagonist of Zhan Liu, there is also the problem of the storyline itself.

There are also group portraits that are well written, such as "Escape from Konoha Beginning", the protagonist is often hidden, and there is no figure in dozens of chapters, but it is still more than 10,000 and 300,000 collections, one of the differences is that the story of my book is not attractive enough.

This problem is really unsolvable, and it can only be said that personal ability is not good.

Now that I look at this book in reverse, I feel that this book is nondescript, sometimes focusing on Marvel, sometimes focusing on the sea tiger, swaying from side to side, and hitting the street is inevitable.

This lesson will have to be heeded next time.

There is also the issue of dialogue, as if I narrate too much and dialogue too little.

The lack of dialogue to improve the character is also not conducive to the number of words, it is a major failure, and it will have to be changed next time!

There are also descriptions of battles, which really won't!

Especially if it's not a punch or kick, but a collision of energy that can easily destroy the world, with my amateur writer's lack of vocabulary, I really don't know how to write.

I never want to write this kind of fight scene again in my life!

Finally, I would like to thank you again for your love and support.

The new book is original and light.,The one that the editor booked last year.,Because of this book.,I've only signed a contract now.,I'm saving up the manuscript.,When you save enough, you'll send the book.。

However, recently I saw a new policy at the starting point, encouraging the male frequency of the heroine, and I was considering whether to change the protagonist to a female, and I went to eat the recommendations on both sides, anyway, they were all tool people...... Ah, by the way, I forgot to say it, in the next book, the protagonist is still a tool man.

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