Summary of Volume I

It's been nearly two months since the book was issued, and I've written a volume of more than 200,000 words.

To be honest, I never thought of this book as it is today, and I would like to thank you for your support, well, and my editors.

The story of the first volume, in general, I am quite satisfied with myself, although there are many problems in the writing, such as when I wrote about Zhang Zhenshan's pursuit of Bai Yunfei's battle, some book friends complained that the fight was too wordy, for example, when writing Liu Meng's chapters, some book friends complained that it was too bloody and too nymphomaniac, Yunhai wrote a book for the first time, and there may be many aspects that are not properly grasped, here, thank you to those book friends who have kindly put forward their opinions.

At the end of the first volume, I felt a sense of relief, this volume is the first step, it is said that 300,000 words of a novel is the first hurdle, and in the next second volume, I think I can step over this hurdle in one breath and start a new step. Because, with so many people supporting me, even if I am tired, it is worth it.

The content of the first volume,It seems to be a little heavy.,From the initial revenge.,Then to being hunted down.,And then deceived.,Some book friends may feel that this looks a little depressing.,For example, when I first wrote Liu Meng.,Some book friends said that they were too and too brain-dead not to read it.,Hehe,I don't know if the book friends who read it also think that Liu Meng wrote a little failed?

In fact, the original plan was to let Yunfei walk out of Qingyun directly, not even Zhang Zhenshan's pursuit, and naturally there was no Liu Meng's deception, but then I felt that if Yunfei was directly allowed to leave Qingyun and face the outside world, it seemed a little too anxious. Therefore, the appearance of Liu Meng was arranged, as the 'Zhu Jiuzhen'-style role mentioned by Hanzhang's book friends at the beginning, so that Yunfei could grow emotionally.

Yunfei has a firm mind and is firm and decisive in encountering problems, which is cultivated by eighteen years of strong and unyielding (of course, there is also a trace of the influence of the traverser), but it is also like what I said at the beginning. IQ and EQ should be separate', for Yun Fei, who has lived hard for eighteen years and has almost never had contact with the opposite sex, the emotional aspect is blank, so when Liu Meng appears, he will lose his judgment like that, in fact, my original intention was to write more of their stories, so that Yun Fei and Liu Meng can get along a little longer, and then the development, such as when Liu Meng wants to cheat the secret of the enhancement technique, will be more reasonable and will not seem abrupt. But the reaction of the book friends was quite big, so after that, they accelerated the plot and jumped directly to the plot of breaking the game.

I don't know if you think about it now, are you satisfied with the story in this green willow city?

I've always said that I want to write a cool article, but the first volume doesn't seem to be very cool, hehe, no way, the plot is limited, Yunfei, who has always been in a weak position, can't kill the Quartet from the beginning. From the second volume onwards, I will write light-hearted and refreshing stories, so that everyone can look at them and smile, then my efforts will be affirmed, and it will not be in vain.

In the past few days of writing a book, I have really realized the hardships of the author, you read a chapter in a few minutes, the author is likely to write for several hours, sometimes for a sentence, an action, think hard for dozens of minutes, type and delete, delete and write, delete and write......

Therefore, I also want to say to all of you who read books, even if you see a novel, you don't like the plot of it, or even you think it's bad, but please don't abuse the author, if it really doesn't suit your taste, then leave quietly, never read that book again, and you won't be upset. Because it is very likely that your malicious words will affect the author for a few hours or even days.

I remember when I first saw the first bad review in the book review area, I was depressed for an afternoon and a night, although I knew that there was no need to care about this, the book I wrote could not be recognized by all readers, but I just couldn't control the sadness in my heart, because what he sprayed was a story that I spent hours, or even days, even eating and sleeping, and then typed out......

When the book was first issued, there were 70,000 manuscripts, and I didn't understand the importance of manuscripts at all, and those days were just preparing for the last test of the driving school, and then the manuscript was finished, and the cups were out, and the updates of 5,000 words per day were all now issued, except for eating and going to the toilet, the ass basically never left the stool, whenever I saw people in the author group saying thousands of words an hour, I was so sore that I wanted to drop the computer, because I had hundreds of words an hour......

Later, a while ago, I had to prepare for graduation, I could only change it one day, the update was not strong, and Yunhai was not embarrassed to ask for red tickets or the like, for book friends who worked hard to watch and were not happy to read every day, Yunhai said sorry here, hehe, for a period of time after this, at least before going to the company, Yunhai will work hard every day to code words, as much as possible.

Yunfei walked out of Qingyun and started the real road of life, Yunhai also got his college diploma yesterday and is about to start his own career. Hehe, I didn't study hard at the beginning, I could only mix in a vocational college for three years, and now I am about to really enter the society, in the face of the various social status quo, to be honest, I am not as free and easy as Yunfei, I am very confused......

Next month at the latest, I will go to work in a company in Hebei, and I don't even know anything about the company, and I can only know what I want to do......

Belch...... I wanted to write a summary of the first volume, but it turned out to be my own complaint, hehe, so be it.

Finally, thanks to my good brother Zheng Kai (well, it's the soy sauce one that I played a long time ago, and he was the first one...... Oh, Zheng Kai said that he was not a trick, he wanted to be the second male...... He has been supporting Yunhai before I have even submitted it, and even exaggerated that if it weren't for his daily encouragement at that time, I might not have been able to persist in writing the first 70,000-word manuscript, and I would not have submitted it, and I might not have had this book. There are also good brothers such as Brother Bin and Kun Peng, as well as many classmates who came to support (I remember that a few days before I sent the book, no one cared about it at all, and it was all these friends who helped to support it).

Of course, in the end, all the book friends who support Yunhai are absolutely indispensable, such as Xiao Binzi (not the same person as Brother Bin in front), he provided me with a group of book friends at the beginning, and he was also one of the first readers to support Yunhai, and today he specially gave me a cheer, thank you very much for Xiao Binzi's support.

There is also a 'selethky' book friend, he is the first book friend to cheer me on, I remember when I saw that the empty support area suddenly had a name, Yunhai was excited for a long time, hehe......

And Brother Hongyin,' 1354354354', Tianming, Xian Beast, Han Zhang, Seven Wanyue, L, Xiaowei, Mo Pupil, as dark as night, dream to wake up, soul elegant, Yan Xu, etc., etc. (here are a few casually played, and there are many book friends in the group and who often speak in the book review area in support of Yunhai, Yunhai is not named here, your support, Yunhai sees it in your eyes, remembers it in your heart, and is grateful), of course, there are many book friends who don't like to speak, but also silently support Yunhai and vote for their precious red votes......

There are also many author friends, and at the beginning of the book, it was also thanks to the support and encouragement of the author friends in the group. Xiaotian, Yuehua, Youji, Mengweaving, Xiluo, Eight Wings, Jianxue, Butcher, Brother Mingyue, etc., there are many more, so I won't play them all here......

(Well, it should be added here: all of the above rankings are in no particular order, hehe.) )

Huh, why did it become a thanksgiving meeting again? Khan...... Then should I add another sentence of thanks to the motherland and the party, and then thank CC*? Oh, no? Then forget it......

Hehe, that's all for it, Yunhai continues to sort out the story of the second volume.

Finally, I roared again - thank you for your support to the sea of clouds!!