Chapter 104: It's Blue
"I was actually writing just now, since you are an old bookworm, why don't you help me look at the beginning and give advice?"
Xia Chengye put the dense paper in front of Jiang Yan.
"Okay."
Jiang Yan said that he was worried about how to pass the time when he was bored, just to see what Xia Chengye wrote.
"Chapter 1, the Demon King is Coming! 》
"The title starts with a decent one." Jiang Yan commented.
At the beginning of Xia Chengye's writing, it tells the story of a protagonist named Ye Xuan who wakes up from a thousand years of sleep, and then returns to the city to take revenge.
"Gao Zhanpeng, your ancestors killed my whole family back then, and my parents were tortured and imprisoned in a pigsty before they died, but fortunately I escaped and survived!"
"You will repay this account for your ancestors, and 100,000 black-armored soldiers will obey the order and kill me!"
Ye Xuan's smile was terrifying, and everyone in the Gao family's compound knelt on the ground and begged for mercy.
"Leaf... Ye Xuan, it was my ancestor who killed your whole family back then, no... None of our business! ”
There was no desire for Jiang Yan to look at it before, and Jiang Yan's blood pressure soared when he saw this.
"How?"
Xia Chengye asked expectantly.
Jiang Yan took a deep breath.
"You..."
"You're good at writing!"
Jiang Yan said euphemistically.
High EQ: You write well.
Low EQ: What the hell is written!
"I think it's good, do you want to give me advice?" Xia Chengye feels good about himself.
Seeing that Jiang Yan didn't speak for a long time, Xia Chengye smiled.
Could it be that he writes so well that even Jiang Yan, an old bookworm, can't jump out of anything?
I'm a genius!
"Why did the protagonist wake up after sleeping for thousands of years, since he is burdened with a sea of blood and hatred, he should immediately go to the Gao family to take revenge if he becomes a strong man, so that readers will be happy to see it." Ring Zhongwen Network
Jiang Yan wanted to complain too much, and he didn't know where to start for a while.
"Jiang Yan, you don't understand, I'm foreshadowing, Ye Xuan didn't take revenge at the first time, because the exercises he obtained were very special..."
"That's what many great god authors wrote!"
Xia Chengye talked eloquently.
Jiang Yan: "......"
"No matter how good and wonderful the foreshadowing is, do you think readers will have the patience to continue reading?" Jiang Yan sent out a soul torture.
"This..."
Xia Chengye scratched his head.
"Probably so?" Xia Chengye said uncertainly.
"Remove the should, add no in front!"
Jiang Yan corrected Xia Chengye's words.
"And do you think the protagonist looks cool to stab the villain who killed his parents, or is the villain already old and dead, and the protagonist kills all the villain's offspring, and the reader looks good?"
Jiang Yan continued.
Hiss –
Xia Chengye gasped.
"I'll tell you how to write it, the protagonist's whole family was slaughtered by the villain, and a mysterious powerhouse passing by saw that the protagonist was a peerless and rare cultivation wizard, and saved the protagonist at a critical moment. The protagonist worships the mysterious strong man as a teacher, and after returning from school, he happened to meet the villain's son getting married, and the bride is the protagonist's childhood sweetheart! ”
Jiang Yan took a sip of water to moisten his throat.
"The protagonist's childhood sweetheart is reluctant to marry the villain's son, and when he is forced to commit suicide to retain his innocence due to family pressure, the protagonist makes his debut. The villains ridicule the protagonist for not being able to measure himself, the protagonist slaps his face, remember not to kill the villain, you have to torture slowly so that you can write long! ”
Jiang Yan didn't forget to tell him, and casually said the beginning.
Xia Chengye, who was sitting next to him, was stupid!
"Jiang Yan, you are too powerful, you wrote it before?"
Xia Chengye stammered when he spoke.
After listening to Jiang Yan's words, Xia Chengye suddenly opened his mouth, and then looked at the beginning of what he wrote.
What kind of is this!
"The more you read, the more you understand." Jiang Yan said modestly.
"You don't know a little, you know too much!"
Xia Chengye's eyes adored.
"Jiang Yan, you teach me to write!"
[Ding - Congratulations to the host for unlocking the achievement of a famous teacher and a high apprentice!] 】
Famous teachers produce high apprentice achievements?
"System, what's the use of a famous teacher's achievements as a high apprentice?" Jiang Yan communicated with the system.
[The achievements of famous teachers and apprentices can improve the host's comprehension ability in the professional field. 】
"Got it!"
Jiang Yan nodded, now he is 60 in the field of literature, if he trains Xia Chengye to become a family, his attainments in the field of literature will improve.
Thinking of this, Jiang Yan looked at Xia Chengye's eyes and became serious.
"Are you sure you want me to teach you how to write?"
Jiang Yan said.
"Sure!" Xia Chengye nodded like a chicken pecking rice.
Jiang Yan's casual words benefited him a lot, rather than knowing nothing about scribbling himself, it was better to let Jiang Yan teach himself.
"Tear up the beginning of what you wrote."
"I just talked about a very popular beginning on the market, and now I'm going to teach you another way of thinking..."
Jiang Yan said slowly, and Xia Chengye took notes seriously.
"The supporting character is very important, and the vivid and interesting character design will make the reader remember the character."
Jiang Yan glanced at the time, half past eleven.
"That's all for today, I have a hunch that I will get sick in the afternoon and have to take two days off, and I will teach you when I am well."
Xia Chengye: "??? ”
It's okay to have a premonition that you're going to get sick in the afternoon!
"Teacher, can I start writing now, and then post it in Skystar?"
Xia Chengye asked respectfully.
"You can write the beginning, but don't be in a hurry to post, when to write the beginning that I am satisfied with and when to release." Jiang Yan was about to drink saliva to moisten his throat, but Xia Chengye quickly unscrewed the bottle cap and handed it over.
"I know the teacher, I'll send it to you as soon as I write it at the beginning."
"Well, remember what I taught you, don't memorize by rote, it's the key to apply what you've learned."
Before leaving, Jiang Yan and Xia Chengye added each other's contact information.
I have to take a plane to Suzhou City in the afternoon to record "The Masked Singer", and it will take two days back and forth, and it is relatively easy to ask for leave from college.
Although the instructor was very dissatisfied with Jiang Yan's behavior of asking for leave at the beginning of school, he didn't say much when his mother covered up.
Sitting on the plane from Yanjing to Sushi, Jiang Yan looked at the blue screen in front of him.
[Age: 18]
[Appearance: 100]
[Stamina: 70]
[Literature: 63]
[Music: 70]
[General: 321]
After unlocking the achievements of the famous teacher and the high apprentice, Jiang Yan taught Xia Chengye for a morning, and the field of literature increased from 60 to 63.
In addition, Jiang Yan's physical strength has also increased from 40 to 70, because there is an energy drink Jiang Yan can exercise without worrying about excessive exercise causing damage to the body.
[Ding, congratulations to the host for triggering the task.] 】
[The second issue of "The Masked Singer" gets a full ticket, reward: a silver treasure chest!] 】
"Did you pass with a full ticket?"
There are a total of 500 viewers at the scene of "The Masked Singer", which means that Jiang Yan has to ask all the audience to vote for him in this issue in order to complete the task of system release.
"System, what happens if you don't complete the task?"
Jiang Yan was not only a little curious.
[No Punishment!] 】
"That's fine."
Jiang Yan breathed a sigh of relief, but the silver treasure chest was still very tempting, but the task of getting a full ticket was a bit too harsh.
There were 500 spectators at the scene, and Jiang Yan was not a 100-yuan bill to satisfy everyone.
The difficulty of this task can be described in four words.
It's very blue!