Writing this chapter today, I went to read the original book again, about the matter between Li Qiushui and Tianshan Tong Wuyazi, I feel that this chapter is not satisfied, and the plot direction is a little too taken for granted, and I can't convince myself.

Gotta overturn and rewrite, let's see tomorrow.

Admittedly, I saw someone commenting that I wrote about the water, and that it was a "deacon" sign, apparently all the time after it.

I don't quite understand, what is the water in your mouth, or why it is not called water, maybe it makes me like other authors, it is to kill and kill, etc., because it is so cool.

If so, I do have enough water!

I write fanfics, in line with one point of view, that is, in line with the character of the original book, the event line follows the general framework of the original book.

For example, the apricot forest incident, the battle of Juxianzhuang is more than two years different from the plot of Xuzhu and even Tong's grandmother, I will not be like others, to rub the popularity of the plot of Juxianzhuang, followed by the plot of Drum Mountain, the plot of Tianshan Tong, and give myself a big plug-in.

The most important thing is that two years after the Apricot Forest Juxianzhuang incident, he was only ninety-three years old, and when the limit came, there were masters such as Ding Chunqiu outside, and he had no time to teach Xuzhu Kung Fu, so he could only let him take the painting to Li Qiushui.

After the Juxianzhuang incident, they immediately rushed to Drum Mountain, but Wu Yazi still said that the limit was approaching, and he taught him internal strength, and asked him to go to Li Qiushui and Tianshan Tong to teach martial arts.

Hehe...... Wu Yazi will never let his heirs find Tianshan Tong's grandmother, and he doesn't even understand this reason, it's too disgusting!

Wu Yazi abandoned Grandma Tong and empathized with Li Qiushui, and later it was Grandma Tong who said that Li Qiushui and Ding Chunqiu had an affair.

As a result, Wuyazi couldn't clean up people, but was plotted by the other party, just ask, Wuyazi is such an arrogant person who will let the heirs find Tianshan Tong's grandmother?

He was already ashamed of Tianshan Tong's grandmother, and the other party knew that he was a cuckold, isn't he ashamed?

Therefore, Wuyazi never mentioned Tianshan Tong's grandmother to Xuzhu at all, let alone think of borrowing her hand to kill Ding Chunqiu!

This is the arrogance of a man!

We are all ordinary people, and we abandoned a woman who loved us when we were in the limelight, and I am afraid that we will not go to her when we are down, right?

Isn't that so?

Jin Yong understands human nature very well!

Let's be honest again, I'm just shameless, ignoring this timeline, and rubbing this heat, this is also the highlight moment of Qiao Feng and Xuzhu, the protagonists of the original work, can we write about Jin Yong?

Isn't that self-sufficient?

And I won't change the character of the original character in the original book, or leave the character of the original character, I don't have the ability to write.

Besides, the same people,In fact, what you eat is the bonus of the original author.。

It's Jin Yong who is famous, and only the same people can watch it, so the plot can be changed, but the character of the character in the pen of His Majesty must not be changed!

This is the minimum morality.

For example, Qiao Feng, a person is a heroic man who doesn't know what danger is, and a heroic person who dares to take action in the face of adversity.

The plot of Qiao Feng's death in this book, I can also avoid it because of his popularity, it's not that I don't understand!

But when the plot is there, he has to go offline!

Qiao Feng is certainly powerful, but the current protagonist is also a hero of a lifetime, with a ruthless personality and a strange temper!

You are not afraid of me, and I am not afraid of you!

There is no stake, hello me hello everyone!

But he and Qiao Feng have different cognitive concepts, just say that the bag is different, Qiao Feng thinks that the bag is different and elegant, not afraid of power, and the true character of a man.

The protagonist thinks that he has never been beaten, he is weak and does not know how to be strong, and his mouth cannon does not distinguish between objects, he is looking for death!

You said, Qiao Feng is wrong, or is the protagonist wrong?

That's right, it's just that everyone's personalities are different.

Some people also say that the protagonist's martial arts are so powerful, and Qiao Feng has also seen it, so he will not be his enemy.

Hehe, Qiao Feng saw that his woman was being scolded, just because the other party had high martial arts, he also came to avoid the evil and turned a blind eye. Just ask, is that still Qiao Feng?

Another example is the high monk of the generation of Gu Mozhi, although he is greedy, hateful, and ignorant, he has all three poisons, and he is stubborn and self-serving.

But he is also a martial arts master with great status, and he is by no means a comic character written in some people's books.

Let's talk about Xiao Yuanshan, the original book clearly wrote that he was originally a heroic and exotic hero, but in the past thirty years, he has been full of hatred and does not communicate with people, and his temperament has become perverse and ruthless.

To put it bluntly, he is a patient with major depression, he has become a neurotic, and his brain circuits are different from ordinary people.

The reason why he killed Qiao Feng's father-in-law and mother-in-law was ridiculous. said that the Qiao couple pretended to be Qiao Feng's parents, and not only robbed him of his family happiness, but also did not explain the truth to Qiao Feng, then they should die.

Xuan Ci let Qiao Feng apprentice to Xuan Ku, but everyone just wanted to cover up this bloody crime forever, and turned his son into a Han man, telling his son to worship the great enemy as a teacher, and succeed the great enemy as the leader of the beggar gang.

Just ask, normal people, who would think like this?

If Xuanci Wang Jiantong is so bad, he will directly kill Xiao Qiaofeng and cut the grass and eradicate the roots, wouldn't it be a hundred? Why are you doing this?

You must know that Qiao Feng thinks that the people of the rivers and lakes are cutting the grass and eradicating the roots, which is not wrong at all. When he learned that Duan Zhengchun was the eldest brother in the lead, he wanted to leave the chicken and dog killed by his family to vent his hatred. It's just that when he saw Duan Zhengchun's heroic benevolence, he was ready to kill him.

Therefore, substituting Xiao Yuanshan's brain circuit, you must not consider it with normal thinking.

In order to ruin Xuanci Shaolin's reputation, he endured for 30 years, how could he allow the protagonist to talk nonsense with his mouth open?

You must know that Xuan Ci had a private meeting with Ye Erniang and asked someone to deliver the baby, he was watching from the side, he didn't reveal it, he was just waiting for a suitable opportunity.

Because Xuan Ci thought that his own business from beginning to end, no one knew, just ask, the protagonist directly revealed that Xuan Ci was the leading brother, which is equivalent to making his forbearance a joke in the past few decades, if he gathers in Shaolin for heroes, he will directly not give Shaolin Xuanci any room to move, and he will be completely ruined, and there is no chance to turn over.

If you just say this, Xiao Yuanshan can do it decades ago.

When he rescued Qiao Feng in Juxianzhuang, he could reveal his identity and tell the truth, but he didn't!

Why?

That's because he still feels that his son doesn't hate the Central Plains martial arts people enough!

His way of revenge, Qiao Feng will never agree!

You must know that Xiao Yuanshan wants to disgrace the entire Shaolin sect, and he is by no means a Xuanci!

Qiao Feng's martial arts originated from Shaolin, and he didn't even kill Xuan Lone, Xiao Yuanshan saw it clearly, so he saved people, and he didn't want to tell his son the truth!

It is necessary to let him find the truth on the rivers and lakes, and the people of the rivers and lakes will hunt him down again, completely ruining Qiao Feng's good impression of the Central Plains martial arts, so that he can work with his father and son to clean up the Central Plains martial arts together.

You must know that Xiao Yuanshan hates the entire rivers and lakes in the end!

Even when he was in the plot of Shaolin Temple, in front of everyone, he said to Qiao Feng: "These Southern Dynasty warriors are insidious and treacherous, what's the good thing?!" ”

Such remarks show that he has hated everyone.

Master Zhiguang has already lost all his martial arts, and people have told Qiao Feng some truths, and they all chose to commit suicide, he has to use Shaolin stunts on his corpse to make up for a few fingers, so that people can misunderstand that Qiao Feng killed him?

His thinking, or is he a normal person?

Let's talk about Li Qiushui and Grandma Tong, presumably everyone can guess that Grandma Tong committed suicide, and the protagonist stopped it......

And then......

But I read the original book carefully, and entangled several people, the two women have hated each other for nearly 70 years, 68 years to be exact, Grandma Tong appeared in the original book at the age of 96, and now she is 94 years old, and at the age of 26, she was enchanted by the 18-year-old Li Qiushui, and she can no longer grow up.

Grandma Tong later restrained Li Qiushui, but only ruined her appearance, which also tells everyone that it is not that the life and death charm cannot control Li Qiushui, but that she can resolve it.

If the life and death talisman is really so awesome, wouldn't Grandma Tong give Li Qiushui more refreshing than disfigurement?

This shows that the Tianshan Six Yang Palms and the Folding Plum Hands are the martial arts of the Loose School, and they are not exclusive to many people's mouths, and Wu Yazi and Li Qiushui will not do it at all.

The original text of the previous paragraph [Tong Mama said: "You are the descendant of the Xiaoyao faction, my 'Tianshan Folding Plum Hand' is the best martial arts of this sect, Wuyazi asked you to go to Wuliang Mountain to find Li Qiushui, a slut to teach you martial arts, hum, this slut is cold-hearted, may not be willing to pass on you sincerely, today I will pass on you by myself, you are blessed with great fortune, do not seek self-satisfaction, how can you not learn?" ”

Xuzhu said: "The younger generation is from the Shaolin faction, and it really has nothing to do with the Xiaoyao faction. 】

Let's ask, if Li Qiushui doesn't know these martial arts, why would Wuyazi let Xuzhu go to her, and Grandma Tong would say that?

Grandma Tong said that she wouldn't tell the truth, not that she wouldn't!

Let's look at Su Xinghe's original words.

[Ding Chunqiu, you are plotting against the master, and your martial arts are better than me, but you can't touch the most profound kung fu of the Xiaoyao School, do you want to read the scripture of "Northern Shengong"? Do you want to learn the light skills of "Ling Bo Weibu"? What about the "Tianshan Six Yang Palms"? What about "Tianshan folding plum hands"? What about "the eternal life of Changchungong"? 】

Do you say that Wu Yazi would not have these martial arts, and Ding Chunqiu would be able to believe Su Xinghe's nonsense and not kill him?

[Just now, you had a sudden attack on your magic skills, and you took Ding Chunqiu by surprise, and only then did you scare him away. If you fight for the truth, you and I will still not be his opponent when we work together. To cause Ding Chunqiu to die, the first must be stronger than the internal force, and the second must be good at using the mastery martial arts of the sect, such as 'Tianshan Liuyang Palm', 'Tianshan Folding Plum Hand', etc., the combination of martial arts and internal force can give birth to great power.

Because I have a lot of miscellaneous studies, I don't concentrate on martial arts, so that my martial arts cultivation is not as good as Ding Chunqiu, otherwise, the master only needs to inject internal force into my body, and I will be able to clean up this traitor. Moreover, I have a senior uncle who is really not low in internal strength and martial arts, but somehow, she was confused by Ding Chunqiu and joined forces with him to deal with my master.

This uncle likes handsome and chic beautiful boys, Ding Chunqiu was young and handsome back then, so he won the favor of his uncle. Ding Chunqiu has some martial arts, like 'Little Wuxianggong', which he learned from this uncle. If we attack Ding Chunqiu, and this uncle helps him with all his might, it will be very difficult to get rid of him.

In the past 30 years, Master and I have tried every possible way to find no one to inherit Master's martial arts. Seeing that the master is getting old, this heir is even more difficult to find, not only to realize the high heart, but also to be a handsome and dashing beautiful young man......"]

[Li Qiushui turned his head, looked at Xuzhu, and said: "Virtuous nephew, I have a personal relationship with Ding Chunqiu, and my senior brother didn't know it, but it was your uncle who went to tell your master, and the matter was broken. Ding Chunqiu and I worked together to knock your master off the cliff, at that time I was really forced to do so, your master wanted to kill me and kill me to vent his anger, if I didn't fight back, my life would not be guaranteed. But I didn't kill him, although his name was dying, I still pulled Ding Chunqiu and left, and didn't ask for your master's life. Later, I went to Western Xia and became an imperial concubine, and my life was glorious and rich. Your uncle came and made a tic-tac-toe with a knife on my face, but at that time my son had already ascended to the top of the throne......]

[Grandma Tong liked it very much and said, "Little monk, I also owe you a lot...... Ahh......h Ahh Suddenly, his tone changed greatly, his hands clenched into fists, slammed on the top of Xuzhu's head, and scolded: "You conscienceless thief, you ...... You must have done something unspeakable with her, and I have been hiding it from you. Little thief, are you still going to lie to me? You...... How can you stand up to me? ”

Xuzhu was startled, hurriedly put her down, and asked, "Senior, are you ...... What did you say? ”

Grandma Tong's face turned purple, tears rolled down, and she shouted, "You have an affair with Li Qiushui, a slut, aren't you?" Do you still want to deny it? Still refusing to admit it? Otherwise, how can she pass on the 'little Wuxianggong' to you? Thief, you ...... You've made me so miserable. Xuzhu was puzzled and asked, "Senior, what is 'little Wuxianggong'?" ”

Grandma Tong was stunned for a moment, then calmed down, wiped away her tears, and sighed: "It's nothing." Your master doesn't live with me! ”

It turned out that when Xuzhu recited the song, he quickly passed through many difficulties, and it was especially smooth when he recited it backwards.

Although she and Wu Yazi and Li Qiushui have passed down the same teacher, what the three of them have learned is quite different, Wu Yazi has the greatest achievements and the strongest skills, and inherited the master to be the head of the "Easy School".

The "Little Wuxianggong" master only passed on Li Qiushui alone, it was her self-defense magic skill, which was extremely powerful, and when Tong's grandmother harmed her several times, Li Qiushui relied on "Little Wuxianggong" to save her life.

Although Grandma Tong doesn't know this skill, she is very familiar with the situation of this kung fu, and then she found that Xuzhu not only contains this skill, but also has profound skills.

[When I was sober, I remembered that Wuyazi had an affair with Li Qiushui behind his back, and he was very angry and hurt himself. In fact, this matter has been guessed decades ago, and it is only now confirmed that there is confirmation. 】

[The three brothers and sisters of the "Carefree School" are all deep in internal strength and strong in martial arts, but except for Grandma Tong, the other two are not in love.

Wu Yazi first fell in love with Tong Mama, and later Tong Ma was deliberately interfered with by Li Qiushui when she was practicing, and her figure could never grow up, and her appearance was poor, so Wu Yazi moved to love Qiushui, but she never denied Tong Mama.

That night, Grandma Tong couldn't stop scolding Wu Yazi and Li Qiushui. Although Xu Zhu heard her scolding viciously, the pain was actually better than resentment, and he couldn't help but feel sorry for her. 】

If there is no cliff scum, it will be scum, Jin Yong's narration is admirable, because of his figure, he will empathize and don't fall in love, and he still refuses to admit it. But Grandma Tong had already guessed.

Of course, it's because of this kind of everything, the plot I wrote today is a little too superficial, the protagonist is not a god, and Grandma Tong is even more stubborn, and it is not so simple to resolve the hatred of the two daughters.

That's why I want to revise it, at least I have to read it myself and believe it, I don't believe it myself, I believe that everyone spends money to read it, and I don't believe it.

To be honest, I don't write that kind of cool essay without logic, and I am not good at it.

I can only write each plot as well as I can.

Those who want to watch it blindly cool are just fighting and killing, and there is no human affection for the world, so don't watch it.

Some people think that Mrs. Wang let the protagonist kill her rival, and the protagonist is angry, because she doesn't understand the world.

Hehe, you must know that the current protagonist has a big name and a very high identity, which is the rhythm of "the first person in the world".

Of course, the protagonist didn't win the sweeping monk, and he will never admit it, but others don't know the sweeping monk!

So the protagonist has some things to do and some things he can't, don't put him at the bottom of society forever.

For example, Mrs. Wang asked the protagonist to kill Ruan Xingzhu and Qin Hongmian, and the protagonist was angry.

What is the protagonist angry about? It wasn't her who instructed herself, but Duan Zhengchun was there, she obviously wouldn't do this, but she wanted to scare people.

It's a sentence for her to kill, it's also a sentence not to kill, and the protagonist understands everything.

What does she think of the protagonist, and what does the rest of the outsiders think of the protagonist?

If Mrs. Wang really makes up her mind, what is it to kill two rivals in love, it is to kill everyone, and with the strength of the protagonist's heart, he can do it.

But will Mrs. Wang? As soon as Duan Zhengchun spoke, the protagonist would not drop a good word when he did something.

This is where the protagonist gets angry.

When she was first in the inner room, Mrs. Wang said that she asked the protagonist to break Duan Zhengchun's leg and catch it back, was the protagonist angry?

No?

Why?

Because everyone is their own person, there are no outsiders, and it doesn't matter how they do things and talk.

But later, Ruan Xingzhu's mother and daughter, Qin Hongmian's mother and daughter, Duan Zhengchun's father and son, Dali's three princes and four guards, and Yue Laosan were all there, you still shouted and drank, and if you said kill, you would kill, and if you said you wouldn't kill, you wouldn't kill, have you ever considered it for the protagonist, the "first person in the world"?

Huang Yaoshi has been reprimanding Guo Jing, and Guo Jing has always received it.

But Guo Jing later became a hero, who had ever seen Huang Yaoshi train Guo Jing once in front of everyone? Huang Rong is the same.

Is it Huang Yaoshi Huang Rong who doesn't dare? Is Guo Jing going to be angry?

It's not, but Guo Jing's identity is different, they have to save face for Guo Jing, the occasion is different, in this way, there will be a person's prestige!

For example, Wang Yuyan is the head of the free faction, Grandma Tong weighs her, the protagonist and Li Qiushui stop it, who will lose face?

Is it Grandma Tong? No, that's Wang Yuyan!

Those women in the Vulture Palace will never obey her!

There's a doorway to it.

There are also some who say that Xie Xun roared and killed hundreds of people, how did the protagonist meet hundreds of people,

Alas, I just want to scold, you also deserve to read?

Xie Xun was first in a valley, which was the most important terrain problem, and secondly, those people were all moles to the extreme, and thirdly, he didn't have to think about accidental injuries.

The main thing is that he has been howling for a long time, because there is no master, so no one can interrupt him.

And the protagonist is not facing a pile of masters, if he doesn't have his own people, what are you crying about? Don't be interrupted in the middle, or don't hurt your own people by mistake!

It's so simple, what else is Qiao Feng fighting in Juxianzhuang? Nearly lost your life? It's all like Duan Yanqing's apprentice who shocked to death, and Tan Qing, who chased the soul staff, and drank it to death!

It's just a brain!

[Why is it not as Grandma Tong said, the sound transmission went out to call people to attack and come in? ] Thinking about it, whether it is pushing ice or transmitting sound, you have to be distracted, and Grandma Tong is watching on the side, so she will naturally seize the opportunity and deal a fatal blow]

This is the original text, see it clearly, obviously the master is on the side, the protagonist wants to shock a large group of people to death, how much internal force does it have to operate, and the people next to him are all dead people, and they won't stop it? Can't get your hands dirty?

Don't say that the internal force is profound, the protagonist is powerful, and other masters are papier-mâché?

They are all the top people in the world, who can be much worse than whom? Is there a difference between cloud and mud?

It's really cool to read the brains of the text!

The top players have high and low with each other, but the gap is not big and irreparable.

The sweeping monk is powerful, he can not resist Murong Fu's palm power, Qiao Feng pushed it with both palms, and he scored a hand to draw away the opponent's palm power, why didn't he shake the other party out with a wall of qi?

Here's the simplest truth:

Can you also kick an ant to death, can you kick a dog and a pig to death? Can an elephant or tiger be trampled to death?

Don't you need to divide the object?

It's like Tianshan Tong's grandmother, you don't need a second trick to kill, this is just a metaphor, she is so awesome, why didn't she kill Li Qiushui?

The opponents are different, the situation is different, and the results are different, and they don't understand the truth, and they don't have the most basic understanding ability, what do you think?

It's torture for me, and even more so for you!

By the way, I also answered some questions that some book friends had raised,

[The three brothers and sisters of the Xiaoyao faction are all deep in internal strength and strong in martial arts, but except for Grandma Tong, the other two are not in love. This is the narration of the original text.

Pay attention to a piece of information: "The three brothers and sisters of the Xiaoyao faction" Li Qiushui has a sister who is true, but nowhere does it say that this is his little sister. This is not a concept, Grandma Tong finally saw the portrait and just said, "It's not her!" ”

This she is Li Qiushui.

And when Grandma Tong looked at the painting for the first time, she didn't see it at all, this was not Li Qiushui.

Original text: [Xuzhu took out the picture from his arms. The girl opened the scroll, and when she saw the beautiful woman in the palace costume in the picture, her face suddenly changed color, and she scolded: "He...... He wants this to pass on your martial arts! He...... When he was dying, he still remembered this cheap maid and painted her so beautifully! Suddenly his face was full of anger and jealousy, and he threw the picture to the ground, stretched out his foot and stepped on it.

Xuzhu shouted, "Ahh Hurriedly reached out and grabbed it. The girl said angrily, "Are you sorry? Xuzhu said: "It's a pity to have such a good picture, and it's a pity to step on it." The girl asked, "Who is this, did you tell you this little thief?" Xuzhu shook his head and said, "No." I thought, "Why did Mr. Wuyazi become a thief again?" ”

The girl said angrily: "Hmph, the thief is delusional, and he said that this cheap girl is still like this after decades!" Phew, even back then, how could she be so good-looking? ”】

So a few of them all show that there are only three brothers and sisters in the Xiaoyao faction, and Li Qiushui's sister is not a member of the Xiaoyao faction, otherwise Grandma Tong would not be unable to recognize "her little junior sister" when she looks at the painting for the first time, right?

Some plots, words in the book, you have to think about it a little, don't die reading!

This is like the Golden Wheel practiced the Dragon Elephant Prajna Gong to the tenth layer, many people said that he didn't know the Dragon Elephant Gong sixteen years ago, but he only spent sixteen years and never practiced to the tenth layer, reaching the point where no one had ever done it before.

also said with words: "Jin Yong didn't write, Jinlun will be a dragon elephant sixteen years ago, so it will never reach the tenth layer in sixteen years." ”

Hehe......

I just want to say, the brain is a good thing......

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