Chapter 29: Is That Essay Better Than Shen Nianchu's?
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On the table are stewed chicken with yam and red dates, steamed sea bass, stir-fried asparagus, cold beef and ants on the tree.
"Wow, today's dish is so hearty!" Chen Yuzao's eyes lit up.
"Your brother has been working the exam these days, so I deliberately made him more delicious food." Ruan Xiulian picked up the spoon and planned to serve a bowl of chicken soup to her son.
Chen Jiayu stretched out his hand to take it: "Mom, you rest, I'll come by myself." He asked while serving the soup, "By the way, Mom, why don't you ask me how I did in the exam?" ”
"The exams are all over, what is there to ask." Ruan Xiulian said with a smile, "Anyway, how well you do in the exam, my mother can accept it." As long as you work hard and do your best. ”
Chen Yuzao interjected: "Then I try my best every time I take the exam, why do you always think I didn't do well in the exam?" ”
It's good that she didn't speak, but as soon as she spoke, Ruan Xiulian remembered something, and she was angry, and scolded her with a slap in the face: "Did you do your best?" In addition to eating and sleeping all day during the summer vacation, I am painting, and how much of my mind is spent on studying? ”
"Let's just say how many points did you score in the final exam last semester? Count down to the class! It's still a normal class! ”
"What's even more annoying is that you are afraid of being scolded by me, so when you come back, you ask me first, 'Mom, why do other people's families have big houses, cars, and can travel abroad, why don't I have any family?' I said let's not compare ourselves with other people's families, just do our best. As a result, after I finished speaking, you took out the report card, 'Mom, I did my best, too.' You're so smart about this kind of thing, why can't you study?' ”
Ruan Xiulian snorted: "With your grades, it's enough to take the art exam!" I see, you'd better go to the market with me earlier to learn how to sell fish! ”
Chen Yuzao was not convinced: "Don't underestimate people, I must work hard and let you see if I am admitted." ”
"Okay, I'll wait!" Ruan Xiulian glanced at her, and then put a chicken leg into Chen Jiayu's soup bowl, "Come on, the chicken leg is for you." ”
Chen Yuzao was suddenly greedy: "Mom, I also want to drink chicken soup." ”
Ruan Xiulian was still angry, and glanced at her: "Don't you have any hands yourself?" ”
Chen Yuzao snorted, "Eccentric eyes!" ”
"Alright, I'll give you this bowl." Chen Jiayu pushed the soup in front of his sister.
"Thank you, brother, you're so nice, I love you!" Chen Yuzao immediately smiled, and made a gesture to Chen Jiayu through the air.
Chen Jiayu smiled.
Ruan Xiulian was very helpless: "Jiayu, if you do this again, you will spoil her!" Gluttonous and lazy all day long, what is it like! ”
"I'm greedy and lazy, I can only admit it, who made me such a sister." Chen Jiayu sighed, fished out another chicken leg from the soup, put it in Ruan Xiulian's bowl, and said with a smile: "It's okay, I'm used to you, who made you my mother!" ”
Seeing this, Ruan Xiulian finally couldn't hold back and laughed.
After eating, Chen Jiayu said something about making an appointment with Hou Zifan to play together. Ruan Xiulian nodded and said, "Go ahead, you should relax after the exam." ”
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On Saturday morning, the offices of the experimental high school were busy.
Although the test has ended, there are still follow-up tasks such as marking test papers and counting scores. In order for students to get a good score in the college entrance examination a year later, the teachers also put in a lot of energy and effort.
In the office of the Language Section.
Several Chinese teachers are immersed in grading the test papers, because the time is tight, and the workload is very large, so they also called some outstanding students in each class to help, and the students are responsible for counting the scores of objective questions and subjective questions, and then enter them into the computer for ranking.
The office was filled with the clatter of flipping rolls, the rustle of the tip of a pen across the paper, the subtle hum of the air conditioner, and the rapid and shrill chirping of cicadas outside the window. And Shen Nianchu was sitting at the table, carefully counting the scores of a stack of test papers.
After a while, a Chinese teacher named Jiang Jun pointed to the test paper in his hand and said to Li Yue at the adjacent table, "The paper of Shen Nianchu in your class has done a very good job, and the subjective questions have basically not lost points!" I've changed so many copies, she's the best! ”
Because it is a school test, there is no strict requirement for anonymous correction, and the teachers occasionally change to an excellent test paper, and they will also praise a few words to see which class it is a student.
Li Yue glanced at Shen Nianchu not far away with a smile, and his tone was complacent, "That's for sure, she is the representative of our class's Chinese class." ”
Shen Nianchu was slightly embarrassed, and only lowered his head and carefully calculated the score.
"I'll take a look at her essay again...... Well, the theme is clear, the arguments are clear, and the writing is quite beautiful. Jiang Jun said, "I think I can get a perfect score, what do you think?" ”
If a teacher gives an essay a high score of 58 or more, it needs to be approved by other marking teachers in order to finally get this score.
Hearing this, several other marking teachers came over and looked at Shen Nianchu's composition together.
"The volume is clean and tidy, and the handwriting is very delicate."
"Well, on the whole, it does look half a grade higher than other essays, and you can give full marks."
"It's a little more decently written, and there's nothing particularly impressive...... However, this time the composition is more difficult, and it is understandable. ”
"I agree to give it a perfect score."
Jiang Jun looked at Li Yue, who had never expressed his position: "Teacher Li, do you think it is appropriate to give a full score for this essay?" ”
Although Shen Nianchu didn't turn his head, there was a trace of expectation in his heart.
A few seconds later, she heard Li Yue sigh, and then said: "I invigilated her exam room at that time, in fact, there is another essay in the same exam room, I feel that it is written quite well, you should not have seen ......"
Shen Nianchu was slightly stunned.
"Huh?" Jiang Jun couldn't help but be surprised, "You mean, that essay is even better than Shen Nianchu's?" ”
Among several grading teachers, Li Yue's standard is the highest, and it is very rare for him to be able to give the comment "writing quite well".
"I'm not sure, but its angle is very novel, and I can see that the student's literary skills are still very deep......," Li Yue coughed lightly, "Although Shen Nianchu is a student I bring, I don't mean to say it favoritly, I personally feel that there is still a gap between Shen Nianchu's composition and that one." ”
Hearing this, several other teachers were even more curious.
"Which one?"
"Find out."
The movements in Shen Nianchu's hand couldn't help but slow down, and he couldn't help but think in his mind that there was anyone else in the examination room at that time who could get such an evaluation from Li Yue.
After flipping through the composition paper that everyone had not reviewed for a while, Li Yue finally took out one of them and handed it to Jiang Jun.
At the first glance, Jiang Jun sighed in surprise, "What a beautiful word!" ”