Mental journey
I saw a book friend ask me yesterday, is this a travel agency that writes? I'm sorry to tell you no.
At first, it was called "Stepping into Xiuzhen", but this name is relatively unfriendly to newcomers, and compared with the works of the same period, my name is simply ordinary to the extreme. So I changed my name.
In order to attract strangers, click on it to take a look.
Because of the name change, I always have to pull the main line to the travel agency, so I cut a large part of the plot, experienced book friends should know that after Yang Zhao came out of Cangcheng, there should be a stage of accumulation and upgrading to improve his own force value, so as to prepare for the next meteor shower, but in order to fast forward to get the key props, I cut this part. caused her to be aggrieved in the meteor shower, and I was very entangled in writing.
My writing is not good, the first time I wrote, I don't have much experience, I can't write anything cool, the plot drags on slowly, I want to speed up the pace, many small people's plots have been cut by me, such as the little guy in the old store of the Qian family in Cangcheng, I owe him a scene, he and the husband who was arrested by Fang Shuli is a father-son relationship, he is reluctant to destroy the good clothes when he sees them, but it is not good for the female tenant to sell them, he gives this dress to the father who is the husband, his father works at night, wears this clothes, no one can see it. He should go and apologize to Yang Zhao after the incident is over, Yang Zhao gave him a reward, and he took this reward money to apologize to Yang Zhao.
But no, there are too many such little characters I designed, and if everyone has his own behavioral logic, then the protagonist will not be revealed. There is a suspicion of the number of words in the water when he writes, and the little people can't give him too much ink, for a book, they are just NPCs.
Why am I so obsessed with these little people, because I am a small person in reality, and my behavior is also logical, I think very well when I don't write a book, although I can't write good works, but I must let these people do everything with their own logic? But as soon as I wrote it, I found that it didn't work, there are only a few protagonists in a book, you can't write the logic of everyone's behavior, especially for a slow-burning essay like mine, if you don't get into the main line quickly, no one will like to read it. I find that I still care more about how it feels to be a book reader who can read it.
But I communicated with the editor-in-chief, and my editor-in-chief is very good, he said that you can't change the name back, and it's not good for the novel to change the name often, but I don't have to cut the outline in general, if the name doesn't match the truth, the name doesn't match the truth, write at my pace first.
The luckiest thing for me was when I was a newbie, I met a good editor-in-chief, Hua Jiao, who impatiently answered my stupid questions one by one, telling me to write at my own pace and not be swayed by others.
So it's still the same question above, I'm sorry, I'm selling dog meat on the head of a sheep.
Travel agencies are not the point.