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I finally finished writing it, and although this story was already a mess from the story I originally wanted to write, I finally finished it, and I did it as best I could.

In fact, what I originally wanted to write was a story with clear stages, and maybe old readers may still have the impression that the title of this book was changed twice shortly after it was opened, and not only the title of the book, but also the outline.

Anyway, in the original outline, it contained a total of eight volumes of stories, each of which actually had its own events, just like the first and second volumes of the current book, which are also the only stories written according to the original outline.

And each volume has a reference style of film and television dramas, such as the first volume refers to "Fake Family", the second volume refers to "Admission Notice", the third volume refers to "Instructor Schmidt", the fourth volume refers to "Good Men Are Not Soldiers" and "Three-legged Cat Troops", the fifth volume refers to "Political Scuffle", the sixth volume refers to "Parks and Recreation", the seventh volume refers to "The Ugly Truth", and the eighth volume refers to "The Edge of the Political Situation" and "The Commander of the Three Armed Forces".

Maybe all the readers have something in common, that's right, the eight-volume story I originally envisioned, and all the film and television dramas with style references are absurd comedies.

But now when I look at the finished product, only the first two volumes retain a certain absurdist and comedic style, and the third volume begins to collapse directly.

In fact, looking back at the chapters of the second volume now, it can be vaguely seen that the third volume should not be the current content, because a lot of the foreshadowing written in the second volume is useless to the end of the book, such as Mr. Duffy, the godfather of Otilia, the recommendation letter of Mr. Governor mentioned, and the difference between the image of Otiria's father and the later plot, etc., all point to the fact that the original story should go to another development.

Although it is useless to talk about this now, I think it is necessary to sort out the direction of the previous story, even if it is a summary of the experience, so as not to make similar mistakes again.

In the original design, the third volume should be the protagonist with a letter of recommendation to study at West Point, is the story of the campus life and fraternity of West Point, why many readers think that the plot of the fraternity at the beginning of the third volume is too exaggerated, because the story is particularly distorted in Stanford, but it will be very appropriate to put it in West Point, I want to write a comedy story about the protagonist and a group of fraternity members who finally use all kinds of strange means and tactics to defeat the British cadets who have no lower limit than West Point, win the international military competition, and finally graduate with honors, It is a team of American cadets who thought they were already very shameless and very unmartial, and when they encountered British cadets who broke through the lower limit of human beings, the two sides confronted each other, and finally the American team relied on Tommy, a human, to win the victory.

The fourth volume is actually the story of the protagonist's overseas service, I wrote some with Dennis's identity, in fact, it is very simple, that is, Tommy Hawke took the platoon of heroes, braved the fire of war to go deep behind enemy lines in the war, robbed the enemy's bank, and made a war exploit at the same time, so that the soldiers under his command made a fortune The absurd story of a group of excellent soldiers, always scolded by their superiors when they obeyed orders, but when they were persuaded by the protagonist, they mustered up the courage to take risks, obviously committing robbery, but became heroes.

The fifth volume is the story of the expiration of the term of service, the protagonist does not want to join the army, and chooses to go back to Rhode Island to study political science, and the godfather of Otilia is running for the House of Representatives, and the protagonist joins the campaign team by chance, helping the other party plan the campaign plan and defeating the opponent's story, I also wrote part of the campaign as Jeff in the existing fourth volume, but because the original thinking has changed, no matter how you force the story to others, it will look weird, in fact, it was originally a variety of strange stories that happened in the campaign.

The sixth volume is about marrying Otilia, completing major life events, and Tommy being recommended by Otilia's godfather to enter the mayor's office of Providence as an assistant to the mayor, wiping the ass for the strange mayor, such as solving the sanitation workers' strike, the mayor's prostitution scandal, the disaster relief that hit the blizzard, etc., using various strange methods to solve all kinds of strange problems, and finally ending with writing that he is ready to run for the next mayor.

The seventh volume was written when Tommy was forty years old, when he was the governor of Rhode Island, and began to try to get the Republican Party to nominate him in the party, and met another female opponent in the party.

Volume 8 can be replaced by one sentence, in the 2008 general election, Tommy ran on behalf of the Republican Party, confronted Comrade Guanhai, and won.

wrote about Tommy's learning of the election results, his own victory, and then the full text ended, and no longer wrote the story of becoming president later.

There is no complicated and rigorous material, just one comedy story after another, and through Tommy's experience, I write some stories that I think should be quite funny.

But at that time, the editor said that if the story should be changed, it is best to go to business, write about entertainment, and not involve military and political affairs, and what's worse is that the book has been opened at that time, and it is difficult to ride a tiger, and I don't want to 404, so I can only change it temporarily, which also causes me to directly lose the control of the rhythm of the story, first of all, the third volume immediately returned to the style I was used to writing before, relying on Lao Ma's "The Wolf of Wall Street", I could barely hold on, but in fact, I was already unable to do it, and even forcibly used several speeches that should have been used in the election campaign to be used in the third volume.

At the beginning of the fourth volume, it was really Jiang Lang's end, I didn't have any data reserves, no plot direction, in fact, as early as the third volume, I already needed to check a large number of English data before coding words every day, and then turn the machine into completely unsmooth Chinese to try to recharge, by the time of the fourth volume, this state had already made me emaciated, plus my son began to get sick, busy running to the doctor every day, I didn't know what to write in the follow-up, I was completely thinking about how to round the fourth volume of the white devil, In fact, the title of the fourth volume is the White Devil, I just think this title is cool enough, and I don't have any ideas at all, and then I thought that nothing else matters, the important thing is to barely finish this story, don't care if it's good or not, and finish it right away.

Now, I can finally finish these three words in the full text and start the next story, in fact, I can't bear Tommy in the first two volumes, but I hate the rest of the story, so in fact, when I finish writing the whole text, I have mixed feelings.

But in any case, it's time to say goodbye to this book.

That's probably how this book was written.

To sum up, if you don't know English, try not to write about foreign themes, it's too tiring to check information, if you don't need to check the information, simply change the direction of the story temporarily, you may not be so caught.

So, in the next book, I'll write honestly about China, and after writing about Tommy in the United States, I want to write another story about China in the same era.

The date of the book should be in these few days.,Welcome to all uncles to watch.,What I can say is,The outline and character of the new book are completely done.,Add up to about 50,000 words.,Refer to 57 physical information books.,If there is no longer a problem of temporarily changing the direction of the story.,The outline of this volume,I think I should be able to write a wonderful story.。

Thank you, readers, for watching, and we'll see you next time.

Attached is a tentative brief introduction to the new book (handwritten, not representative of the finished product):

Reborn in 1978, Xie Hushan felt that he was only a small village chief, and the responsibility was all for the slander of the villagers.

Xie Hushan: I saw that comrade reporter looked at me wrongly, what did you tell people during the interview?

Villager A: I didn't say anything, but if I told the truth, I just said that our village chief has knowledge and has been to Hong Kong to go to Huan'er! The reporter was stupid at the time!

Xie Hushan: Who TM went to Hong Kong to go to Huan'er? I mean, I've been to Sheung Wan, Hong Kong! What else are you talking about?

Villager B: I also asked why we think you are willing to stay in the village and lead everyone to get rich instead of living in the city.

Xie Hushan: What did you say?

Villager C: I said he had to dare too? There is no village to protect it, so for the lack of virtue done by the village chief, he will leave the village in the morning and have a funeral at noon.

Title reference: "After being reborn, I still have to be a cow and a horse", "The ambiguous objects of the reborn were brainwashed into the history of blood and tears by a brain-dead crazy critic"

By the way, I finally recommend the new book "1982 Starts from Xiangjiang" by the dead eunuch who has been sleeping for many months