Talk about the previous chapter and update the issue
There were a lot of bad reviews in the last chapter.,I deleted some of the comments.,I'm sorry here.,Because the content of the comments is right.,It's my glass heart and deleted it for the sake of results.。
In the past few days, there are three shifts and 12,000 every day.
I will probably take three or four hours to revise a watch, after waking up at one o'clock in the afternoon, I basically started to code words after washing my face, I didn't eat, I drank two cups of coffee halfway, my head was a little dizzy, my thinking was not clear, and there were a little more sick sentences, I wanted to take advantage of the twelve o'clock before more than 12,000, the dish was in a hurry, the family scolded, and then I went back and revised it chapter by chapter.
The other is the basic plot line.
Is there so much foreshadowing, and then the way to break the game is not cool enough? While I try to emphasize the genre and style of the book, it is obviously not appropriate to use it as an explanation every time.
One could be a matter of experience.
The other is my understanding of the plot at this stage.
Although this plot is not over yet, the next chapter will explain a lot of the previous text in detail, but it has been roughly shown, and the end is a little bit of the fox's scheming, and the crow and Aunt Liu break the game.
So much foreshadowing? That's it?
The first feeling in the hearts of many old brothers should be this.
Yes, indeed.
It's obviously not cool enough, because my personal original intention for this plot was to let the fox get an accelerator, and then Liu Ting entered the game because of the fox, leading to the next stage plot about her.
Of course, I can also redesign, for example, make the golden finger a little bigger, let the fox explode the dragon force to break the game, and by the way, pretend to be a clever person, which is obviously much better.
But the details of the foreshadowing before, if I really wrote it like that, the fox's combat power after the explosion must at least be more than the same way, otherwise why would you pretend to be this force in front of a group of still empty?
Of course, it's not impossible to write.
It's just that after I wrote it, I went back and then restricted this explosive setting, looking forward to raising it, how to write it in the future, the restriction is not thorough, and it can be used frequently, so what's the point of the fox's cultivation in the early and middle stages? This also means the collapse of combat power and sense of expectation.
And the fox doesn't explode,
The one who finishes is either Liu Ting or the turtle master, there is no other candidate, the fox still relies on others, and it returns to the original point - not cool enough.
Yes, I admit it.
The stage of this plot is not for the fox, the fox's stage is in the mountains and seas, after obtaining the Ao Nu and the seal, you can straighten your waist and say that you are the prince of the mountains and seas, and the emperor of the local officials walking in the world.
Then the two tribes bowed their heads......
It's very good in my imagination, but it's just self-talk to say so much, and how every reader has a scale in their hearts, I'm just going to explain my journey as a creator.
Some agree, others may not.
It's very normal, writing and reading books itself is a two-way screening process, and I can only do my best to write this new genre well.
I'll try to make sure it's updated in the future.
Of course, in the case of not so much water and not so many mistakes and omissions, if there are less than 12,000 or 86,000 or something, you should be as patient as possible, basically either Kavin or something.
Fox I have no talent, but I am still very diligent, after all, as a man who has not saved a manuscript, I probably have to code words on Chinese New Year's Eve, and guarantee more than 10,000 more on the same day.
That's all,
Eat a bowl of dumplings and continue to code words. Latest URL: