I really couldn't take this book, because I couldn't pay the mortgage because of my poor grades, so I went out to pick up private work.

Some readers may know about this and some don't, but in fact, I went to work in other places.

It turned out to be a special aerial martial arts harem Shura field!

Let's have fun.

At that time, a friend of mine opened a studio and called me to help, saying that he was an editor-in-chief or something like that.

That cake was painted for me, so I just bought a high-speed rail ticket and killed it.

When I arrived, I found that there were few people at all, and I had to be responsible for recruiting people.

And then what?

Cooperate with the comic studio to draw comics, we will produce the script (and even storyboard), the other party will draw it, and then release it in Tencent Animation or Kuaikan, and then everyone will divide it.

Well, at the beginning, you had to bring the people you recruited first, but luckily I used to work when I was a photographer and a post-production master, so there was no problem.

As a result, when I chose the topic, I chose the genre of a martial arts harem Shura light comedy, and I was also convinced.

I can't escape this subject when I write an online article, why do I have to write this after changing careers?

After more than a month, I moistened.

After I ran it, I also tried to continue this book.,But the idea really can't keep up.,There's an update that doesn't match.,Of course, the follow-up updates are all free chapters.,I know I'm sorry everyone.。

Then I had to repay the mortgage, so I picked up the contact information of my friend before writing the online article and ran to write the official account.

Their official account is also engaged, but most of them are short and medium-length stories, and they are first-person perspectives.

For example, in one of the articles I wrote, the protagonist is a social animal in his early thirties, with a happy family or a small leader.

And where is the attraction?

It's about a new intern who has just graduated from college in the protagonist's company, and then he is young and enthusiastic, and then he goes on a business trip with the protagonist, and the two are a little ambiguous.

Then it was on the train sleeper, and the two faced each other.

The girl fell asleep, and the quilt spread out to expose her legs.

At this time, I will focus on describing how this leg looks good, and then there is the inner entanglement of the protagonist.

He longs for the youth and liveliness of his young subordinates, but he doesn't dare to take that step, and he feels sorry for his wife, who is at home but no longer passionate, which is the infinite entanglement in his heart and the self-blame of betraying morality in the first person.

It turned out to be pretty good...... And looking at the backstage, there are more female readers than male readers......

So I wrote another article about the same thing, only this time it was a female boss in her early thirties who had just graduated from college from the first point of view......

The results work better.

And more than 80 percent of readers are women.

But after thinking about it, maybe the online article is more suitable for me.

But I don't want to go on and on the streets, cut books, and disappoint people again.

Then you have to dissect the reasons for the failure and don't make the same mistake again.

In fact, there are many authors like me, who suddenly start to hit the streets at a certain stage, some of them are making a comeback, and some of them are slumping.

I kept thinking about why, and then I talked to a few friends who were also confused.

It turned out that we all got into the same horns.

That is, we reached a bottleneck in our results, and then we began to pursue breakthroughs.

So he was good at the early stage and began to pay attention to the later stage and foreshadowing, and began to pay attention to logic in a whimsical way.

The result is that the early stage is not good-looking, and readers can't wait for the later stage at all, so the early stage is also lost.

Pay attention to logic, which means that the spread is cool, and it is very bland.

When I look back at my previous books, they are full of imagination and ethereal spirit, but in fact, the logic is so bad that I can't read it.

I think I'm a lot better now than I was a few years ago, but I'm not doing as well as I did then.

But at that time, I was writing entertainment, and the protagonist went to the Oscars for the first movie with more than a dozen chapters, and then won a few awards.

But later I checked the information and found out that in addition to the foreign language film award, the other official awards of the Oscars are only for local films in North America...

But it didn't affect the results of that book.

So I started to observe and work with my friends to dissect what I was suitable for.

Then the problem was discovered.

The results I have made are invincible or pseudo-invincible.

That way I can write a good plot with a lot of imagination.

I'm not a good candidate for an upgrade essay because once I start writing an upgrade essay, I subconsciously want to foreshadow, I want to follow the logic.

For example, the protagonist is reluctant, and the first reaction when encountering the enemy is to solve the problem in a realistic and logical way.

Even because he doesn't know how to let the protagonist deal with the problem, the villain is not enough to pull hatred.

Maybe it's also a personality issue, but I have a relatively mild personality, so it's hard to write bad guys because I myself will be physically unwell.

I wrote a villain's plot before and showed it to a bigwig friend, and then he only replied to me with one sentence: "Lethe, you villain is not bad enough." ”

But that's already the worst villain I can imagine or even write...

So I always think that my idea is fine, but in the end, it is always unsatisfactory.

Because it's not the idea that's problematic, it's what I write.

Upgrade the flow, I will subconsciously press the protagonist, and then the outbreak is not cool enough, which will make the reader feel aggrieved.

I've also asked several readers how they've been doing with their last few books.

Their answers were all the same: "It's smooth, nothing poisonous, but it feels too bland, and the protagonist is a little depressed." ”

When I think about it, indeed, it's like this book, where the main character almost keeps running, always running, and can't run away.

Because I think the heroine is a big monster, the protagonist's reaction is normal and logical.

Yes, that's right, but it doesn't fit the web text.

So I'm never going to touch an upgrade again in my life.

By the way, one more point of the upgraded article.

Upgrade text,When you upgrade, you naturally want to press the protagonist.,So how can you be cool at this time?

According to my observation and analysis during this time, I came to the conclusion that if you want to take a "shortcut", you should open up a second career.

For example, doctors, talismans, array mages and the like.

Doctors are best.

For example, fantasy fairy martial arts, what should I do when the protagonist's martial arts are not up and he is still leveling?

Don't you write about the crisis?

What should I do if I don't meet the standards and don't recommend it?

Open a second profession, doctor.

The top masters on the rivers and lakes have been poisoned and injured, and no one else can be cured, only the protagonist can be cured!

The protagonist is cured, the fame is out, the status has risen, and the bigwigs are even polite to the protagonist.

Alternative invincible text.

At the stage when the protagonist's "hard power" is still being upgraded, rely on the "invincible" of the second profession to give readers a sense of security and refreshment to dispel the "grievances" and "depression" during the upgrade.

But I don't know how to write it, because no matter how you write it, it won't last long.

The final result is the One Punch Man kind, where the supporting characters meet the enemy story, and then they are abused, and finally the protagonist appears to finish.

Because once the protagonist is invincible, he can't be unknown to others, right? That's mentally retarded.

But you can't provoke the protagonist to shoot, right? What about the forced qualifications?

At this time, it will fall into a situation where the plot cannot be advanced.

(My idol squid is very classic, it is the essential conflict, such as doing the reduction of the short, or the doom catalogue and the mysterious, I just want to upgrade the pursuit of the avenue, you are in my way, I have no enmity with you, but in order to upgrade, it is your life and death, no way).

However, this kind of is too advanced and too difficult to write, and I can't control this kind of street fighting in a short period of time.

Then my friends, they woke me up.

"If it can't grow, it won't grow, at least there is a beginning and an end, write everything you want to write. Besides, you go write entertainment for the invincible article. ”

I thought to myself, what kind of invincible literature is entertainment?

Then they laughed, isn't entertainment an invincible article?

The protagonist goes from victory to victory, which entertainment protagonist with good results have you ever seen fail?

The protagonist carries a whole world of works, isn't it invincible when he appears?

Which entertainment protagonist "lost"?

The protagonist of the fantasy fairy and martial arts can not run away, leaving a sentence is just a strategic retreat, and when the future comeback, he will slaughter you all!

But entertainment is not good, as long as the protagonist of entertainment fails once, the book will be sent completely, and there is no room for maneuver, which is determined by the type of book.

Invincibility here refers to something essential, similar to the "realm", "combat effectiveness" and "hard power" in the fantasy fairytale.

The "upgrade" of entertainment is actually more similar to the upgrade of the added value of "money", "fame" and "status", rather than the upgrade of essence.

I was initiated.

Even they say that LOL e-sports articles are actually invincible articles.

Even if the EOL of the rhythm is pressed, it is the e-sports article that plays the ladder to the king of passers-by first, then abuses the anchor, then abuses the professional players, and finally beats the professional abuse of other teams, and then the top teams of other countries.

Who has ever seen bronze and then silver, and then gold, platinum, and diamonds?

Maybe we'll have to lose a few more games.

Anyway, I haven't seen it, if the protagonist of LOL e-sports article dares to lose, he doesn't win the championship...... Then this book is no different from being dead.

Their words made me unable to sleep in the middle of the night, so I will summarize and share it with you.

Although everyone may think that I have always been a eunuch or something..... In fact, it's just that I have a reputation that doesn't match myself because of other things.,Say something that offends people.,There are a lot of people who cut books than good grades.,A lot of them are cut in the updated ten thousand orders (of course, it's not a quibble that I'm okay to cut the book.,This beating has to be upright.,But certainly no one wants to cut the book.)。

So in order not to cut the book, I must write a book that can support myself and at least pay off the mortgage, otherwise I will have to ask my parents for money to pay off the mortgage when I am thirty years old...... I was really embarrassed and ashamed to die.

Then in order to produce results, you have to find problems and correct them.

The final conclusion is like this, because I can't sleep all night after discussing it for a long time, and it is estimated that many readers and even the author will be confused, so I will take out some of my insights for your reference, and it may not be right, everyone will have their own thoughts.

It's just that readers will read the book in the future, and maybe they can also summarize a set of theories, so that the comments will be more reasonable.

Think about it, you didn't spray people, but made a reasonable comment, and then the author wanted to refute and find a reason... Hee-hee~

It is estimated that only the bear will be able to spread his hands .jpg then.

Now that I've summarized it, I'm sure I'll have to write entertainment in the next book to see if this perception is correct (provided that I'm not biased).

It doesn't have to be when to write, it's not necessarily when to send it, and it's not necessarily that you can't open the vest.

But I guess most readers won't read it, and there are so many good-looking books at the starting point, and there is no shortage of me hitting the street.

Anyway, that's it, my heart is eager to share, and I'm going to sleep.

Good morning, good afternoon, and good night everybody.