Shen Xixiong is the edited version of Han Zhou that I watched in the morning.

As a director, Shen Xixiong clearly found that Han Zhou's editing was to rewrite a story by himself, and then use the footage taken by Tan Ailin and Han Jiaxin to make puzzles one by one and put the movie together.

Fortunately, Erin Tan is so dish, and all the seasons expressed in the lenses, clothes, and costumes are the same season.

Otherwise, it really can't be edited.

Although the clothes are mixed, the audience may not care about this, after all, it is normal to wash and change clothes.

When Shen Xixiong watched the original version before, he couldn't tell what story the movie wrote at all.

But now, there is a main line.

The story is actually very simple, Ding Qian, an older single white-collar urban woman, meets her college lover Zhou He at work, awakening her memories of campus life.

At the beginning, Ding Qian was a cheerful girl, and she hoped that after she entered the college campus, she would be able to start dating her childhood sweetheart's neighbor brother Chu Chen and become a real couple.

However, Chu Chen suddenly said goodbye without saying goodbye, and there has been no news since then.

At this time, Ding Qian regained her happiness with the help of several roommates and gained friendship.

The story begins with a quarrel, Ding Qian grabs the phone with Zhou He, who she doesn't know, in a phone booth, and breaks the architectural model made by Zhou He during the quarrel.

Zhou He was hot-headed and pushed Ding Qian.

Ding Qian, who has never been pampered, has suffered this kind of grievance, so she wants to seek revenge on Zhou He, and her way of revenge is to knock over Zhou He's dinner plate every time, so that he can't eat.

Zhou He knew that he was impulsive that day, so he could only endure it.

However, after one time and another, Zhou He broke out, and the reason was not because Ding Qian spilled his own rice and made him angry.

What makes him angry is that there are many people in this world who can't afford to eat at all, Zhou He himself is one of them, Zhou He's parents have to lift an unknown number of bars in the construction site to make up the tuition fees, let alone talk about living expenses.

Zhou He can tolerate that he can't eat because he did something wrong, but he can't tolerate this kind of revenge by wasting food.

Ding Qian suddenly realized that it seemed very bad for her to do this.

At such a youthful age, this curiosity born of hatred soon turned into love.

Ding Qian found out that she liked this boy, so she stalked him like crazy.

The two also became lovers.

Approaching graduation, when the two chose a job, Ding Qian was full of joy planning for the future.

didn't know that Zhou He wanted to study abroad, and as a poor born, he just wanted to climb up.

At this time, Ding Qian's four-year bedmate had a car accident.

Ding Qian lost love and friendship, and suddenly felt that life was impermanent, and everything was out of her control.

After many years, Ding Qian met Chu Chen, a childhood sweetheart, and only then did she figure out one thing.

It turned out that Chu Chen once bumped into Ding Qian's mother cheating on her father, so Chu Chen couldn't accept the daughter of a woman who destroyed his family, so he chose not to say goodbye.

After understanding this matter, Ding Qian decided to fall in love with her childhood sweetheart Chu Chen's brother again.

And Chu Chen still couldn't accept this love.

At this time, Zhou He, who had become a well-known designer, returned to the city.

Because of the relationship at work, Ding Qian and Zhou He met again.

is also saying goodbye without saying goodbye, one is because he can't accept love, and the other is because he can't face parting.

This time, Chu Chen still didn't want to accept Ding Qian, and Zhou He wanted to regain his youth.

At the end of the story, Ding Qian and Chu Chen became husband and wife.

Although Chu Chen is not as good as he remembers, because of family reasons, he has a lot of bad habits and has a desire to control.

Although Zhou He, who looked greasy in college, is now refreshing and more handsome, and he has become famous.

But Ding Qian still chose Chu Chen.

Because Chu Chen once taught Ding Qian to love, and when he met Zhou He, Ding Qian learned to love someone.

Looking back, Ding Qian found that what Zhou He lacked was not love, but Chu Chen was the one who lacked love.

This is how youth passed.

This plot is similar to "To Our Dying Youth" in the previous life.

It is similar to the version of ninety out of five.

In the end of the original version, the heroine chose her childhood sweetheart's brother, but in the original movie, the heroine did not choose so.

But to be honest, this version, in terms of the presentation of the small plot, is better than the original version, the original director has no aesthetic ability, and he has no writing skills, although Han Jiaxin has a poor main line, but the text is really small, and some lines can touch people's hearts after filming.

But after Han Zhou edited, the main plot of this movie is still not as good as the original version.

Because no matter how much you edit, it is impossible to make up the plot seamlessly.

It's like, a person stews a pot of chicken soup, the soup is bland, and the chicken is also cooked and can't be eaten.

Another person took out the chicken and added a lot of seasoning to make it taste very good, but it was impossible to turn the boiled chicken into a beautiful cold chicken lump.

Therefore, Han Zhou specially remarked where useless empty shots were used, or character detail shots, and it was necessary to use voiceover to complete the main story.

After watching it, Shen Xixiong felt that this movie could sell a lot of money!

Furthermore, I seem to be able to win a prize!

This......

Why did a garbage movie become a golden cake as soon as it was edited in Han Zhou's hands?

It's not scientific!!

But this is not Shen Xixiong's biggest doubt.

Shen Xixiong's biggest doubt is......

"Hey, Han Zhou, what do you mean by your childhood sweethearts?"

Han Zhou was stunned for a moment and responded: "The two childhood sweethearts are a pair of men and women who grew up together since childhood, and then ......"

Speaking of which, Han Zhou's brain memory searched out something made Han Zhou understand why Shen Xixiong asked this question.

These two idioms come from Li Bai's poem "Long Dry Travel":

[Lang rode a bamboo horse and went around the bed to make green plums.

Living together for a long time, the two have no suspicion. 】

There is no Li Bai in this world at all.

Therefore, it can only be interpreted literally, without the effect of idiom allusions.

However, the literal meaning seems to be the same thing, so it doesn't matter if you use it directly.

Shen Xixiong: "Oh, it's literal, isn't it, isn't it too jerky, and the audience can't understand it?" ”

Han Zhou: "Don't look too high at the audience, but don't look too low at the audience either." ”

Shen Xixiong thought for a moment: "I'll send your edited version to Tan Ailin, and come to my house for dinner in the evening, and Tan Ailin and Han Jiaxin will come at that time." ”

Han Zhou calculated the time, tonight, the Spring Festival file is over, and tonight is quite important for "Kung Fu".

"I'll stay until ten o'clock at most, and I have to leave after ten o'clock."

Shen Xixiong: "Ten o'clock? Thinking beautifully, I go to bed at half past nine every day and finish my meal at half past eight at most. ”

Han Zhou smiled awkwardly: "That's not quite suitable, okay." ”

……

In front of the computer, Tan Erin and Han Jiaxin finished watching the movie.

The two looked at each other.

Very confused.

Erin Tan: Is this my movie?

Han Jiaxin: Is this the story I wrote?

Both of them saw confusion in each other's eyes.

Erin Tan: "Or...... Let's switch careers......"

Han Jiaxin nodded: "I think too." ”

It's not that Han Jiaxin doesn't want to write this story smoothly.

However, she really couldn't.

She wanted to express the regret of her youth.

And Tan Ailin wants to express the beauty of youth.

She wanted to express the stumbling of youth.

And Tan Erin wants to express the vitality of youth.

Both of them have a lot to say.

Let Han Jiaxin write a purely good-looking story that doesn't express anything, Han Jiaxin can do it.

But after having a lot of subject restrictions, Han Jiaxin couldn't do it.

Originally, the script was bad enough, and Tan Ailin still had to use her turtle foot technique to shoot it, that is, on the crooked foundation, a building with three pillars and four walls was built.

This building can be seen to be a building, and it is already the other staff of the crew.

It's like a sentence on the Internet: 'Looking at the female driver's car accident, you will wonder if she has spent money on the second and third subjects.' ’

"And looking at the male driver's car accident, you will wonder if he is illiterate, and the fourth subject is blind."

Most of the car accidents of female drivers are a problem of driving ability.

Most of the car accidents of male drivers are not in accordance with the traffic rules.

It's the same with filmmaking.

If a female director smashes the film, nine times out of ten it is because she is not proficient in directing skills.

And if the male director smashes up, nine times out of ten he is blindly confident in the market.

The only thing that is the same is that the crash scene is all ugly.

If this movie, the original version, is released, it will actually have no impact on Tan Erin and Han Jiaxin at all.

Because there are people who can 'understand' movies that they can't understand.

People who 'understand' will say: this movie is not for ordinary people, so it is art.

Then take a few awards, make the audience doubt life, and then 'the emperor's new clothes'.

Then after ten or eight years of it, there was finally a 'big smart' who interpreted this movie.

In an instant, a lot of people came out. That's what it means! ’

'Awesome! ’

No wonder it won the prize! ’

But the problem is that now, someone has changed something that no one can understand, and it has become something that anyone can understand.

That's a bit ...... It hurts so much self-esteem!

Tan Ailin and Han Jiaxin lost themselves eight hundred years earlier in the beep of the cow, and they couldn't find the north.

After all, these two are put together, and most of them are investors who make movies for them at a loss.

And the organizing committee of the film festival sees them as if they see their aunts and grandmothers...... No, it's closer than my aunt and grandmother!

Two women who don't know the height of the sky have always thought, ouch, it turns out that this is art?

Although I don't understand it very well, but I made art, which shows that this is talent, it doesn't matter if I understand it or not, making a movie, isn't it just to see the will of God?

Providence has arrived, and it's hard to think of awards!

Today, they suddenly understood something.

That's what I shot before, dog! Fart! No! Open!

A young man of twenty-four, without a team and alone, writes a new story.

Then I used the shots taken by the two of them that I couldn't understand what the story was, and edited this new story.

And then all of a sudden it was understood.

After Tan Erin and Han Jiaxin communicated with each other, they immediately realized that something was wrong with them.

Everyone agrees that cursive writing is an art, and ordinary people can't understand the characters of cursive saints in history.

But there is absolutely no such thing as someone subtracting each word and reordering it, and everyone will understand it.

Because every word of Caosheng is art, you need to understand this line to know how awesome this word is.

And myself, in fact, every word I write, ordinary people know, but together, it doesn't make sense.

Now someone has cut out every word, spelled out a pair of words with it, and written a story that is enough to conquer the reader.

Is it because the words are well written?

This has a fart to do with whether the word is good or not!

After the two realized that they had a lot of dishes, they were a little emotional.

Erin Tan: "This kid is very nosy." ”

Han Jiaxin: "Add some blockage to him." ”

Erin Tan: "What do you say? ”

Han Jiaxin: "Mountain people have their own clever plans!" ”

……

Shen Xixiong's house.

Shen Xixiong's wife brought out a table of dishes.

Han Jiaxin: "Oh, it's so fragrant, Aunt Long!" ”

Shen Xixiong's wife: "Haha, the craftsmanship has not regressed, right?" I'm used to eating in the canteen, and I haven't cooked for a long time. ”

Erin Tan: "It's so fragrant! ”

Han Zhou felt that he had a cold, where was the fragrance?

Shen Xixiong held back a smile.

Shen Xixiong's wife, Aunt Long: "Xiao Han, just treat this as your own home, don't be restrained." ”

Han Zhou: "Then I can't help it!" ”

Han Zhou rushed to the kitchen and began to crackle.

Then he came out with a plate of scrambled eggs with tomatoes and poured his rice on top.

Han Jiaxin looked at the tomato scrambled eggs, and the chopsticks stretched out.

Han Zhou opened Han Jiaxin's chopsticks: "Sister, this is my bowl!" ”

"Why did you put vegetables in other people's bowls!"

Han Jiaxin was angry: "Am I old? ”

To be honest, thirty-eight years old is quite old, but for women in the circle, it is still early, and Han Jiaxin looks like she is twenty-eight or nine.

Han Zhou: "Everyone knows that Fourth Uncle Han is my fourth uncle, and you are my eldest sister, isn't it right to call me eldest sister?" ”

Tan Erin: "Your eldest sister eats your dishes, isn't it a matter of course?" ”

Han Jiaxin nodded: "Yes, yes, this dish has been confiscated." ”

Aunt Long actually doesn't care, she knows that she can't cook well.

But when she went to Shen Xixiong's house to eat, was it her Aunt Long's craftsmanship to eat? No.

After being aggrieved for a long time, Han Zhou didn't seem to want to eat.

Han Jiaxin and Tan Ailin ate the scrambled eggs with tomatoes, and ate a lot of Aunt Long's dishes by the way.

Han Jiaxin smiled: "Oops, it's delicious." ”

Tan Ailin: "The craftsmanship is good, and she is worthy of being from Shu Province." ”

Han Zhou smiled: "It's good that the two sisters are happy." ”

Aunt Long: "Why is the range hood still ringing, did you forget to turn it off?" ”

Han Zhou got up: "I'll go to Guan." ”

When Han Zhou went and returned, he carried a pot of steamed sea bass: "Oh, Aunt Long, I can't help but steam it when I see that you have a fish." ”

Han Jiaxin, Tan Ailin: "???!!! ”

Han Zhou: "Have you eaten enough?" Would you like to have some? ”

"You're welcome."

Shen Xixiong: "Fortunately, I have a big belly. ”

Han Zhou: "Fish head or tail?" ”

Shen Xixiong: "What are you talking about?" Can't you choose your belly? ”

Han Zhou: "Elderly people eat too fat, it's unhealthy. ”

Aunt Long laughed.

Shen Xixiong: "......"

"Come on."

When Han Zhou was eating, Han Jiaxin: "Aunt Long, my brother is good, right?" ”

Aunt Long smiled: "The young man is a talent, I heard Lao Shen say that now a director under the age of forty is his highest box office?" ”

Han Zhou: "Low-key and low-key, the highest single unit, in total, there are seven or eight people who are taller than me." ”

Aunt Long smiled: "Amazing, talent." ”

Han Jiaxin: "That's it, my younger brother, is very good at making movies, and the ratings of programs are also high, and he is the first person in TV series ratings, he is handsome, he sings well, he can also write songs, and he also wrote two songs for our new movie, which is amazing!" ”

Han Zhou sandwiched a piece of fish meat: "There is a charge." ”

Han Jiaxin continued: "Aunt Long, look, this cooking skill is good, the sea bass is steamed, just like a garlic clove, just like the level of a hotel master." ”

Han Zhou: "Accept and concede, just do whatever you want." ”

It's really not modest, the last time Han Zhou cooked by himself, it was a matter of the third year of high school.

However, the familiarity of this world, coupled with the deep memory of the previous life, is combined into one, and it is still a simple dish to make steaming.

Han Jiaxin smiled: "I think he and Qiqi are a special match." ”

Han Zhou: "??? ”

Qiqi? Shen Xixiong's daughter? Old and female?

Aunt Long laughed: "Qi Qi is only in her third year of high school." ”

Han Jiaxin had the expression of three aunts and six mothers-in-law: "It's better to be older, you will feel sorry for people and take care of people!" ”

Aunt Long: "That's not bad, boys, it doesn't matter how old the big girl is." ”

Aunt Long looked at Han Zhou, that was the mother-in-law who looked at her son-in-law, the more pleasing it became.

Tan Ailin: "Aunt Long, don't you know, how many girls at Qiqi's age don't like Han Zhou?" ”

"You don't believe me, call and ask."

Aunt Long: "Qiqi is still in school, studying by herself tonight." ”

is worthy of being a senior in high school, even if it is the daughter of the head of the central mother, she has to attend classes during the Spring Festival.

Han Zhou understands what's going on, messing around with the mandarin duck spectrum, right?

Han Zhou: "This is really bad, everyone knows that I have a girlfriend." ”

Shen Xixiong: "That's it, everyone with eyes knows that you and the little girl of the An family are having an affair." The audience can see it, and it will be officially announced. ”

Aunt Long didn't understand the entertainment industry, and looked at Shen Xixiong: "Really?" ”

Han Jiaxin: "Oh, it's a scandal, it can't be true." ”

"I don't believe you ask Han Zhou, he definitely didn't fall in love with An Lan."

Han Zhou looks like Han Jiaxin, this woman is really holding a handle, Han Zhou really doesn't dare to admit it!

Han Zhou was thinking, this movie may not be powerful enough to be edited into "To Our Dying Youth", can you change it and edit it into "Love to the End"?

Han Zhou looked at Aunt Long and smiled: "Auntie, you don't have to go to see the hen when you eat eggs." ”

"Children like to blindly like celebrities."

"Director Shen knows who celebrities are."

"I'm not a good thing, don't."

Han Jiaxin never expected that Han Zhou personally said that he was not a good thing.

Aunt Long doesn't understand the entertainment industry, but she's not stupid, but she's also very curious, such an honest child, honestly saying that she is not a good thing, what has she done?

Seeing Aunt Long's doubts, Han Zhou: ""Mo Evil Sword" knows, it will be screened, because it is my only opponent, and I will give it a whole screening." ”

Aunt Long: "Then why don't you make the Inner World a whole picture?" ”

Han Zhou: "Because the inner world was introduced by An Lan's family, and the speedrun group in the United States now has a cooperative relationship with me, dozens of young employees, directors and screenwriters are studying with them. ”

Aunt Long nodded: "You are an honest child, it is better to be bad than bad." ”

Han Zhou turned his head to look at Han Jiaxin and smiled: "I have an outline, can you write it into a movie?" ”

What is Han Jiaxin's strength? The short story is well written.

To put it bluntly, the writing is good.

What are the weaknesses? Write the main line poorly.

To put it bluntly, there is no logic.

However, Han Zhou gave the outline, asked her to complete it, and then changed it herself, wouldn't it be done?

In fact, Han Jiaxin is the most suitable screenwriter for the new world.

Today, this eldest sister is messing with the mandarin duck spectrum, isn't she angry that she was punctured with a dream bubble? However, being able to be wrapped in this sugar-coated cannonball for more than ten years shows that she is not deep in thought.

It's easy to solve, find her something to do, and everything will be settled.

Tan Erin gave Han Jiaxin a hard look.

However, Han Jiaxin had just added Han Zhou's micro-information, received a document, and looked at it intently.

Soon, Han Jiaxin looked up at Han Zhou in shock.

The outline of the script about medicine above, Han Jiaxin feels that she will not be able to write one percent of its shock in her life.

However, there is a lot of room for this thing to be made into a script!

Han Jiaxin thought about it directly.

Erin Tan: "??? ”

Mutiny?

Han Zhou looked at Tan Ailin: "I have a powerful photographer friend, and maybe Yao plans to shoot an urban romantic drama about a savage girl and a boy falling in love." ”

"The starring roles are tentatively Lu Jin and Shan Kokou."

"Are you interested in being a director?"

Han Zhou has seen Erin Tan's movie, which is equivalent to seeing this person.

This kind of movie style, this person is too easy to guess.

Yan Kong, the actors in her movie are all good-looking.

Lu Jin is the most suitable for her movie, and Lu Jin and Shan Kokou starred in Gongsun Ce and Pang Feiyan, both in terms of fame and acting skills, they are well-known at this stage.

Tan Ailin likes to take the ingredients to cook, although she always makes a pot of honeycomb coal.

This kind of thing, she can't refuse.

Tan Erin was puzzled: "A great photographer, transformed into a director?" You're not talking about Chen Dayong, right? ”

"Not interested."

Han Zhou knew that this woman was not interested.

Tan Erin has a very perverted habit and likes to be a matchmaker.

And it's the internal connection of the crew.

It seems that this kind of thing makes her feel a sense of accomplishment.

Chen Dayong, who has a family and a room, has no chance when he comes to her.

So, Han Zhou: "Chen Xiaoyong." ”

Tan Erin felt that her subclass task had been activated, and there was a huge question mark above her head, and a scroll was slowly opening!

Shen Xixiong was very serious: "Go ahead." ”

"Actually, you're the best fit for this job."

Tan Erin was stunned.

Shen Xixiong: "You can learn everything that directors should learn, but you won't use them yourself." ”

"A powerful photographer like Chen Xiaoyong, he can string together the skills needed to make movies, but he can't do many things."

"You work together, maybe it's good for both of you."

Shen Xixiong is Tan Ailin's master who kowtowed, the master spoke, and Tan Ailin borrowed the slope to get off the donkey: "Okay, I'll come." ”

Han Zhou looked at his watch: "I've been busy editing movies these days, and I haven't been back to the company much, so I have to go back to Aunt Long." ”

"Director Shen, see you next time!"

Aunt Long smiled: "What is the director, follow your eldest sister Jiaxin to shout, just call Uncle Shen." ”

Han Zhou: "Uncle Shen......"

These three words reminded him of a comedian with a perennial back injury in his previous life.

Shen Xixiong smiled: "Go ahead, the seven-day box office data of the Spring Festival file of "Kung Fu" has come out, and it is time to adjust the publicity plan." ”

Han Zhou picked up his coat and put it on, and turned his head to look at Tan Ailin and Han Jiaxin: ""To Our Dying Youth" will make up the narration according to the plan I wrote, and it will be released in the summer vacation, rushing to 700 million, and it can be done if you don't get 800 million. ”

"If you win the award, don't thank me on stage, it's my business."

After Han Zhou left, Tan Ailin looked at Han Jiaxin: "How much is the box office of the six movies we worked on?" ”

Han Jiaxin opened the calculator on her mobile phone: "I calculate ......"

"Seven million and eighty thousand ......"

Seven million and eighty thousand, and eight hundred million for protection......

Erin Tan: "It's humiliating ......"

Han Jiaxin: "......"

"Don't thank him for winning the award, I have to thank him, thank him hard, let others know that he wrote the main script and edited it."

"Give him the position of executive director, No. 1 screenwriter, and chief editor!"

Erin Tan: "Yes! Don't let us mention him, we have to mention him! ”

Shen Xixiong: "Okay, you two, people who are almost forty years old, how can they be like children." ”

"It's just that Han Zhou doesn't care about you, if he is ruthless, don't do this in the future."

"And you can't offend Han Laosi and Tan Laowu, do you believe it or not?"

Aunt Long now understood what Han Zhou meant when he said that he was not a good person.

Han Jiaxin's mind returned to her new job: "Seven hundred million? I don't know how much box office he is going to win in this outline? This outline should lose money when it is filmed, right? ”

Tan Ailin: "I don't know which one I'm going to film, he's ready to pay hundreds of millions." ”

"In order to support Lu Jin, I went out."

Shen Xixiong was silent.

Han Zhou? Loss? Money? What this guy took out, can he lose money? Unless the day before the release of his movie, aliens called and bombed all the movie theaters on Earth, otherwise...... It's impossible to lose!

Ask for a commuter pass!

When I wrote 3,000 words, my eyes were full of stars, and the screen was full of flowers, and I didn't have a good rest today, so that's it.

Happy weekend book friends!