The main line of "Deep Sea" has been revised many times since the opening of the book, so let's introduce the main line of this book.

The bright line is the career line, that is, the protagonist's level increases; The dark line is the brainwashing line, that is, the gradual brainwashing of the gods and the resistance of the protagonist, and the other branches are skipped.

The game has a version for 14 days, 7 days in the game and 7 days in the real world.

Due to the lack of experience in writing books, reality has touched the red line many times, and some plots have to be cut, the main line has changed, and even the setting has to be changed.

In this book, presumably the characters that everyone cares about the most, Xiao Hao, Qiu Chengnan and Ji Zhi.

Let's talk about the original main line that breaks everyone's heart, in the original main line, there is actually no role of Qiu Chengnan...

The original plot design, in addition to the escalation of the other world, the protagonist's revenge against the evil forces in reality is a great refreshment, however, the protagonist's revenge is not to use unrivaled power to forcibly crush, because this will stand on the opposite side of the positive forces, but to take a battle of wit.

In the past, evil forces tortured the protagonist within the scope of legality.

Now, it's the protagonist who tortures the evil forces within the limits of legality.

In order to make the character's actions legal, I worked overtime to study criminal law with Mr. Luo...

However, after the main line was decided, the book was opened, the contract was signed, the red line was touched again and again, and the revisions were revised again and again, only to know that these could not be written... Because I'm afraid that someone will imitate it.

So there was a turning point in a certain period of time in the book, and it looked a little abrupt, but there was no way, otherwise the book would not have been published.

In order to make the plot reasonable, the part that can't be written can only be handed over to a new character to do - Qiu Chengnan, I regard him as the second personality of the protagonist's differentiation.

The protagonist has a good side as well as a fierce side.

The side of revenge against the evil forces can't be written, and the protagonist looks a little too kind... In fact, it has been introduced in the book that how the protagonist wants to take revenge on the evil forces is just given to Qiu Chengnan.

After the new book opened, the background data was cool, and it has been in the state of stand-alone codewords, and the single-machine code has millions of words, all of which are set to 0, and the whole book is written, all of which are set to 8, and the paid platform for which I send the book, on average, there are 8 people who are willing to pay for it completely, special thanks to these people, thank you, bow!

Here is a special thank you to the two readers who gave tips, tonight's lights are faint and ts Tian Mofan 01, thank you very much! They don't know that for an author who has never had results, suddenly seeing someone to support him, he was so moved that his eyes were red ...

At that time, there was no channel data in the author's background, and there was no information about the channel, so I never knew that the channel had come out. I doubted myself and was ready to find a class, no longer delusional about writing books, and pinching out my dream of being a writer.

Originally, I couldn't hold on to wanting to cut the book, just about a million words, but fortunately, the editor reminded me that I knew that the results in the channel were okay, so I had the motivation to write down.

Here is also a special thank you to the readers who like this book in the free channel, and I am very grateful to Godzilla Patriarch and other friends who have rewarded and praised (there are too many friends who have rewarded here, and I can't type them all, please forgive me (; ́д「)ゞ), really thank you, the night I knew the results of the channel, I was so excited that I couldn't sleep all night...

Although the whole book is almost finished (I have a habit of saving manuscripts, and when I publish a million words, I also save two or three hundred thousand words at the same time), I know that the channel has been released... I'm slow enough, too.

also because of the lack of results, the quality of the book has declined a little in the middle of the book, the plot progresses extremely fast, and some wonderful episodes have not been written in order to quickly pass the plot.

The whole book is written by one person, there is no second author, here is a rumor, and I have never swiped the ticket and score, because I don't know where to go to brush the channel at all...

After knowing the channel, I naturally read the comments, and when I saw so many scoldings, my mentality was not good at that time.

After adjusting for a while, I tried to slap the sunspot in the book, but I felt that it hurt normal readers by mistake... I think I have a problem, and I shouldn't focus on Kuroko, but on readers who like the book.

So, my attention shifted to readers who liked it, and found that everyone was stumbling weird...

This is a bit outrageous, reading reviews in male frequency books, it is rare to feel that there are more female readers than male readers... Everyone was so excited that my heart was twisted into the appearance of a reader.

What else can I do, my own readers, pet, the author takes the lead in gradually metamorphosing [dog head].

The twenty-five-year-old young man with the mother's fetus solo turned into light with everyone, taking the lead in wandering on the edge of the danger of pouting and being pouted, and repeatedly jumping sideways on the edge of the abyss.

People can't break through the bottom line, and once they break through the bottom line, they will gradually slide into the abyss of true fragrance... took the lead in P with readers, and I felt quite emotional... No, I want to keep the bottom line, people can't, at least shouldn't!

If you don't like p, you can also eat it with confidence.,The main line of this book、Dark lines, etc.,It's not an emotional line.,The protagonist is stand-alone.,Qiu Chengnan's brotherhood as a comrade-in-arms of life and death is no problem.,The final return to the past at the end of the he,Inspiration comes from "hugging the child in the depths of your heart",Some experiences should be understandable.。

Heavy skipping, cheerful, knocking, come, pervert with me [dog's head].

It is important to emphasize that friends who are full of anger, if you have to vent your negative emotions, you can rush to the book, or you can come to me, no matter whether it is good or bad, accept it all, just don't affect my readers, and don't deliberately be yin and yang under the praise.

Regarding the "embarrassment" of the book, everyone feels a little embarrassed, don't panic, the author accompanies you, the family who writes the book knows, seeing the interaction of the main and supporting characters I wrote, I feel that it is called a sour every day...

The first half is the process of writing a book, and the second half explains the idea of writing a book and answers some "poison point" questions.

I want to write more refreshingly, and I also want to arouse the four emotions of "joy, anger, sorrow, and fear".

Among them, there was a problem with the plot design of "Anger", so there was a blockbuster "poison point" evaluation.

Here is some explanation for you.

1. Why does the dragon kingdom "not act"?

Answer: The Dragon Kingdom is not inactive, the resourceful characters such as the Dragon Kingdom Wisdom Group and Jizhi are the same as the protagonists, and they know the game of the gods early, they dare not show this kind of "action", they can only show weakness, and can only let the protagonist attract the attention of the gods and develop obscenely behind their backs.

The barrage is not unique to the protagonist alone.,I can see the barrage when I know it.,There are a few other characters too.,It's just that they didn't last until the later stage and died.。

Actually, there is an explanation in the original text, but the early explanation is too small and is ignored, and the later explanation is a little longer...

2. Why do you let the little shrimp jump? Why is the protagonist so "generous"?

A: It has been explained many times in the book since the early stage that the game of the protagonist is a show of the gods, and the game should pay attention to the balance of the game.

Everyone sees the protagonist's reasoning at the beginning when he sees Xiao Xiami, which proves that the protagonist has a brain, and he has countless ways to kill him, even if he is in the protagonist's safe house.

But the problem is that Liu Yonghui was pushed out by the gods, that is, he was asked to occupy the protagonist's safe house, and the focus was not on this little shrimp, but on the gods.

What the protagonist can't fight is the gods, and when he is weak, he has to compromise.

The game version of Little Shrimp Jumping, the entire game version is the "game difficulty" that he should face, he can't kill Liu Yonghui by tricks, otherwise the show of the gods will not be good-looking, and the protagonist will face a catastrophe.

It can be seen that Liu Yonghui can only jump in one version, and when time passes to the next version, the "game difficulty" corresponding to the protagonist is eliminated, and this product will be erased as soon as possible.

He was "helpless" before, all because he was live broadcasting, and many times, he had to deceive himself in order to deceive the audience.

The higher the capital and the higher the combat effectiveness of the protagonist, the more difficult the corresponding version of the game will be, so the protagonist's investment behavior also has this consideration, which also has foreshadowing, and there is more than one place.

The protagonist not only has to help the dragon kingdom, but also takes the initiative to weaken his own strength and some capital, and his actions have always had hidden meanings, like giving away the dragon's blood.

The original text mentions that the gods are "sure that the protagonist will not get this version of the game Easter eggs, so these exaggerated rewards will be released". A bottle of dragon bloodline is already equivalent to an easter egg, and the Lord

The horn got so many easter eggs at one time, which was unexpected by the gods, and at the same time, it was also a hot potato.

He can only use one bottle at most, and only one. Dare to use it more, the next game version is the plot kill level, and you will definitely die.

Later in the plot, it is mentioned that "his acting skills deceived everyone, and he also deceived himself", this "deception" is not just a simple god war.

From the perspective of game balance, these are logical, but the plot design is still not clever enough, or there are writing problems, so readers will think that it is a "poison point", and I will continue to work hard to improve the writing and strive to write better.

3. Why is the elimination of evil forces so crotch-pulling?

The evil forces are an international-level group, a community of interests of thousands of people, and a direct killing will stand on the opposite side of the Dragon Kingdom, not only forcibly making the Dragon Kingdom change from "inaction" to "action", but also the routine of "beating the small ones and coming out of the old ones".

The protagonist must plan step by step, and the evil forces who already want to commit treason, accelerate their treason, and wipe them out at one time, in order to fit the protagonist's character.

It's just that almost all of this part of the plot has been cut, and all the power is given to Qiu Chengnan and Shi Heng, so there is no way, everyone will just do it. Including "Gameplay", back to the past section, the plot has been cut, and even the setting has been changed...

The original gameplay is not to use extraordinary abilities, but if there is no extraordinary ability to fight and fight, it is easy to be imitated, and the setting can only be modified...

4. Why did the squad betray in the Otherworldly version?

Here is the big foreshadowing, the three soldiers "disobey the order", it is precisely the order of the leader of the dragon kingdom, the team members "do not trust", it is all the plan of the record, although the memory joins the protagonist's team, these team members are not puppets, and they do not obey the protagonist's arrangement for everything.

The protagonist was pushed to the camera to attract the attention of the gods, and remembered that he was developing obscenely in secret, and this section was an important node in the development of obscenity, which almost directly determined the metamorphosis combat effectiveness of the dragon country in the later stage.

Because this paragraph introduces the concept of "exchanging flesh for rule props" for Long Guofang, it is also the capital for Long Guofang to sacrifice himself and want to die with the gods.

The protagonist doesn't suspect it, it's not that he's stupid, but that he has a little nudibranch, a clownfish, and the bonus of IQ and premonition skills, which makes the protagonist tend to be "lucky" in various choices, and the protagonist's trust, and the later protagonist knows that he will die in advance, etc., also depends on the clownfish's premonition skills.

In addition, Shi Heng includes the "betrayal" of other teammates and civil wars, first, Shi Heng's attack is deadly because the protagonist's injury-free bracer team members know about it; Second, their battles must also be real enough not to arouse the suspicion of the gods; Thirdly, they were in a state of brainwashing at the time, and they were not completely sane.

The reason why Shi Heng chose this name is that the name hints at the beginning that her role positioning is "unbalanced", and that deadly attack was doomed from the beginning... Even if she rewrites it, she will still carry out the deadly attack.

It's the same with memorization, "witty", resourceful characters. The role of Wang Qiang is inspired by reality, I didn't write him well, to be honest, I blame myself, Wang Qiang, we can't dislike his actually...

These are big questions, and the plot is also specially designed for "rage". There are also small problems, I will try my best to remember the lessons, accumulate experience, I am very grateful to the readers who have been following it, here to bow to everyone, thank you.

Regarding the plot design of "Anger", the next book will be designed as well as possible, or simply skip this emotional category to make everyone happier to read.

"Deep Sea" has two endings, one is the be ending, and the 800 chapters are already over; Another HE ending, ending with chapter 815.

The reason why the world inside and outside is focused on is that it was originally intended to be continued, but later I felt powerless and a little lacking in spirit.

It's quite diligent during the code word period.,It's basically 10,000 per day.,Occasional additions.,Half a year of about 1.8 million words of update.,The amount of updates is okay.,Only when it's almost over will the update speed be suspended.。

During this period, it has not been sold badly, whether it is illness or eye surgery, it has not been disclosed, (there is a manuscript deposit.)

I didn't break the update, because of the operation, the two or three hundred thousand words of the manuscript were gone, and it became back to a naked state... ）

I didn't talk about it until the book was finished and my body was fully recovered, just to tell you that I was quite dutiful in writing books, and everyone didn't have to worry about some problems when they read my books.

"Deep Sea 2" I don't plan to write it for the time being, I want to hone it again, I'm afraid that I can't write it well, I have thought about the plot of 2, the reason why I led to the concept of the world inside and outside, originally planned to let Xiao Hao of the parallel world be the protagonist, and the main line has a general idea, but it is very difficult to write it well, so I decided to write another hone writing.

The new book, Journey to Survival: Only I Can See the Tips! >> The name is similar, the plot is completely different, the transcendent system is different, everyone is welcome to come and watch, thank you!

Friends who are willing but have not paid/rewarded for "Deep Sea", can they be replaced with supporting new books, thank you!

The last thing, please don't raise books, because it's easy to run out of them, and the background shows that readers run away halfway through reading. The results of the automatic judgment book are not good, and it is easy to be cold...

The new book day is more 6k, and the better the results, the faster the update speed will be, so book friends, give me all the tickets~

I expect to finish this book this year, and I will decide whether to write "Deep Sea 2" depending on the situation, because I still have a lot of brains that I haven't written, a new world view, a new transcendent system, and a magical world hidden in my heart, but I'm afraid that the grades will not be good, and I am afraid that the writing will not be enough, so I can't show it.

Whether you can kill the author depends on the ability of the book friends, as long as the grades are good, it is not a problem to explode, come and kill me [dog head]!