Chapter 36,

81,300 words,

The copy of "God of Medicine" is officially over.

If I had to rate this quest myself, it would be 8...... No way, I'm really embarrassed to ask for more than 92 points left.

Jokes aside, if a perfect score of 10 is out of 10, this copy should be around 6.1 or 6.2 in my opinion, barely passing.

When I designed the outline, I prepared a copy of "The God of Medicine" according to the classic three-act play.

Trigger – Conflict – Resolution

Specifically, I divided the whole plot into three parts, mainly using the strength of the protagonist's enemies as the dividing point.

In the first part, the protagonist's enemy is Zhang Changlin;

In the second part, the protagonist's enemy is the police represented by Cao Bin;

In the third part, the enemy of the protagonist is Nova Corporation.

Generally speaking, it is to fight monsters and upgrade, from small monsters to bosses.

However, I thought about it very well, but when I actually wrote it, I was limited by the power of the pen, and I couldn't grasp the cool point.

First of all, the first part of the plot.

The opening 'trigger' is not written.

I envision that after the protagonist starts selling Glenin, it will affect Zhang Changlin's business, and then lead to a conflict with him.

But after it was really written, I found that the portal was a bit big, as long as the protagonist was cautious, it should be difficult for Zhang Changlin to find out the identity of the protagonist.

Therefore, I struggled for a long time before I temporarily came up with a plot of a patient registering to receive medicine, which made Zhang Changlin pay attention to the protagonist, which seemed very deliberate and not silky enough.

Fortunately, the subsequent conflict and resolution were planned, and there were no major mistakes.

Secondly, the second part.

The plot of all three acts in this part was written according to plan, and the problem was that my pen was not enough.

Originally, I thought that when Cao Bin proposed to resign, it should be an emotional outburst, reflecting his transformation from blind obedience to his boss to sympathy for leukemia patients, and finally chose to disobey orders.

But it's a pity that the author Jun is really not good at writing this kind of emotional scene, so he didn't achieve the expected effect, and he didn't burn when he should have burned.

And finally, the third part.

This part of the 'triggering' is actually reflected in the first two verses, so it's quite silky.

But the problem is that the 'conflict' part is a bit dragged.

In fact, now that I think about it, the contradiction between the protagonist and Nova Company is that Lu Qing's sale of drugs has affected Nova Company's profits, and it is okay to write with this point, but when I wrote it, I felt that it was a bit thin, and at the same time, it was not completely detached from the influence of the plot of the movie.

Subject to the slowness of the 'conflict' part, the 'resolution' part of the protagonist's reorganization of the global gang will also have to slow down, because in this way the length of the content is equal, so as not to be anticlimactic.

But this part of my original outline was not that long.,After the protagonist reorganized the global gang,,This copy is over.,In order to balance the chapters before and after.,And the plot of the protagonist's design of Nova Company's reputation was temporarily written......

Now it seems that this part is a bit unpleasant, and it is completely possible to expand the gangster part and increase the coolness.

……

Let's sum it up in the end.

On the whole, the completion of the copy of "God of Medicine" is okay, but the details are too rough, which is a typical embodiment of a street fighter with a low eye, and it is already shy to give a passing grade.

In the past few days, I have actually been thinking about how to improve, and the final solution is to write a detailed outline.

In particular, the outline of key nodes must be prepared.

Only by presenting the following plots in my mind can we grasp the rhythm of the story and not deviate.

……

Teaser,

Tomorrow's two chapters are real everyday life.

One is the transition, and the other is to take the time to polish the details of the next part.

The day after tomorrow, it will officially enter the next dungeon -

"I Am Yu Huanshui"

When Yu Huanshui, the worst male protagonist on the whole network, has the Shenhao system, what kind of operation will he make?

Stay tuned!

At the same time, I also hope that everyone can continue to support the author, recommend tickets, monthly passes, and follow-up!

Thank you, author!

Or2！