Summary at the end of the volume
The volume of "I Am Yu Huanshui" is over, and I will summarize it as usual.
Let's talk about the rating first, if I play it myself, if I get a full score, I can probably give it about 7.0 - I know that there may be many readers who think this rating is a bit inflated, don't worry, listen to my quibbles...... Ahem, justify.
I give this seven points, and I give the separate volume of "I Am Yu Huanshui".
What does that mean?
It's just that if you just take out the content of this volume and read it, regardless of the previous and later texts, this volume can still have 7 points for self-feeling.
Personally, I've written almost everything I wanted to write before I put this volume into writing.
In the end, Yu Huanshui's unwilling things and the people who made him aggrieved were all vented and resolved.
But
Anyone who is afraid of a but-
If you don't look at this volume alone, but put it in the overall structure of the whole book, then the score of this Yu Huanshui volume is only 3 points...... Even low.
Because the idea of this volume is wrong from the root!
The name of my book is "When God in the Film and Television World", naturally, the various copies to be written should also be closely related to the title of "God Hao".
It means that the protagonist goes to various worlds to pretend to be forced as a god, even if he is not a god at the beginning, he should always become a god in the future.
But Yu Huanshui's volume is not,
From beginning to end, this volume has nothing to do with the word 'Shenhao', and it is all a short slap in the face from various parents.
(PS: Actually, some readers have already put forward this opinion, I also saw it at the time, but I didn't take it too seriously, because I read other books have also written copies of Yu Huanshui, and the key is that this copy does have too many plot descriptions that can be slapped in the face, and I feel that it will be very good to write, so I haven't changed it, and now that I think about it, it's still too simple to think about the problem)
Why do I say that reading Yu Huanshui's volume alone can give 7 points?
It's because under the premise of removing the 'Shenhao', it's okay to write these short slaps in the face of parents, and even put this volume at the beginning of the book, it's barely okay, because at that time, the protagonist was just starting out, and it's okay to start writing from the parents.
But I wrote about the world of the god of medicine in the previous volume, and I also let the protagonist go to the level of ordering gangsters all over the world to help the protagonist sell medicine.
In other words, the protagonist's compulsion has risen.
At this time, if I let the protagonist suddenly return to the short plot of pretending to be forced to slap his face in the parents, it will make the reader have misplaced expectations.
To put it simply, the protagonist's compulsion has obviously gone up, but what he does is still a childish behavior, which is very inconsistent with the protagonist's positioning.
This is clearly reflected in the data in this book -
Before writing the Yu Huanshui volume, the follow-up reading of this book was 1100, and after writing this volume, the collection rose by nearly 4,000, but the follow-up reading only increased by 100, and the proportion was seriously out of balance.
Obviously, everyone has chosen to raise books.
……
Let's sum it up in the end.
Compared with the God of Medicine, the volume of "Yu Huanshui" has improved with the control of the plot, although the results of this volume are not satisfactory, but the plot direction is always in my pen, and there is no deviation.
The only, and greatest, regret is that this volume is in a place where it shouldn't.
How do you say this?
It's very helpless, because this is purely a problem caused by less writing and no experience, and it can only be said that it is the tuition fee that has to be paid on the way to writing.
I'm sorry to let you grow up with me, I'm sorry.
I will definitely learn a lesson in the future and never make this mistake again.
Luck in misfortune,
This problem was discovered before the charge, and if it was on the shelves, then I would really have no shame to face the readers who supported me with real money.
……
Let's talk about the follow-up.
Tomorrow, I will write two chapters of daily content, soothe the rhythm, and officially enter the next volume the day after tomorrow -
"The Young Son of the Chaebol Family"
In this volume, the protagonist will really become a god, and he is a top chaebol god who holds the authority of a country!
"Prosecutor Yin's wife is in good shape, so let him be president."
Comparing several candidates, Chen Daojun said.