Plot discussion chapter
First, the problem of hurrying
The territory of the two races, although it belongs to the human camp, it is normal to arrive first and arrive first;
It's like my home is at the junction of two counties, and it belongs to County A, but it's faster to go to County B, which is normal, not to mention, if the human camp arrives first, there is no need to write
second
The next thing is to write a small-scale war.,But everyone says that the Lord of the Sky Wolf is a bit stupid.,It's a fact that you can't kill the protagonist anymore.,And then it's a problem for the plot to unfold.
I just thought of modifying the previous few cards and replacing the breakthrough after the battle between the two powerhouses (watching the battles of many masters of the universe)
But in this way, it is back to the original question, even with the strength of the protagonist Universe Venerable, he can completely blow himself up in front of the Lord of the Heavenly Wolf, or he can't kill the protagonist, what's the point of the big war?
This brings us back to the third point
After Luo Feng was on the primordial star, disguised as the Lord of the Universe, during the Great War, didn't the other three peak races know that he had a clone? So why even want to kill him?
After all, when the Ancestral God Sect was in the Ancestral God Sect, he knew that Luo Feng had a doppelganger
Then on the primordial star, why do you have to go out of your way to kill each other? It was the part where Luo Feng killed thousands of Universe Venerables in one go
So, when I think about that, I don't think there's much wrong with what I'm writing......
What to do depends on whether there are book friends who give the best advice
As for today, it may still be written according to the previous plot
Headache......
The immortal and venerable stages, because of the rhythm problem, did delete a lot of outlines, resulting in the recent plot is not too coherent
However, this can be regarded as a big conflict between this golden finger and the original text at this stage
After all, the gap between genius and mediocrity is too obvious in the original text
Ordinary Cosmic Citizen: Planetary level, can only live for a thousand years
Ordinary people with a little talent: stellar level, it is difficult to cultivate to the ninth order of stellar level in 10,000 years
The elite of the forces with the cosmic-level powerhouse in charge: the stellar level ninth order is very simple, but it is extremely difficult to become a cosmic-level powerhouse
A cosmic-level powerhouse, he can't become a domain master for 100,000 years, even if he comprehends the realm (Nuo Lanshan, who is facing a lifespan, is actually quite talented?) Otherwise, he would not have become the realm master in thousands of years, which is worth complaining about, but fortunately, there is a meat grinder on the extraterritorial battlefield, which is not too abrupt)
And so on and so forth......
It's just too much!
But like the Fire Eclipse Venerable, he can become a Universe Venerable in hundreds of thousands of years, which is simply outrageous, even more outrageous than the special life of the Innate Universe Venerable, the key is that this is not the most outrageous
Therefore, there is such a time simulator, and the protagonist can't stay long in the immortal stage at all, unless the simulator keeps dying, and the protagonist's life-saving ability, the probability of death is still very low
However, the Lord of the Universe stage is really going to write a little more, and I have to intersperse a lot of what I wanted to write before
Just like when I wrote about why Lu Gang's God of War fell, it felt like it was a long time ago, and I incorporated some of my insights into the Devouring Starry Sky
Don't talk nonsense, how to unfold the plot next, if you have an idea, you can do whatever you want, I can still change the text
Of course, writing this, combined with the original book, I also thought of one point, that is, when the previous Lord of the Sky Wolf and the Thunder Ni clone fought, the Peak Supreme Treasure Armor was exposed
For the sake of the treasure, plus a little chance to kill Yang Wu, the demon clan began to move out in general
I'm going to write it according to this idea today.,The previous text doesn't necessarily have time to change it today.,Change it tomorrow.,See if you can accept this idea in today's chapter.
In short, each of us hopes that the idea and plot of this book can be better, and everyone will work together
I also hope that after this book is finished, I will be able to read it carefully, and everyone will have a little desire to read it again