Strike while the iron is hot and write a summary.

If you were to ask me how much I feel right now, it would be: Mom! I can take a break.

But!

I'm still going to update the second volume tomorrow.

Author:......

To summarize, it is to review the plot of the first volume, summarize the lessons learned, and strive to avoid making the same mistake again in the next volume.

And the biggest lesson I learned from the first volume is that it is too long.

That's right, 400,000 words were written in the first volume, and it was still 400,000 words written by a novice, which didn't have much content in the first place, but it took so long to write.

The words of the big guy and the god will be written wonderfully, but I'm not, I'm just a rookie, and the chase is dropping every day with an amazing momentum, not to mention the average order.

I don't even dare to say what the current subscription is.

It's been on the shelves for a month, and everyone else is more or less rising, but I'm the only one who has been falling. Originally, the mentality was still very stable, but it couldn't stand the continuous fall, and there was a small Bengbu to live in.

The plot of Aozangshan was seriously tracked down, there were more than five or six hundred, and then the results fell into a slump until now.

I'm afraid it will continue to be sluggish in the future.

After it was put on the shelves, except for the first day, I didn't ask for a monthly pass or subscription again, mainly because I thought it was not brilliant enough, and I was embarrassed to ask for everyone's support.

In fact, from the recommendation ticket, monthly pass and reward, I already know my situation.

But I still want to thank the readers who have been subscribed, thank you, you are the ones who make me feel that I am not rotten to the end.

In the summary, I actually have a lot to say, but I'm afraid of talking too much about the previous plot, and as a result, there are spoilers and subscriptions dropping. I wrote a summary earlier, and I feel that I will already dissuade some people. But the problem does exist, so it's better to talk about it.

The introduction is written as a hidden plot for the second creation.,The story of the first volume is very simple.,It's Gu Yun Youzhen + Jingshi Nine Pillars.,When I first had the plot, I was confused.,I always feel that there is a lot of content that hasn't been shown.,So when I wrote it.,It's a little second creation.。

Writing Genshin Impact Doujin, for me, the greatest sense of accomplishment actually lies in the fact that when you brush up on the fire book in the future, you can remember the character of Izumitai, which makes me happy.

Talking about Quantai, as the boss of the first volume, the shape is not very good.

Personally, I think I should do three things well in the first volume, one is the oppression of the villain, one is the hostess, and the last one is the upgrade mechanism.

I didn't do a good job, and that's something I'll fix in the next volume.

Quantai is in a long-term hang-up state.,There aren't many appearances.,Although there are a lot of plots in front of you that hint at something related to Quantai.,But it's still not silky enough.。

In terms of hostess design, I found that the title with Shenhe, obviously the subscription will be higher, do you just want to see Shenhe, crying and laughing. It's hard to write about cold characters.

In terms of upgrade mechanism, it feels like the upgrade is a small cool point, but there are not many ignition points in the first volume.

I did the math myself, and after it was put on the shelves, it was added for four days in a row, and I still owed four chapters, and then I returned one chapter today, and there are three chapters left, um.

The rest of the analysis is a spoiler.

The story line of the first volume can be divided into Return to Liyue Harbor, Tianheng Mountain Mutation, Chennuo Factory Incident, Ozang Mountain, Rock Tea House, Qingce Village, and Wufu Slope.

Originally, there was no plot of the tea room on the rock and the light strategy village in the outline, and after the end of the Okuzang Mountain, it was Wufu Slope, and the number of words at that time was about 200,000 words, and Wufu Slope was the climax, and it felt just right.

But as I said earlier, the outline was changed.

In the next volume, my initial intention was to make the story a little shorter and more compact, and definitely not to have the verbosity of the first volume, which is mainly set in Mondstadt, but not in one country like the first volume.

Judging from the first volume, I wanted to write an epic and tragic story based on the theme of Genshin Impact, but the first volume was messy, and I had to learn to change this in the second volume.

This is my first book signed on the shelves.,I don't know what the future of it will be.,Is it based on the current situation that I feel gg.,Or can it slowly regain blood.,The story is gradually becoming exciting.,I have no experience.,Can't assert.。

Anyway,Let's take a look at the progress of the plot in the second volume.,When the time comes, everyone will chase it down and think it's good.,Please subscribe.,The author has been very negative lately.。

Here's a list of tips since it was put on the shelves:

Avenue without borders 500 points

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Lu Mingze's Tree of Death: 500 points

Qin Jian: 500 coins

Fu Rong 3000 points

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I'm not going to take a name, and I'm not going to get 300 pips

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Tears at the corners of the mouth 800 coins

It's 231 coins when it's cold

A Yang who eats meat costs 200 coins

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The non-chiefs in the European Emperor are 100 points

Thank you.