Write a summary, analyze the plot of the second volume, and look forward to the future by the way.

(Bow)

Compared to the first volume, the number of words is controlled, the first volume is 400,000 words, the second volume is 270,000 words, and the main place where the protagonist group is active is mainly Mondstadt, during which I went to the Dragon's Back Snow Mountain, and there was no wandering around other places.

In the author's vision, the second volume is structurally divided into two parts, the first half of which is the real world, when Lin Ye first arrives in Mondstadt, the Dragon's Back Snowy Mountain, and returns to Mondstadt.

The chapter [at the time of the millennium] is the dividing point, after which it moves on to the second half of the second volume.

From the first volume onwards, the author wrote that there was no outline, only a general plot direction.

Readers and friends who have read two volumes can more or less feel that one volume is a big story, similar to a unit drama, there is a contradiction at the beginning, and this contradiction will be resolved in the end, and the process is to find clues.

The inspiration for the first volume came from a picture in the author's mind:

Lin Ye held the dragon abyss in his hand, stood on the top of the Wufu slope, and shot an arrow of majestic mountains and rivers at the resurrection evil mantis entrenched in the sky, and then the dragon fell on the continent.

So the plot of the first volume is in the service of this picture.

The second volume, which is also some of the images in the author's mind, is more of it this time, and it is basically the old Mondstadt that has been criticized, telling stories about some holy relics, weapons, and unpopular characters in the background history.

To be honest, the author suspected that he was writing in the wrong direction, and in the later stages of the Old Mondstadt plot, I was compressing the plot because the data feedback was terrible.

Let's put it this way, the first few chapters of the second volume are not half as much as the week before the first volume hit the shelves, and then it's time for the Old Mondstadt plot, and guess what?

That's roughly one-sixth of the first chapters of the second volume.

In all fairness, if it's you, what is your mentality?

One in six.

(Covering his face and crying)

I don't dare to look at the daily subscription and catch-up, which affects the author's codeword status, am I panicked, self-denying, and boring?

As mentioned in the introduction parentheses, this book is mainly about the hidden plots of the second creation, and compared to the one or two world missions in the first volume, the second volume is the original intention of the author.

Thousands of years ago in Old Mondstadt, the story behind the holy relics we usually play.

The Orchestra of the Wandering Land.

The gladiator's finale.

The ritual of the clan.

The Heart of Perdition.

And the weapons we drawn.

Dark Alley Series.

Flute Sword, Bell Sword, Absolute String, Wandering Movement, Duel Spear, Clan Shotgun, etc.

And then there's the task that we've completed but is confused.

[Ancient Investigation Diary], [The Return of the Rebel Son], etc.

Eberhardt and Parsifal are the core of the old Mondstadt period, you can go to the Miyu Society and search for the big guy "Kazami Kazami", he has a detailed summary.

There shouldn't be many players who know about the Dark Alley series.,At first I was excited.,I thought it was a big deal.,Then I realized that not many people know.,My writing is not good.,Let the reader have a poor sense of substitution.,See in the clouds.。

It's that I can't think about it enough.

Originally, the "picture" of the second volume was not about the old Mondstadt, and the characters that everyone is more familiar with will be Rosaria, Joael, Amber, etc., and there will be more scenes, so it will not be so miserable to follow.

But I love the stories that happened in Old Mondstadt, the Thieves in the Dark Alley, the Gladiators, the Rebels of the West Wind, the Witch Lady, the Sword Orchestra...... Their stories are to me like the stars of humanity shining brightly.

That's why the name of the second volume is called [Shining Time], and the Wind Wings that Lin Ye obtained is also named after that.

The first natal star, its name [Battle Maniac], symbolizes the courage of the demon god, and courage is the first step in the challenge.

The second natal star, whose name is [Gao Ge], means freedom and resistance, awareness of oppression, having the courage to resist, and singing for freedom at all times.

When designing the outline of the second volume, the author had the following picture in his mind:

The badminton festival ceremony, the knights crusaded against the demon dragon outside the city, and the sword orchestra assassinated the nobles in the city, which was full of epic and tragic.

An elderly gladiator fights a young lion cub, Vanessa, in the gladiatorial arena.

After returning home, in the court at dusk, "a gorgeous rebellion against my father" and "Frost Grief Alsace sent his father away" and other scenes of sudden murder of blood relatives.

There is also the forest rebellion system, preferring to be trapped in the world of memory leylines and sticking to their own principles.

Wait a minute.

There are many.

But chasing the order makes the author's mentality a little sad, plus I don't have the habit of writing a detailed outline, the outline of a volume is composed of several events, probably something happened here, something happened there, these are the main lines, and I want to connect them when I write them.

This leads to the foreshadowing and foreshadowing not being in place, the overall framework is not clear enough, and the emotions cannot be mobilized when burning.

The author has a deep understanding, well.

Old Mondstadt, the plot is different from the original, at least the little boy, Susan, and the Sword Orchestra are all dead.

Lin Ye woke up at the end, I wrote too much earlier, and the post-subscription during that time had a great impact on me, so I also asked for leave.

After asking for leave, it was delayed and sent, so the pace of the plot accelerated, and the people who died in fate were also rescued by Lin Ye.

Do you know what the author is afraid of?

That's what I think is good, and it's bad to follow-up.

It really makes me wonder if I have the illusion that the world is wrong, and if I'm fit to write about it? Really, I'm afraid of myself, and I write stories that are laughing and generous.

Regarding the ending of Miss Witch, in Lin Ye and Sorolla respectively, the author mentioned that Miss Witch still has a role, well, isn't there a last chapter, haven't you forgotten.

The chapter [Shining Time] was originally the climax of the plot, but I was very dissatisfied with the writing, because the plot was modified, which caused my emotions to not go up when I wrote it, and the meeting between Lin Ye and Eberhardt was actually a little more exciting.

Anyway, I'm done with the second volume.

About the story afterward, Volume III.

Originally, it was the Inazuma chapter, and Lin Ye had thought about how to go to Inazuma, that is, Lin Ye and Eberhardt fought a decisive battle, entered the turbulence, and came to a certain place in Inazuma through the leylines.

In this way, I was afraid that I would send it away from the familiar characters, so Lin Ye stayed in Mondstadt.

The story of the dark line and unpopular characters, the data reaction told me that I can't do this, and I consoled myself that it was unpopular, but in the final analysis, it was still not good-looking.

I thought back to the plot later, and I realized that I could have written better, and it should have been written like this, etc., but after I wrote and uploaded it, everyone read it, so what's the point of revising it.

The results of this book were good at the beginning, but it turned out to be so miserable that it was so miserable that it deserves to be a newcomer, self-deprecating.

In the third volume, the focus is on the everyday, Mondstadt's, and Liyue's, and I pondered how to write about the daily life in an interesting and short way, so that everyone can not get tired of chasing it. Thought of a few ideas.

Fun, that's what I want to achieve, and again, I want everyone to have a very comfortable and relaxing reading experience.

As for the dark line like the old Mondstadt, I won't touch it until I am taken away, shouldn't I write the main line of the game, and everyone has a stronger sense of substitution?

Regarding the number of words in the finished book, after all, it is the first book, at least one million words, which you can trust the reader, I promised in the previous single chapter.

Tell me about your thoughts after writing the second volume.

Tired.

I want to give up.

I feel like my grades are out of luck.

Let's take a look at the third volume.

Well.

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