I never expected that this book would be excellent, first of all, thanks to the support of the bigwigs.

On review, the book was written too short and the ending was rushed.

[First of all, the role of the empress was not well written. 】

I never expected that Wei Xiang, who was written casually, was so popular at the beginning, and I wrote the heroine as a tool person.

At the beginning, it was marked that she was a single heroine, and she didn't want to change her hexagram halfway, nor did she want to speculate in stocks, so she could only deadlift the empress's character.

This also appeared the poisonous point of the fusion of the soul of Sun Divine Doctor later, and the final patch was a fusion of alchemy's memory and some memory fragments, but it still couldn't cover up this poisonous point.

[On the other hand, there is no outline. 】

There is no outline, which leads to the rapid progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and the combat power of the male protagonist collapses a little.

In addition, I'm not very good at the daily life of old husbands and wives, so the plot is not written later.

Especially after dominating the world, many readers say that it can be over here, and there is no sense of expectation after the two get married.

At that time, Strawberry felt that the word count was too small and wanted to write 1 million words, and it turned out that the reader was right.

On the other hand, Strawberry is not very good at writing an outline, so this book is open directly without an outline.

Before it was put on the shelves, some chapters after the destruction of the guard didn't know what to write, as if it was a hard plot.

In the battle of annihilation, the male protagonist killed a product, and the combat power here began to collapse a little.

Just thinking about it is cool, and there is no estimating the consequences.

The second time was in the Battle of Beijing, the male protagonist came back from the dead, and his combat power collapsed again.

As a result, the male protagonist has a feeling of invincibility in the world, as if the unification of the world has become very easy, and there is no conflict at all.

There is a lack of content to write about, and after dominating the world, the plot of King Qin is too sloppy.

King Qin is a character that has been buried for a long time, but after she jumped out, I didn't make good use of her.

King Qin only measured his identity to Ga off, and it ended in just two or three chapters, I remember that some readers said that this part was like reading an outline.

After that, he was too hasty to bring out the role of Tiandao.

Because there was no foreshadowing in the early stage, this character appeared very abruptly and became a poisonous point.

Actually, at the beginning of the book, I thought that the biggest villain was Tiandao, but there was no foreshadowing in the early stage, and it was too hasty to introduce this character, and from here on, it can be regarded as a collapse and collapse.

Whether it's Heavenly Dao or the supreme god, I hope to make up for the bug that the male protagonist is not the female emperor's childhood sweetheart in the first life.

But during the Heavenly Dao, I didn't solve this problem well, and I had no choice but to bring out the Supreme God, which caused these chapters to look very confusing.

When you go to the Supreme God, you can't collapse.

[The obsession of wanting the male protagonist to return to the city]

At the end of the first book, I tried to bring Li Xingci and Weisheng Xianji back to the modern world, but it was not written.

But I still have this obsession in my heart, and I always want to try again.

In addition, after the world in the book is hastily dominated, there is no plot to write, and he can only move to the city.

As it turned out, this was not a pleasant approach.

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Probably thinking about it so much, and of course there are many small problems.

A good book can be regarded as anticlimactic.

To sum up, try to write a good outline in the next book before opening the book, this book can be regarded as a lesson for yourself, and try to avoid these mistakes in the future.

Finally, thank you for accompanying you all the way.

- Strawberry regards

(End of chapter)