The first volume is over

The expected rhythm, the first volume of the 100,000-word story, as mentioned by some book friends, is faster.

Don't worry, the story doesn't end too hastily, there are many things that can be written, and the reason why the first volume is fast is because there are not many that can be written.

Harry was a mature witcher after all, and his curiosity was still strong, but not the hairy boy anymore - he had been much more stable since being forked by a pitchfork.

A lot of the storylines of the first volume can't be developed.

Malfoy is a bit dumbfounded, but he won't provoke an impossible opponent of his own, and there will be a wonderful performance of this oily teenager later.

Harry wouldn't heed a young wizard's provocation.

I won't be able to play the Quidditch team in my first year, so rest assured, Harry will definitely join the team, but I don't think I'll write too much about it, or basically mention it - after all, Harry is Harry, and even if he grows up and matures, he is still Harry.

After the long-winded words, let's review it again.

I wasn't too satisfied with the first volume, and there were no big problems with the rhythm, and I finished it step by step, but I didn't grasp the right grasp of some small rhythms.

The Hogsmeade chapter has little foreshadowing—although it's the pot I've changed the following.

The orgasmic outburst is not refreshing enough.

The Forbidden Forest is a small climax, and the last room of the Philosopher's Stone is a big climax, especially when Harry's sword is aimed at Dumbledore, which should be a big emotional outburst.

I'm sorry I didn't write it out.

It's too restrained, and I have to think about it, design the rhythm of the second volume, and the emotional outburst.

I'm not very happy with the text either.

I haven't written for a long time, and it's a little jerky, but I'm slowly getting back, and I can still give myself a passing grade for the section about the Potions test and Snape's emotional description.

In short, you have to make progress slowly.

Here I am cheeky and ask for a wave of recommendations, monthly passes, follow-ups, and rewards.

So far, the results of this book are not bad, but people's greed is infinite - if it can be better, then I will definitely be more happy, and then use my heart to code.

By the way, let's talk about the rules of the plus.

Before it hits the shelves. Every 5,000 rewards, add one more chapter, but because it's a new book period, even if it is more, you can only add one more chapter a day.

This is only my first round of recommendations, and the word count is already close to catching up with the second round of recommended books.

If, I'm just saying if...

I'm lucky enough to get more tips.,If you don't finish a chapter a day before it's put on the shelves.,It's all out on the day it's put on the shelves.。

Basically...

On the day it was put on the shelves, there will be ten more chapters of stability, and as for how to add more, let me see how my grades were at that time.

After it was put on the shelves, it was stable to change 10,000 words a day, and as for how to add more words after it was put on the shelves, I had to see how my grades were at that time.

That's it!

I hope you will continue to support me!