This continuation began on June 2 and lasted until the end of July, when the main text ended.

If you want to continue writing the ending at that time, one is that you are dissatisfied with the hasty completion of the book, and Lai Bed gave the final outline. One is that I want to try myself and see how it reacts after writing it.

However, there is an end to all the acts of generating electricity with love, so in the case of making as much sense as possible, I chose to end the continuation at the time of chapter 400.

The ending is relatively good, and the process in the middle is not particularly rushed, so I personally think it is worthy of the outline given by Lai Bed, and it is not messed up.

Speaking of returning to the original work, first of all, I will briefly talk about my perception of the second half of the original work.

In fact, the original rhythm of the whole book is in a slow process in the early and middle stages. And in this process, there are more and more branches of Lai Bed, which is reflected in the sequel, that is, I have to selectively cut some of these branches and dramas.

And in the later part, the original plot has a bit of an artificially accelerated feeling, so when it comes to the last chapter of Aiyi and Murakami going out to rent a house, it is a little abrupt to read.

If it is smoothed, there should be more room for writing in between, but Lai Lai chose this way.

So when it comes to the sequel, some people think it's not too urgent or whatever. My personal opinion on this is that since the emotional line in the original work chose to go quickly rather than slowly, the emotional line in the sequel must not be slowly advanced.

This will have the personal return of the other girls at the beginning of the sequel, and if Murakami doesn't choose the way to cut through the mess quickly, it will be impossible to take back the hearts of all of them.

And correspondingly, at the end of the sequel, scattered insertions, five girls' individual back.

As for whether there will be any changes in the characters of several girls and Murakami in this process, it will definitely be. For example, Aiyi, if she has always maintained the character she gave in the early stage of lying in bed, judging from her reaction after learning that Xiaoshui and Murakami kissed, she would definitely not agree to share Murakami with the rest of the girls.

Another point is that all the characters are created under Lai's pen after all, and are endowed with their own character characteristics and life. As the author of the sequel, no matter how much I try to continue the work, I can't go beyond the scope of what has already been drawn, which is a disrespect to the original work itself.

The characters in Lai's pen are Lai's bed, not mine.

As a result, if the character is perfected, that is, it is perfected, and there is nothing particularly outstanding.

The analysis of the original work and the sequel is written.,The next part is about the extras.。

The first is when to write an extra.

The text will end on July 26th, and I have something to deal with on July 30th, so the time for the start of the extra page should be August 1st.

And as I said before, there are three extras to write about.

One of them: the shackles that are difficult to break free

This is not so much called an extra, but rather a day after tomorrow. It unfolds against the backdrop of Murakami's desire to leave the five girls for a short period of time, and he asks Nobunaga on a trip, and then is sold. The time is set before Christmas, and maybe Yoshima Sato will also make a brief appearance. As for the projected length, it is estimated that it will be two chapters.

Second: My youth love story is really fine

This is written in the background of the third part of the spring thing.,It's related to Saori Hayami.。 There is a certain cohesion with the plot of the sequel, but it is not high, and it will not intersect with the girls. The time is set in April of the following year. And the estimated length should be a chapter.

Third: chasing light and shadow

This extra episode is based on the time point before Tamako's Tokyo Barista Competition.,It's not very long.,It's estimated that it's about two chapters.。 The specific development is that he can't let go of this apprentice, and finally gives her a little hope.

Correspondingly, Tamako will no longer have real-life contact with other girls, at most she will see messages on similar social media or TV. The estimated length should be two chapters.

In addition, I saw that some people said that they wanted to see the extras of Sakura win, or who won the extras.

IMHO, if you want to see a one-line outside in a harem ending, I can only say that you are in the wrong place. Only the single-line ending will have a single-line extra, and in the harem ending, if the character has entered the harem, and then talk about the single-line extras of this character, what is the purpose of the harem ending?

In the case of being alone, can't it be regarded as a one-line ending? The personal return of each character can already be regarded as a single line, so why do you have to look at a single line separately?

So except for the Hayami and Tamako mentioned in the fan, I can't do anything about the other characters.

Finally, let's talk about the feedback on the sequel and my personal thoughts, which can be regarded as pouring bitter water and spitting black mud.

Continued to write so far, the total collection has exceeded 4,000, and the total number of recommended votes has exceeded 16,000. But the actual interaction has been decreasing, I don't know if it's because there are no new book friends introduced, or because I feel that the continuation has become the norm, so I can just watch the plot in silence.

From the number of chapters and daily recommendations at the beginning of the re-writing, to the number of chapters and daily recommendations at the end of the year, there is a slow downward trend.

In this case, I feel a little tired after writing each chapter. I have to say that the excitement of looking forward to the plot and reading the plot as a reader has changed to the excitement of watching the plot develop and improve and waiting for feedback when you change your identity to become an author.

This should be more pronounced on similar non-commercial sequels.

The part that waits for feedback is the majority, but this feedback doesn't look so good to me. For example, on the 20th of July, on a whim, I decided to write out the farming personal return in advance, and as a result, the number of chapters can be ranked last among all the chapters.

But in any case, I have to thank a few book friends who have been expressing their opinions and complaining in the chapter, and many book friends vote for me every day.

Thank you.

Finally, it is still unknown what will be said after the end of the fan, and whether a new book will be written. Even if there were, it would be around September.

It would be great if one day I actually wrote a new book, and I was willing to read it, not because "Ah, this is a sequel, let's see how his new book is", but because "this person writes well, see how his new book is".