Hello everyone, here is a summary of the end of the volume of the big raccoon dog and the cat...... and fragmented thoughts.

Where to write, if you see any nonsense such as adding more, please ignore it automatically.

So first of all, let's talk about my opinion on the second volume.

At the beginning of this volume, the author's idea was very grand (I want to put up Chinese New Year's Eve characters, I want to kill Blackbeard, I want to stabilize the hatred of Akainu, I want to make Mo Jing handsome on the top, I want, I want to, I want to ...... ）

And then most of it didn't work......

I want too much, but the author's ability is limited, and I can't do so much at once.

In addition, the middle began to rot, and the update was three days of fishing and two days of drying nets, and the results declined seriously, which once made the author have the idea of giving up.

Fortunately, at this time, the author woke up in time, caught up, replanned the outline, and made unremitting efforts...... Another month of rottenness.

Uh, well, it's humiliating, but that's exactly what it is.

If there are readers who have chased it to the present, they must still remember that during that time, the author often sent leave notes with unsatisfactory outlines, but it was not all excuses, mainly because the author himself was aware that he wanted to write too much, a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west, resulting in a plot that was too bloated, but it was not as streamlined as when the book was opened, and it was more attractive.

Of course, it's not that the author's idea is wrong, after all, the Internet, a volume is hundreds of thousands of words at every turn, and it has always been like the single-threaded, fast-paced unit story writing method when the book was opened, and everyone will soon fall into fatigue, thinking that this author is always like this, looking at the beginning, you can guess the ending.

Therefore, a two-level structure will inevitably be introduced, which will make the plot of the whole volume rise and fall.

But back to the old problem - the author's ability to bacteria is still poor.

This can probably be seen from the plot of Mojing's rescue of Nikolai in the middle of the period, although the plot of the terrifying three-masted sail and the city of the queen in spring are very necessary, laying the groundwork for the future story.

But when placed in the entire Blackbeard's revenge line, it looks a little bloated and redundant.

If I had to rearrange it, I would probably eliminate these plots and focus on chasing Blackbeard, and then in the process, reap the opportunity to heal Nikolai, or weaken the difficulty of healing, or simply put the treatment of Nikolai after the hunt.

Anyway, you can't put it here to distract everyone.

Well, I'll admit, I really just wanted Nikolai to shout henshin, show off his transformation, and punch Blackbeard in the face to knock this *** back......

Well, my dream came true,

It's just that the foreshadowing is not done well, and the bloated plot leads to the failure to echo before and after to form a contrast, which is a bit regrettable.

In short, after realizing his flaws, the author accepted his mediocrity and simply came one by one, deciding to solve the problem of structure first in this volume, and then talk about the rest in the next volume.

So there was the Fish-Man Island part, the human auction part, and the final top war.

For the rhythm of these three parts, the author is still a little satisfied.

Especially the final top-up war.

Although the foreshadowing is still very stiff and full of flaws, it still barely achieves the effect.

In particular, I had a lot of fun writing the chapter where Mo Jing killed Doflamingo (the part where Mo Jing was talking to the world with her head turned back many times in my mind).

It can be said that in the top part, except for the end because of time, there is also the author's intelligent extinguishing operation, which is a bit hasty, and I am still slightly satisfied with the other parts (hehe).

At this point, I can finally say that I have finally touched the threshold of the point structure.

From this point of view, the author is really not a talented player, it took about 300,000 words to touch the threshold, and it is only one direction, alas-

The good news is that a new volume has started again, and the author can try new tricks again!

The bad news is...... Well, the outline isn't finished yet...... (Is there really a time when this thing is finished?) ）

The even better news is that the author has a new dream - he decided to refine the character description in this volume and stand up all the five miscellaneous fish!

The worse news is that e...... I don't have a clue exactly how to do this......

So the next thing to do is to take a leave of absence for a while to collect vegetarian (smack!). (crossed out)......

Ahem.,Anyway, let's try it while collecting information.,Probably because of social fear.,The author's character description is the weakness of the weaknesses.,I hope there will be some improvement in this volume.。

I also hope that the next volume can bring a better plot to everyone and make everyone happy.

(By the way, ask for a ticket)

over~