A good poem
When the four girls saw Chen Tiancheng standing beside Chen Ru, they suddenly lost interest and retreated, but they all looked at Chen Tiancheng with resentful eyes, as if he had made them light.
If he hadn't agreed to Chen Ru to participate in the competition, Lao Tzu would have left this place full of crepe atmosphere immediately. Chen Tiancheng glanced at the people in the lobby and thought secretly.
Time passed quietly, and when the ugly time came, the competition of the four major academies officially began.
The three judges present were all figures with heads and faces, Lin Tiannan was the lord of Liuyun Town, Gu Guanghui and Wen Tiansheng were both famous Confucians in the Wind Country, so before the competition began, the three judges stepped forward in turn to make an encouraging speech, which was similar to what the students on the earth said before the exam, roughly asking the students to behave well and not to live up to the teachings of Mr. Academy.
After such a big deal of nonsense, the initiative of the words was handed over to Lin Tiannan, after all, Lin Tiannan was the town guard of Liuyun Town, so the proposition of this competition was up to him.
Ahem, everyone, in the past, our four major academies competition, all of them are free to play, whose poetry is good, is the one who won the championship, this year I want to change, this competition, I will personally come up with the question, combined with life, entertaining, this time the poem, will be "homesick" as the theme, everyone has to play on the spot, of course, this proposition is what I suddenly thought, even if it is the little girl Lin Ziyun, I didn't know the proposition at all before, so this competition is very fair and fair, okay, now give you a stick of incense time, Each person writes a poem, it is a few lines of poetry, after writing it, hand it in, and the three of us will judge and score, if it is beyond the time and has not made a poem, it will be left in advance, and now it will begin. After Lin Tiannan finished speaking, he glanced at the four gentlemen of the four academies.
With three judges present, the gentlemen who led the team of the four major academies this time all became errand runners, and the four gentlemen hurriedly picked up the prepared pen, ink, paper and inkstone and put them in front of each student participating in the competition.
Forty students stood at their desks, staring at the white rice paper in front of them, all lost in thought.
Chen Taicheng heard the proposition of "homesickness" for the first time, he could not burst out of joy in his heart, he graduated from Tunghai University on the earth in his previous life, and studied ancient Chinese literature, of course, he has a wide range of ancient poetry, otherwise he would not have graduated smoothly, in ancient poetry, there are really a lot of homesick poems.
He learned from the memory of the unlucky guy that the poetry style of the Soul Martial Continent is similar to the ancient poetry style on the earth, and they are all divided into five absolute and seven absolute and the like, but there are no great poets and great poets such as Li Bai, Wang Wei, He Zhizhang, and Liu Yong in the Soul Martial Continent. Therefore, Chen Tiancheng has countless good poems at his fingertips. Anyway, people on this continent don't know anything like Li Bai, even if they plagiarize one or two songs, no one knows, no, this is not plagiarism, how can the things of the reader be plagiarism, it is a reference! Chen Tiancheng said firmly in his heart.
When everyone fell into contemplation, only Chen Tiancheng stood there and enjoyed himself, and he was not in a hurry to write poems with a pen, but just filtered those ancient good poems like a movie in his mind, rubbing them, good guys, in less than five minutes, Chen Tiancheng had more than a dozen good poems about homesickness in his mind.
I have done it. Just when Chen Tiancheng was about to put pen to paper, suddenly a crisp female voice came from beside him, Chen Tiancheng followed the prestige, it turned out to be Wang Aoshuang, who was known as the first talented woman in Liuyun Town, she was like a proud peacock, and glanced at the other thirty-nine students with disdain, and then picked up the rice paper on the table with the poems written on it and handed it to Mr. Ximen Hong of his academy.
Ximen Hong took the rice paper, looked at it seriously, and saw that Wang Aoshuang wrote a seven-character quatrain, and after reading it, his eyes lit up, and he praised it: It's really a good poem, Xiaoxue, it's good. Ximen Hong smiled at his proud protégé with a red face, obviously very satisfied with her poems.
Ximenhong, isn't it up to you to decide whether a good poem is good? Don't you leave the poems to the three major judges? Ren Fannan, the gentleman of Bailu Academy, was standing next to Ximen Hong, and when he saw this, he couldn't help but whisper a sarcastic remark.
Hmph, Ren Fannan, as far as those students of your White Deer Academy are concerned, they will never be able to make such good poems, now I won't worry about you for the time being, and I will make you lose face later. Ximen Hong retorted coldly, and then proudly handed Wang Aoshuang's seven-law poem to the three judges.
The three judges were also quite interested in the poems and texts of Aoshuang, the first queen of Liuyun Town, and the three of them took the poems and looked at them, and the white-haired Confucian Gu Guanghui couldn't help but be amazed, and muttered in a low voice: The title is landscape, the thatched pavilion under the bamboo is cool in May, and the Tingsha cloud tree is late and cang. Pedestrians think about the infinite autumn wind, and the green mountains across the water are like hometowns. Good poems, good poems, really worthy of being the masterpieces of the first talented woman.
Mr. Gu, can you give us an analysis of the artistic conception in the poem? Lin Tiannan also felt that this was a masterpiece, so he wanted to listen to the analysis of the great Confucian Gu Guanghui. You must know that a thousand people will have a thousand ways to analyze a poem, Lin Tiannan actually has some feelings in his heart, but he is also a person who loves poetry, of course he hopes to hear the different opinions of others.
Haha, Lord Townkeeper, since you look down on the old man so much, then the old man will be cheeky to show off, and if you don't say it well, please bear with the Lord Townguard. Although Gu Guanghui said that he was showing off, he was actually extremely proud of his appearance, and he was obviously very confident in the insights of the poems.
Haha, Gu Lao is modest, please speak. Lin Tiannan arched his hand with the courtesy of a junior, making a deaf look.
When Gu Guanghui heard this, he immediately touched the white beard under his forehead, and talked eloquently: Wang Ruixue's seven-character quatrain is called the title of landscape, but the interest is not in the landscape, but there is no other meaning, and it is to express homesickness through the landscape.
From the content of the poem, it can be seen that "the thatched pavilion under the bamboo is cool in May, and the Tingsha cloud tree is late and green", which is written about the landscape and the scenery that I saw by chance during the trip. This scenery seems ordinary, however, if you put yourself in the shoes of a "May" and "pedestrian", you will find its good points.
Imagine, in the heat of midsummer, after a long journey, suddenly came to a place with mountains and rivers. Rest in the "Bamboo Thatched Pavilion", look outside the pavilion, on the background of the water and sky, the Tingzhou in the river, the green mountains on the other bank, the trees on the cloud level, the tone is deep and pleasant, like bathing in the clear water, giving people a comfortable feeling. The word "cool" conveys this pleasure.
The beauty of this poem is not that it writes about a relatively common thought and feeling, but that it writes about the unique process of occurrence of this thought and feeling, so as to convey a special life situation, which is intriguing to chew.
Gu Lao really deserves to be a great Confucian, and he simply commented on this poem to come alive, and the younger generations admired and admired. Lin Tiannan was immediately admired when he heard this, this old guy really has two brushes, and the whole poem was commented on by him, becoming more charming, worthy of being a great Confucian.
Gu Lao said it so well, according to the old man, the first place in this competition is Wang Aoshuang's. I think that none of the students present should be able to make poems that surpass Wang Ruixue. Another great Confucian Wen Tiansheng also spoke highly of Wang Ruixue's poems. The old gentleman directly came to the conclusion that the first place in this competition was Wang Ruixue's.
Wang Aoshuang's husband Ximen Hong listened to the discussion of the three judges next to him, and was immediately ecstatic, his face was flushed with excitement, he glanced at Ren Fannan beside him, his eyes were full of disdain, and he was so angry that Ren Fannan almost vomited blood, but he also heard the words of the three judges, and sighed secretly in his heart, he could only envy Ximen Hong for accepting Wang Aoshuang as such a talented student.
Gu Guanghui shook his head and finished analyzing Wang Aoshuang's poems, and the time of ten minutes was just up, and the other thirty-nine students all stopped writing, whether they were good or bad, they all made the poems, and their respective husbands collected the poems and handed them over to the three judges.
Students, you will take a break for half an hour, and after we three judges have analyzed all the poems, we will come and announce the results of this competition. Lin Tiannan spoke, and together with the two great Confucians, picked up the students' poems and walked to the side hall of Mr. Chenjia Academy, which was originally the place where Mr. Academy rested, and now it is temporarily used as a place to evaluate poems.
Chen Tiancheng drew on a poem written by the famous Tang Dynasty poet Wang Wei in this competition, "Remembering Shandong Brothers on September 9th", of course, he changed the title of the poem to "Thinking of Brothers", and then the word "dogwood" in the poem was also changed to "pineapple", and the full text is like this: "Alone in a foreign land as a stranger, every festival is more than a family." The remote knowledge brothers ascended to the heights, and there was one less person in the pineapple. Because in the Soul Martial Continent, there is also a custom, that is, before the New Year, the family will gather together and insert pineapple wood on the eaves at the door of the house, so that the coming year will bring good luck to their family, which is the same custom as planting "dogwood" on September 9 on the earth.
Since he came to the Soul Martial Continent, of course, he has to follow the customs, if he copies the original poem, then the people here don't know what Dogwood is at all, and the whole poem will not become groundless?
After Chen Tiancheng handed in the poems, he left the academy and returned to the backyard of the Chen family where he lived, he was not interested in such a competition, and he participated in the competition just to not disappoint Mr. Chen Ru, now that the task is over, he doesn't want to stay with Wang Aoshuang and them, so let's go home and rest.
Except for Chen Tiancheng who left alone, more than 30 other students from the four major colleges gathered in the hall of the college, stretching their necks, anxiously waiting for the three judges to come out and announce the results of the competition.