Rather than listening to Ah Qiu, the author of the street, my friends probably want me to have a few more chapters, but the first volume is over, and I feel like I should still say a few words.

Thank you to all the readers who can see here, and thank you for every speech, follow-up, vote, and reward.

Thank you for allowing me to get a second round of referrals. (It would be nice if I could get a third round of recommendations~)

Thank you very much.

Next, let's talk about the book.

The plot of the first volume...... Actually, there's not much to say.

It's too blunt, and it's tasteless.

Let's talk about a few points that are mainly controversial for everyone.

(1) Personality design.

Many readers think that Xu Qiansu and Ma Li are like Watanabe and Kiyono in the love tour.

I am actually happy to be felt like this, because I am really deliberately learning the daily style of love travel.

It's better to be recognized than to write a four.

Of course, Xu Qiansu is Xu Qiansu, Watanabe is Watanabe, Ma Li is Ma Li, and Kiyono is Qingye, and I wrote this just to add some attraction to the first volume.

Applying the character design in a vague way, this book will not go far.

In the future, there will be a plot to deepen the image of the male and female protagonists, and I hope that everyone can say that Ma Li is Ma Li, not only like Qingye God.

In addition, there are some supporting characters, who are felt to be too face-painted, typified by the chief manager killed by Gardelia.

This is my weak penmanship, deliberately creating a cool point and not pleasing it.

Let's study and improve my pen skills in the future.

(2) Painting style.

Many friends think that I am writing about dark streams, brainless and dark......

To be honest, after reading the first volume, no one should think so, right?

Knives or darkness are not what I want to write about.

What I want to write is a novel that combines the warmth of a Japanese-style light novel, the Pokémon world with logical reality, and has a bit of Jianghu and pyrotechnics.

It's just that some pictures may be too forceful, and some friends can't accept it, thinking that this kind of thing should not appear when writing elven texts......

The beginning and end of the plot, after careful study, is indeed a little unreasonable, but Ah Qiu thinks that it is reasonable after all. (Helplessness of weak pen power)

Now it seems that what Ah Qiu wrote is actually a romantic reality.

Romanticism is in the mix!

There are so many famous scenes in the first volume, do you say that it is romantic or not? (Fork waist)

If you think it's hypocritical, I'll say it differently, and I think so, because Ah Qiu is really just a newcomer.

Don't talk about elven writing, just starting from so many types of good books, like my style and writing, I think it should be ...... Not too much, right?

(3) Plot.

You should have already discovered that this book ...... There is no main story!!

Without the main line, there is a lack of expectation, a lack of motivation, and the results are not destined to be too good, I understand.

Not only that, but I also deliberately weakened the necessary elements of the web such as fighting monster upgrades and numerical strength.

Even in the final battle of the first volume, I didn't write about any battles and big scenes.

I also thought about appearing in the first volume with a villain who could be on the water for three or four volumes as an enemy, with revenge as the main line in the early and middle stages, and learning secrets.

I also thought about letting Sister Cang appear on the stage, as the climax of the first volume.

But then think about it.

As soon as I came, I wrote Cui Xue's kind of plot that did not conform to the trend of online writing, so I simply didn't do it endlessly, didn't think about the grades, and wrote what I wanted to write in the first volume.

Secondly...... I think that the core of Pokémon is the journey (not the poisonous anime), the encounter with all kinds of unknown Pokémon, who to meet, and what happened with whom, etc.

If you want to write about the flavor of Pokémon, you should write a travelogue! (Categorical)

Of course, this is not how an online article should be written.

The facts are not contrary to my wishes, and the results of all the factors that have contributed to death are ridiculously poor.

190,000 words, 7,000 collections, 480 follow-up ...... (Chase and drop woo woo)

Alas.

I won't say much about the results, so that my friends and friends think that I am asking you for food.

I don't know if you know Ji Da (Ji Cha)?

The harem stream's handle.

I've been reading online articles for many years, but I haven't finished reading a few books (because of more and more serious homogenization. ）。

Chicken Big Books are one of the few books I can chase, and everyone can check them out if they are interested.

He has a Xianxia essay "Asking the Red Dust", which left a deep impression on me.

Because it is also not in line with the trend of online literature, the first volume full of fairy and depth.

But in the end, even a great god like him had to change his style after writing the first volume to cater to the market because of the poor results of the first volume.

As an author who also wants to eat, I understand him.

But as a reader, I feel sorry.

After watching "Asking the Red Dust", I can no longer be interested in the Xianxia texts on the market.

Because the vast majority of them are just fighting and killing with different skins.

There is no fairy energy.

This is also related to personal taste, don't scold me, think I don't know what to do, I don't have vision (thank you).

I'm just sharing good books with you as a reader.

Far from it.

In short, what I want to say is that as a rookie writer, I don't have a big pen, and this book is not as good as "Asking the Red Dust" in terms of quality.

But I want to continue the way the first volume of this book was written.

It's just to show some different stories to friends who are as aesthetically fatigued as I am in the trend of Xiaobaiwen in today's online literature market.

Although this is destined to be something that a small percentage of readers enjoy reading.

Although with my weak pen power, in terms of perception, it may not be comparable to those small white texts and routine texts.

This book is 190,000 words, although I haven't received the news yet, but it must be on the shelves, so I implore all readers to support one or two.

(At the end of the day, I'm still asking for food.)

Thanks again.

Oh, and one more point.

Chirulian must have evolved into Shanado.

Some friends who can't accept it can give up the book.

I don't want to cheat you out of your money either.

Above.

Thanks again.