Readers, I'm sorry, I still don't think it's written well, I want to cut it, I've read this book many times myself, and I honestly feel confident when I open it.

I made a breakthrough compared to my previous books, I cut the middle of a book in my writing style, and then use the golden finger to expand the beginning and the end, specifically in the book to show that history has become a circle, and the timeline of the protagonist and the heroine is 9,000 years ago.

However, my book is very messy, and I can't control it myself.

My book summarizes a few points:

First, I wanted to add a lot of things in the early stage, which led to a very messy narrative, and the characters had not yet been erected.

It's a bit messy to write, the information has always been fragmented, and it doesn't feel like a moment is real and progressive, which is difficult in the current online reading environment and without a fan base.

Second, I started the third chapter by introducing the suspense factor, but the update is very slow and there are many mysteries, which may cause readers to keep the book.

Third, my writing shouldn't have kept up with my brain, the protagonist's character is not clear, the conflict is not obvious, and the sense of expectation is weak.

That's all I have on my mind at the moment.

I don't really want to just eat full-time work, I'm in college, I don't have financial pressure, I want to be recognized by readers, I've been writing books for a year, and I understand that there are very few books that come up late, and I don't think I have the ability to make my book one of them.

I'm sorry, guys, but I expect a new book to be released in two days.

Outline:

The beginning is the middle of the story, and then the beginning and the end are unfolded with a golden finger, specifically in the book, history has become a circle, and the timeline of the protagonist and the heroine is nine thousand years ago, which is also the name of this volume - the circle of the cycle, the edge of the non-cycle.

Equilibrium the western suburbs of Jianmen, Lin Yexue is buried in Zhengde year, and Chu Changge is buried in Jianwen year.

Later, Gu Changge will hide his identity, change history, and break the circle of history.

King Yan rebelled, King Qin also rebelled, and the history of 9,000 years corresponds to each other.

There are three big forces, Gu Changge's grandfather; Changer; People on credit.

The caviar plague refers to the history of large-scale human beings giving birth to children with fish tails, and the fish tails and heads form a circle, symbolizing the history of forming a circle.

The next few are written by the Fire Emperor Xu disaster to save Lin Yexue.

That's about it.

------------------- I guess I've opened a new book, and the writing won't be so messy, and the beginning will be more interesting________-

PS: Push this book, Zongman: I was the Hokage in Tokyo.

In two days, a new book should be opened.

Time and space are out of shape again!

but

This time it was Lin Yexue who came to an era that did not belong to her life!

The three big characters of "Hidden Abyss City", which are connected by Haoran Qi, show that the world should be Zhengde for 323 years!

Frightened, a thought burst into Gu Changge's mind-

It is not the cracked red moon that coexists with the disorder of time and space, but the self-harm of him and Lin Yexue!

A few days ago, after he Gu Changge harmed himself, he arrived at the time and space where Lin Yexue was; And after Lin Yexue self-harmed this time, Lin Yexue and him came to the time and space where he Gu Changge was supposed to be!

King Yan should now be the ancestor of the Great Jin Dynasty!

The Great Jin Chengzu, who has been dead for more than 9,000 years......

that

How to save Lin Yexue......

King Yan is not here, King Yan has been dead for more than nine thousand years!

The blood in his arms was cold, so cold that it brought a touch of despair to Gu Changge.

Sword Gate?

No way!

Regardless of the untouchable distance between the Sword Gate and the fact that Lin Yexue was a disciple of the Sword Gate Sect Master more than nine thousand years ago, even if he could return to the Sword Gate during the Jianwen period, I am afraid that the Sword Gate would not lend a hand!

As early as nine thousand years ago, in Mujia City, the Sword Gate abandoned Lin Yexue!

So what to do?

Town!

The advanced city is talking!