Thanks to the book friends who have supported all the way, thank you very much, this volume is completely finished, and the canghua chapter has come to an end.

Halfway through, I deleted and changed and deleted many branches, such as the little green snake will evolve in this volume, Lilia will find Rabbi and Xu Qiansu to start a plot, and Lusa Minay will also have a lot of scenes...... I have cut all of these, and I have devoted the vast majority of this volume to Cordelia and Zoroa.

So briefly chat with you and answer some questions from book friends.

The inspiration for this volume is the advice left for the player by the witch who died at the beginning of the Old Man's Ring.

"Even if the guidance has long been broken, please be the king of Elden"

The whole volume was written because of this sentence, and there are some chainsaw man, elements of the world's wonderful story, which some book friends have already guessed on the way to watching, so I won't point them out here.

On the whole, I am still quite satisfied with the Canghua chapter, which is far more satisfactory than the Cuixue chapter and the silver wind chapter.

Cui Xue in the Cui Xue chapter wrote too quickly and too stiffly.

Gadelia helped Xu Qiansu settle the alliance in order to be cool, and the impression was not very good.

The haunted house at the beginning of the Silver Wind chapter should be more delicate and interesting.

The middle of winter camping is too boring, and the subsequent cataclysm is too straightforward to look at.

The first two volumes have their own highlights, but they both have a lot of hard flaws, and I want to change them, but I don't know where to start, so I'll stop there.

Compared with the first two articles, I think the canghua article is obviously a lot better.

The foreshadowing is stronger than the Cuixue chapter, and the beginning and fall of the story are more reasonable and soft, that is, in terms of romance and rhythm, it is not as good as the Cuixue chapter.

And the Silver Wind chapter...... Except for daily life and "Traveler", there doesn't seem to be anything that can be handled.

The Canghua chapter absorbs my experience and lessons from the first two volumes, which can be regarded as a product of absorbing the strengths of the first two volumes and discarding the shortcomings of the first two volumes, but ...... It's less than the top, and more than the bottom.

It is more reasonable than Cuixue, and more lyrical than Yinfeng, but it is not deeply moved by Cuixue, nor is it joyful in the early and middle stages of Yinfeng...... It's a bucket, and it didn't surpass the first two articles in all directions, but it didn't have much of a hard injury.

When new readers read this book, I always suspect that the bad content I cited above will dissuade them, but the Canghua chapter does not have this trouble, and I think there are still relatively few book friends who give up this book after reading the Canghua chapter.

What I'm most dissatisfied with in the Canghua chapter is that the pace is too slow, so slow that it seriously affects the perception.

But that's just where I'm not satisfied.

In fact, many book friends hate Jiadelia's character design, thinking that she is a big smart, and she single-handedly manipulates the overall situation and wants Su Su to die for Zhulan, isn't it abusing the master? In addition, I replied at the time that this plot is not chasing a husband, so the book has no logic in an instant, the character design collapses, and the canghua chapter is extremely poisonous.

What's more, hang the book directly on the post bar to ridicule.

At that time, a reader who read Cui Xue and scolded me for being a weak writer immediately came to the comment area to sarcastically mock me.,I knew that this book was hanged.,After I deleted the person's comments and banned it.,I registered a post account.,Go to the post and look at it.。

I won't say how he scolded him, so as not to affect the good mood of the book friends, but I myself was shocked.

I only go to station B.,Like Shake Kuai,WB,Little sweet potato,Paste bar Zhihu and other software have never been used.,I only know that 'I recognize the aggressiveness of the sticker brother'.

But after reading that post, and then wandering around the post bar for two hours, I deeply understood this meme.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not angry, or lost or anything, on the contrary, I feel funny, I feel that I am still too young and too young.

The criticisms I suffered before, those hacked points, and the straightforward words of the sticker brother, are simply not an order of magnitude.

To give you an example, I often give you.

Chicken fork is big.

As the leader of the harem stream, he was even blackened by the old brother of the sticker.

"Asking the Red Dust", the first volume I like very much, was scolded by the old brother for being weak and childish, abusing the master, dark, Wenqing Wenqing, full of poisonous points.

Then the volumes behind the chicken fork changed the style of writing and catered to the market, but the result was still scolded for the weak plot, without depth and logic, the heroine carved out a template, and the emotional drama was not only a hero to save the beauty but also a hero to save the beauty...... What's more, he doesn't read books at all, and directly scolds the theme of many heroines, thinking that writing Xianxia should abandon lust or something, and countless defenders say that the chicken fork is feudal dross, and bluntly said that he dares to risk the world and write the most disgusting theme for modern people...... Well, harem.

Hahahahaha, I laughed at the time, laughing from the bottom of my heart.

Online articles, there are always their own highlights, their own shortcomings, just promote your strengths and avoid your weaknesses.

I don't write pretending to slap my face.,Cool text.,Then I won't write.,I write about the daily life I'm good at.,Love.,Pokémon...... So you directly scolded me for not being a cool article, and didn't pretend to be forced to slap your face, this is a fact, I admit it, but this is just a matter of subject matter, and I don't think it's worth a lot of effort.

Some authors are good at writing elven essays in the style of fantasy writing, pretending to slap their faces, grassroots counterattacks, and are not very good at writing about daily life and love, so he just writes about cultivating battles.

They all have a group of their own book friends, and everyone reads the part of the content they love to read.

Directly and brainlessly attack the short point of a certain book, note that it is a brainless attack, or even attack the subject matter itself...... It's really a bit weak, just like grasping the background of Dream of Red Mansions is feudal society, and the Romance of the Three Kingdoms only has power and war, and there is no light joy in daily life.

But it seems that ninety percent of the online articles are not worth mentioning in the mouth of the old brother of the post bar, and they all have points that can be attacked, so I was hung up, and I am indirectly famous hahaha.

Everyone was scolded, and I was not one missing.

But let's be honest...... It's still very interesting to fish and paddle in the post bar, and watch the sticker brother's various bad mouths.

Ahem, let's talk about the book again.

In fact, there are many readers who can't accept the adventure of the washing part of the cui, and think that I have written this book again and has lost its taste.

For one, Miss Marley has too few appearances.

Second, it is not good-looking in daily life, and many places are vague and incomprehensible.

Third, don't write Pokémon, write Gardelia.

About Miss Ma Li, as the soul of the first two volumes, she is quite popular, the number of scenes is reduced, and there is a suspicion of stock speculation, so many book friends skip this volume directly, which I think is correct, it is indeed a problem with the plot arrangement. (However, there are also many book lovers who have learned from it...... Well, Miss Niu Marie)

Because if Miss Mary and Xu Qiansu came to Xicui together, there would be nothing to do with Gardelia...... Emotionally, she has nothing to do, and she is really 'gone'.

So this is for the sake of many heroines, and it is a last resort, from the perspective of personality, if Miss Ma Li is not taken away, Xu Qiansu will never open his heart to anyone...... I have limited pen power, so I can only write like this.

Regarding daily life, it is mainly focused on the daily communication between Xu Qiansu and Jiadeliya, which is full of dialogue, only occasionally mixed with some benefits, but more of a lot of inexplicable demeanor and actions, many people look inexplicable, confused, and very strange.

This point is intentional on my part, not deliberately writing it inexplicably, but deliberately writing the emotional drama in a subtle and euphemistic way, 'affectionate, stop at courtesy', in line with the character design.

Xu Qiansu, Ma Li, and Jia Deliya are all smart-minded, quick-thinking, and observant...... It's similar to Kaguya-sama's 'love psychology warfare of genius boys and girls', except that I didn't write joyful romantic comedies, but embodied them in their words and deeds.

As far as Xu Qiansu and Jiadeliya get along alone, many of Xu Qiansu's words are profound and subtle.

I'll give you an example that I've written very bluntly in the article to make it easier for you to understand.

Kaede turned into Creslia and made Gadelia fall into a sweet dream, Xu Qiansu cared about Gadelia, but said, "Shanaiduo and they are Pokémon, and the safety aspect always makes me feel more at ease." ”

The logic of this sentence is that you and the Pokémon are both in a dream - the Pokémon are not as weak as you - he doesn't have to worry too much about the Pokémon - but you are very weak, and I am afraid that you, as a spirit body, cannot dream.

And Gardelia knew Xu Qiansu's implicit statement, so she put her mind at ease and said secretly, even if he cared about himself, he would not say it so bluntly, he would only use this kind of implicit statement.

Yes, implicitly, these two words implement the love between Xu Qiansu and Jiadeliya, and implement almost every word Xu Qiansu said to Jiadelia...... That's why Gardelia often smiles like a 'winner'.

Here's another example.

Beili Town, was assassinated, after Xu Qiansu touched the leaves, he asked, "...... You don't read my mind anymore? ”

This sentence is implying that Gadelia already knows that these two people were killed by Gadelia, and hopes that Gadelia will tell him if he has anything to say, and he doesn't have to hide it.

"I want to read, and besides, sincerity is often mutual, if you are willing to treat me sincerely, I will naturally not read your heart every time." Gardelia blinked before explaining...... This is the original text.

Gadelia guessed from Xu Qiansu's reaction that he had found something catty, but she was not sure, but she didn't dare to read the mind, similar to self-avoidance...... Because she was unwilling to let Xu Qiansu die for Zhulan at the moment, she herself was constantly struggling, and she hoped that Xu Qiansu could find out the problem by herself and live, and at that time, Jiadelia would have nothing to say and accept her fate calmly.

The reason why she mentioned sincerity was because when she and Xu Qiansu were in the seaside villa, they talked about sincerity and said that they should treat each other sincerely, but at this moment, Xu Qiansu guessed the secret of Jiadelia, but did not tell Jiadelia, no longer sincere, and Jiadelia was never sincere from beginning to end...... It's so ironic and self-deprecating.

This kind of meaningful dialogue has always been there since the two came to Xicui.

If you read this volume and read it again, you should have a different feeling...... I won't give more examples here, and if it's straightforward, it won't taste good.

Someone here is about to ask, Gardelia is obviously struggling in her heart, so complicated, but she can't see it at all! It's not reflected at all!

In addition to bad women, you can only see the attribute of a defeated dog.

Didn't you think about it that much at all, and now you say this just to raise the depth and let us readers make up for it ourselves!?

No.

In general, anime, in order to highlight the growth of the protagonist, will indeed go through a series of processes such as failure, confusion, and pain, and then make up your mind, do something, and grow.

But Gadelia is not, she is an adult, quick thinking, smart mind, even if her mind is complicated, but when she should act, she will shoot, and she will not be soft.

No matter what her heart is, in her actions, she is decisive and resolute, and she is never ambiguous.

Before she was confused, she acted decisively.

In the confusion, she still acted decisively.

No more confused...... Then don't mention it, act more decisively.

Compared to the average main character, Gadelia does not have a plot where she grows up due to confusion and pain and causes events (change goals/whitewashing, etc.)...... That kind of character design is too naïve for Gadelia.

So she didn't hesitate to give a psychological hint to herself, and let Xu Qiansu die for Zhulan.

also did not hesitate to commit himself to Xu Qiansu in the reversal of the world and help him return to Xicui again.

So in front of the vendor of oden, after being rejected by Xu Qiansu, she just said, 'I already knew', and other than that, there was no reaction...... Naturally, this is also my intention.

However, in order to make it understandable to the reader, I have added a lot of narration to bring out the complexity of Gadelia's thoughts...... However, a large number of readers said that they could not understand it.

This is purely because this kind of implicit writing is not suitable for online articles at all, most readers are just to read it easily without brains, who wants to spend time pondering the various deep meanings of the characters' actions and words in the book? Why do you have to be so tired to watch?

How to write the emotional drama of the characters, how to write it is simple and easy to understand, how to come to it, how to be cool and warm.

Therefore, it is normal for the vast majority of readers to see the subtle and euphemistic, full-depth Dream of Red Mansions-style love dramas like Xu Qiansu and Jiadeliya, and even feel boring and boring...... But you can't understand me, you scold Xu Qiansu, Ma Li and Gadelia are straight men and straight women, and scold me for not being able to write emotional dramas, then?

In the future, I will reduce this kind of subtle and euphemistic, tired and dazed love plot as much as possible.

Try to write about love as simple and easy to understand, after all, I also want to eat, and it is not realistic to use love to generate electricity.

But I still want a subtle sense of atmosphere.

For example, Xu Qiansu said 'I like Miss Marly's straightforward confession, there is only this time in the whole book...... Used to reject Gardelia.

So why did Xu Qiansu refuse Gadelia? Can't you just take it all?

No, because this is a love text, not a stallion text, Xu Qiansu will not accept one by one, nor will he accept a woman like collecting achievements and collecting items...... Men and women mainly have heart-to-heart communication, and they want to fall in love well.

Xu Qiansu is a principled person, he may be lustful, but he will not do anything to break the bottom line, he likes Ma Li, then he will not date any woman, but he will have a process of becoming a scumbag...... Gardelia was the key, the key to change.

Xu Qiansu lost his memory, so he just had a good impression of Gardelia, but Gardelia was still not as good as Miss Marley in his heart...... That's why I refused, and I didn't play ambiguous.

So why wait until you return to modern times to refuse? Xu Qiansu threw it away after using Gardelia, right?

No.

The rejection at the moment is for the sake of symmetry, as well as for the sake of white space.

At that time, Gadelia asked Xu Qiansu if he liked Ma Li, Xu Qiansu did not answer, but agreed that when they returned to modern times, the two must eat oden again.

When he returned to modern times, everything was over, and when the curtain came to an end, Xu Qiansu answered Gadelia's questions in almost the same place.

Writing like this, it is more flavorful, not because Xu Qiansu uses Gardelia.

Those who say that the male protagonist and every woman are ambiguous.,I said,I'm ambiguous about you.,Don't see a male owner who can talk about love, think he's a scumbag.,Co-authoring the male owner can only be a combat maniac of Mu Ne/hot-blooded youth/dark flow, etc., right?

I write love essays, can't the male protagonist be able to say love words?

Xu Qiansu was so cold to Liliai before, didn't you mention it at all?

……

Some book friends think that I am writing about amnesia to write that kind of bloody plot, but in fact, it is not ...... at all In this paragraph, one of the purposes is to deepen Xu Qiansu's character.

He was very smart, and he guessed through the books left by Zoroa, the memories of those two minutes lost, etc., that Gardelia must have paid a considerable price to him, and must have sacrificed a lot of things.

So although he didn't love Gadelia, he decided to love her.

That's why I said that this plot is not a crematorium for chasing husbands.

Xu Qiansu and Jiadelia, from the moment Xu Qiansu made up her mind to love her...... These two have already become.

In the character column, I wrote that Xu Qiansu and Jiadelia are a couple.

Regarding the arrangement of the future love drama, I won't reveal much at this moment.

When I wrote the chapter "The Silver Moon and the Incarnation of Sweet Dreams", I knew from the beginning that Creselia was Kaede, and this part of the plot, I thought it was romantic and sad, so sad that when I was writing it, I couldn't hold it back many times, and I slowed down after writing for a while...... At that time, I made up my mind that no matter what, I must give Xu Qiansu, Ma Li, Jiadelia and other male and female protagonists a happy ending.

They must be happy!

In addition, there is the tragic fate set by the chief rem for Gadelia, and many book lovers still don't understand what it is, after all, I don't mention it very directly, and it is explained in the tone of Gadelia.

Now let me get this straight.

In fact, from the very beginning, fate has already become.

Gardelia, in fact, has not been happy for a day.

Since I was a child, I was trapped by superpowers, and the most common thing I did was to sit alone in my room, staring at the tall blue wall.

Her rare source of happiness is Zhulan.

After controlling the superpowers, Zhulan's life and death were pressed on her heart again.

After finding a way to keep Zhulan alive, she really fell in love with Xu Qiansu again.

She wanted Zhulan to live, but she didn't want Xu Qiansu to die, so Zen Jing did her best and did not hesitate to dedicate herself.

But when Xu Qiansu successfully returned to modern times and Zhulan survived, she had completely fallen in love with Xu Qiansu and even gave him her body (although it was a fusion of true spirit and flesh), Xu Qiansu rejected her directly...... This, even Gardelia's own choice.

In the reversal space, if she doesn't seal Xu Qiansu's memory, then Xu Qiansu will die.

Seal Xu Qiansu's memory, and Xu Qiansu will not fall in love with her.

She's always making that choice......

Kyurem's prophecy at that time was that the future was destined to lose happiness, the most important thing for Gardelia. 】

Gardelia believes that there is a causal relationship, and that the loss of the most important thing in Gardelia leads to the loss of happiness...... This is wrong, this is Jiadelia's own speculation, she thought that Zhulan would die, Xu Qiansu would die, but in fact it was not.

She will lose her happiness, which means that she will not have a day of happiness after learning the prophecy.

She will lose important things, which means that she has completely fallen in love with Xu Qiansu, and after paying so much for Xu Qiansu, and even seventy percent of her spiritual power, she will personally seal his memory...... leads to the loss of Xu Qiansu in love.

There is also the connection between superpowers and Zhulan and Xu Qiansu, there are gains and losses, that's it.

I don't want to say more, I'm tired, I write too bluntly, and I lose my taste.

It doesn't matter if you don't understand it, because the prophecy of Kyurem has been cracked.

By Xu Qiansu, by Zoroa.

Kyurem set a time limit, which was March 7.

On the night of March 7, everything was over, Xu Qiansu rejected Jiadeliya, but when the time pointed to zero, on March 8, Xu Qiansu decided to love her...... Because of that book of Zoroa.

Fate is unpredictable, and no one can crack it, but in my text, there is only one way to break through fate...... That's Pokémon.

When Gadelia was in the reversal space, she could directly throw Zoroa back and bring Xu Qiansu back by force, there was no need to help Xu Qiansu at all.

But she chose to help Xu Qiansu and Zoroya spend the last month at the cost of losing seventy percent of her mental power.

Even if she was for Xu Qiansu, even if she didn't care about Soloya at all, she gave Soroya the opportunity to say goodbye to Susu, so by chance, the book left by Soroya made Xu Qiansu decide to love her.

As long as you give to Pokémon, Pokémon will surely reward you in various places!

This is true throughout the book.

In this volume, I cut down on the Pokémon mini-story and wrote about Gardelia with all the pen and ink to emphasize this point at the end of the volume.

So those who say I've lost my taste and don't write Pokémon, you're actually wrong.

Even though Zoroya and Xu Qiansu have experienced very little, they are not as good as Shanaiduo, but she is still willing to endure thousands of years of loneliness and pain for Xu Qiansu.

This kind of Pokémon born out of resentment is full of love for Xu Qiansu, and this love, like resentment, gave Zoroa the life to survive for thousands of years.

Why is Xu Qiansu's Zoroa so special?

I have already written in the original text that Zoroa was loved and came to this world, and her mother, Xu Qiansu, and Kaede all loved her.

I don't know much about her mother, but Zoroa was lying outside Ultramarine Town, waiting for Xu Qiansu and even couldn't help falling asleep, but the injuries on her body were inexplicably healed......

Zoroa was thrown out at a young age and lived independently, and when he was killed by someone, he felt resentment in his heart, so that he could become a complete body and have strength, which is the custom.

A Pokémon born of resentment, her mother never forced Zoroa to hate anyone, and never interfered with Zoroa's choice.

This kind of detail has highlighted the mother's love for Zoroa.

There are many other things that have deep meaning, so I won't say much more.

I'm tired and don't want to explain more.

All in all, the reason why Xu Qiansu's Pokémon is different is not appearance, not strength, not goldfinger, but story.

Thank you Ah Le for wanting the alliance leader of the fan and the reward of Yiye Zhiqiu, I will add more, and I will talk about it in the text.

I wrote 6,000 words in my testimonial, and I feel that there is still a lot to say, but I am tired, so I will have a chance to continue to talk in the future.

Thanks for the support. Thank you very much!

(End of chapter)