Testimonials at the end of the volume
As usual, after writing one volume, write another testimonial.
This is the end of the Melting Moon Chapter.
Thank you for your support.
Thank you very much.
Overall, it's a shame that this volume is, in my opinion, a little better than the Silver Wind chapter...... It's completely incomparable to the green snow and the canghua.
As you can see, this volume has been filling in the previous holes, and has been putting the finishing touches on the book, trying to make this 'circle' that has been formulated from the beginning as soft as possible.
According to my thoughts, this volume is the end, and Xu Qiansu's story will end completely with Rongyue climbing out of the wall.
But I couldn't help it, something happened that made me have to change my mind and try my best to write this story longer.
Originally, the two plots of Caolu Town and Shuizhou Town should be the length of Miss Mary and Miss Dale...... Later, in a hurry, it was pinched off, and the Spring Festival, the sports meeting, and the gym war were added in a hurry...... As a result, the rhythm and plot were in serious trouble.
Alas.
Pity...... What a pity.
But...... Well...... There are fewer and fewer book friends who are still chasing, and now there are only about 100 people left.
Forehead...... Has the plot collapsed to this point?
It seems that the vast majority of book lovers actually don't want to read the stories of Xu Qiansu, Jiadelia, Rongyue and others, but simply want to see Pokémon.
However, the goal of this book at the beginning is to write about Xu Qiansu's daily life in the Pokémon world, rather than one-sidedly cultivating Pokémon, and then beating passers-by, villains, gyms, and finally mythical beasts...... In this case, you can't just write Pokémon, otherwise, Xu Qiansu and the rest of the characters will not have much depth and room for growth.
And this volume is the most important plot to deepen Xu Qiansu's image, so the proportion of Pokémon stories is indeed less than before.
If only my pen power could be a little higher, it would be nice to connect Pokémon more closely to these stories.
It's my lack of ability.
But at this point, I am also determined to write like this, even if some book friends abandon the book, I will set up Xu Qiansu, Gadelia, Marly, Shanaiduo, Nine-Tails and other characters, so that they can live and live in the Pokémon world with flesh and blood, instead of using them as tools and leaving no impression after reading.
Someone here is going to say, "You don't think that if you write like this, you can write deeply, right?" Sending a knife in the Pokémon world is simply a piece of defense, ruining childhood, my evaluation is that it is not as good as Mr. Lu's hair. ”
I said, I'm going to fuck you.
I don't know why, recently there are always people who come here to comment that this is not as good as Teacher Lu, that is not as good as Teacher Lu, look at the title, oh roar, apprenticeship, either ran from piracy, or only read Cuixue...... In fact, the circle of our Pokémon authors is so big, and we all get along with each other...... It is also common to push books and chat with each other.
And although I don't know the big guy Beichuan, and I also know that my level is limited and my pen power is third-rate, but aren't you guys pure to recruit him black?
Like a fanatic.
Far from it.
Back to the book.
The emotions of this volume are more straightforward than the previous three volumes...... Because I don't write to this point, there are really many book friends who can't understand it (helplessly), but there are still a lot of obscure places.
For example, at the beginning of the book, Xu Qiansu often said, 'You have to become a great person,' but now he doesn't say that...... I did this in Miss Dale's words.
For example, there are only a few chapters at the beginning of this volume, and he begins to travel with Liliai...... This Lilia knows everything, so looking back now, I can see a lot of small details from her.
There is also Xu Qiansu's love for the melting moon...... I never wrote about how Xu Qiansu liked Rongyue, let alone let Jean cry because of Rongyue...... the atmosphere of the chapter "Traveler", I privately thought it was enough, and after Rongyue's death, Xu Qiansu also wandered for a week.
I still prefer to use the actions of these characters to express emotions.
In addition, it was Gadelia who agreed to Xu Qiansu to be with Lilia and Miss Marlie.
There was really nothing to say, and Gardelia had even begun to yell incoherently, enough to see her inner struggle...... So that chapter is basically straightforward, but this is an important turning point, so it's better to mention it.
Xu Qiansu turned into a scumbag because of the melting moon, and completely took that step.
Gadelia made a compromise because of Xu Qiansu.
In essence, it is because Xu Qiansu loves Rongyue, and Jiadelia loves Xu Qiansu.
If it weren't for Rongyue, it would be impossible for Lilia and Dale alone to make Xu Qiansu a scumbag, and Rongyue was brave and enthusiastic, and took the initiative to pursue Xu Qiansu, taking the lead in taking that step, and Xu Qiansu finally made a change.
Of course, Miss Emma's status in Xu Qiansu's heart can also be ...... But Miss Ma Li will not be as active and enthusiastic as Rongyue, nor does she have Rongyue's sense of urgency that 'I am about to die, so I must leave no regrets', so this role that Xu Qiansu changed will fall on Rongyue, her first love.
The reason why Gadelia agreed was also because Xu Qiansu's departure made her completely scared, and at the same time she was so distressed that she couldn't extricate herself.
With Gadelia's character, it is impossible to hold Xu Qiansu in his arms and comfort him softly after he returns from wandering...... She will only care and love Xu Qiansu in this way...... Even if she compromises herself.
Of course, she didn't want Xu Qiansu to be with other women, but as she said herself.
"No way, she loves Xu Qiansu hopelessly, as long as she can make him happy, then Gadelia is willing to do anything."
This is how Gardelia dares to love and hate, decisive and strong.
And what about Xu Qiansu? Whether it's a heart or a responsibility, or being smart, there's no need to mention it, this is just a part of his persona, and I'm going to focus on this volume...... In fact, it is his strength and gentleness.
It's like he was in a daze because of Rongyue's death, wandering for a week, and he didn't even notice that Six Tails were following him, but he instinctively bought bread for Six Tails, but after a week, he didn't experience anything and suddenly 'woke up'.
He is also confused and struggling, not omnipotent, but he does not want to show his vulnerability to others, and after suddenly 'waking up', even if he is still immersed in the grief after Rongyue's death, he has to comfort Naoko, let her accompany her family, comfort Liliai, let her be herself, and not live in the shadow of Rongyue.
He gains and loses, but is essentially a strong and gentle person.
This kind of character design is actually mediocre, after all, most of the standard male protagonists of online articles are like this...... That is, Assazi.
However, according to my habit, I basically don't want to write about Xu Qiansu's psychological activities, but I want to use these plots to highlight ...... I privately think that by writing like this, the character design can be more distinct.
Of course, most book lovers don't notice this, so I can only mention it here.
Here again, someone is going to say, "Are you strong and gentle?" Isn't it just to write about the harem? Write about you, how many heroines! The harem text is all bad! ”
I said, don't look at the plot, directly attack the theme without brains, do you have a 13 number, oh, no, none of you have 13, how can you have 13 numbers?
Well, that's all for this volume.
Next, answer some questions accumulated by book friends as usual.
1: The plot is like "Norwegian Wood".
That's right, Kobayashi Xiasen's 'Kobayashi', and 'Naoko', even sang "Norwegian Wood" on the bus, I have already written the tribute on my face, of course, I can say that I stitch strangely, plagiarism, I admit it.
In order to improve my writing, I recently read "Norwegian Wood" and "Snow Country", and I am currently watching "The Dancing Girl of Izu", so there are shadows of these works in the text. (I still like Norwegian Woods the most, and I've watched it several times.) )
2: It's been a little tired since the canghua chapter...... How is it written more and more like literature?
It's a bit overwhelming for me, it's not there yet, but because I'm reading the works above, it smells of literature...... In fact, the essence is still a young man's disease.
3: The emotional drama is a little better than Xiaobaiwen's emotional drama, it's really rubbish, you still go and watch the emotional drama of "Warlock's Manual" and study it hard!
Forehead...... I don't understand...... At the very least, I should point out where I wrote rubbish. If you have read the "Warlock's Handbook", please also point me out.
4: Is there anything else?
It should be no, after all, I want to write the monthly pass in the first 450, but with the current results...... Well, it's impossible.
But when I'm done, I might write a little bit...... Of course, you can only read it if you order it all, and I still hope that book friends who are watching pirated copies can support the genuine version, after all, the author also has to eat.
5: Always traversed, the timeline is too messy!
I should have written more about the crossing in an easy-to-understand way...... But in fact, only the Canghua chapter and the melting moon chapter have been worn twice, and this book is only these two times, after all, I have basically finished the plot, and the 'circle' has been drawn.
6: When will it end?
The next volume is the final volume...... Maybe 500,000 words or so?
7: What's next?
I haven't decided yet, but the next one is original, and with my third-rate pen power, hitting the street is the norm, so I'm thinking about whether to build a trumpet to write martial arts Xianxia (I'm a martial arts Xianxia fan)...... After all, the people who read this book are basically the audience of the Royal Beast and Pokémon Texts, and I haven't read the Royal Beast Texts at all, and I'm not interested in the Royal Beast Texts, so I don't know how to write them at all.
It's okay to be light, but at present, the love is declining, and I don't have the confidence to write results.
It's distressing.
8: The Gym War is quite well written, so do you want to write the League Contest next?
It can be written or not.
For me, it's really not interesting to write about the battle committee, you can write it casually, and you don't have to think about the plot, and the focus of this book is not on the battle, so I have always thought that writing about the battle is a bit of a hydrological meaning (because every time I write about the battle, I am actually relaxing my mind and being lazy to fish)
But there are also quite a few book friends who like the battles I write about and look forward to it.
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So vote for it, just like last time, and decide by looking at the number of comments in a week (write about the league tournament, then the battle will be more, if you don't write, it will be less, but there are also.) )
Here are two options.
Write.
Do not write.
……
Well, no.
That's the only question I can answer.
Thank you for the reward of the big guy of 'Moonlit Night Spring', thank you very much!
I basically update about 6000 words every day, so tomorrow I will update 8000 words, two chapters, and one chapter of 4000 words to add more.
This is the nineth's ten thousand rewards, and I didn't see it until now, so I'm so sorry.
Above, thank you again to the 100 book friends who are still chasing this book.
This is the end of the Melting Moon Chapter, and the next volume ...... The end of the chapter, the heart of the blue blood.