Chapter 205
"I'm Descartes Wenga from the second-grade martial arts class F! Senior sister please give me a lot of advice!", "I'm Shivana Revado from the second-grade magic class F! Senior sister please give me a lot of advice!" In the activity room of the art club, Eco and two unseen juniors of the art club introduced themselves to each other.
So, Eco asked, "Can you sue me?" How did you find this place in the first place, and how did you get involved?"
"That's right, senior......" Wenga, who has long grass green hair, said, "Shivana and I have lived and played together since we were children, so we have already had a plan, that is, after entering the Luoyin Academy, we will continue to enter a club, and then spend our years of college life with this club."
Shivana continued, "And for both of us, we have loved to read books since we were young, so a long time ago, we decided that we wanted to enter a literary club.
"As for the literary clubs, the pamphlets released by the student council also have the names of the books and periodicals that the club is most proud of, and then we went to find these books and periodicals to read, and our favorite among them is the collection of novels written by Eco's predecessors." Shivana said.
"So, we were going to come here to see if this club was the kind of club we wanted to join, and when we finally came here and compared a few other literatures, we quickly fell in love with the club with the largest room, the most books, and the quietest atmosphere in the college." Finally, Wenga added with a smile.
"I see." Eco nodded, and said, "This club is indeed very suitable for people who want to spend their college life quietly and like to read."
"So, what did you two show last year? What did you two do about the freshman showcase?" In her school year, Eco produced several excellent original works, including scripts from the drama club, which made the reputation of the art club increase a lot.
"Well, the two of us took out a poem that we wrote after working together, and asked our seniors to look at it!" The two of them looked at each other, and with a slightly confident smile, they took out a notebook of paper dedicated to collecting poems and separate prose from the bookshelf that the Art Society had been responsible for preserving the works of the society over the years, and then flipped to the penultimate page with the text on it, and showed it to Eco.
......After carefully reading the poem written by the two of them without a trace of subjectivity, Eco was silent for a moment, and then asked the two: "Have you shown this poem to the minister, and what is the minister's evaluation after reading it?"
When Eco said this, the expressions of the two girls were a little strange, they looked at each other and were silent for a few seconds, and after peeking at the old god who was sitting on the table, Senior Sister Xi, said in a loud voice, "Senior Sister said, as a newcomer, our work is very, very good...... And then he was given this sentence, which was to tell us to 'wait until you are more full-bodied, and then read the book for a while, and then come back to this hymn.'"
Hearing their answers, Eco was silent again for a while, and then gave his own evaluation: "Your poem is generally capable of hitting ninety-two or three, if it is only required of you by the requirements of newcomers.
"However, if you follow the requirements for ordinary community members, there is a lot of criticism to be made, do you want to hear that?" Eco asked quietly, the three faceless faces, who had always had no joy or sorrow, were so majestic that they couldn't seem to the two second-grade girls who didn't know the details of Echo's background.
......Seeing the humble reaction of the two, Eco nodded and said: "First of all, the biggest problem in your poems is that you take things for granted.
"And when I say 'too much for granted' in your poems, I mean that your poems use too many flashy sentences on top of praising true feelings, although it looks good, but I really don't understand what you praise or you just talk in generalities, giving people a feeling that it is too general."
"In addition, the rest of you are passable, and your literary style is not weaker than that of the average senior literary club student, which is very rare." Eco finally said: "So the most suitable thing for you to do now is to write more diaries, weekly diaries, and some documentary literature while reading books, and put down your literary talents first, and then write such literary things after slowly enriching yourself."
"We got it, Senpai." To Ike's surprise, after the two looked at each other, they seemed to convincingly agree with Eco's opinion, but seeing this, Eco was puzzled, so he asked: "Do you agree with my opinion? Can you tell me why?
Speaking of this, the faces of the two girls couldn't help but turn red, and they said a little awkward and shyly, "That...... At that time, after we got the minister's evaluation, we only felt that the minister was talking about animals, so we asked the minister to explain it to me in detail, and then the minister took our poems to other literary clubs and clubs to evaluate them to the presidents of those clubs, including some highly respected teachers."
"And then the comments are roughly as you say, Sister Eco, and they all point to the emptiness of the content of our poems."
"So, we know that this is indeed our own shortcomings, so of course we won't be dissatisfied with your opinion at this time." The two of them finished the sentence clearly, and when they heard this, Eco looked at the tide quietly.