Tetsuya Shimomura's face changed, and he didn't feel that he was experiencing a very new kind of CPU at all, from a passive editor who climbed step by step from an editorial assistant to a chief editor, from passively eating cakes to being accustomed to drawing cakes for his subordinates for the author.

After all, although it actually has the effect of PUA, there is no sentence in Hojo Kyosuke that blames the other party, and he is making excuses for the other party's mistakes throughout the text, as if the mistake made by the editor Shimomura is necessary to lead to a better world, and his mistake is to contribute to the common cause of both parties.

In a nutshell – you've made a mistake...... But that's okay, I don't blame you.

Looking at the action of the editor Shimomura slapping himself, Kyosuke Hojo's eyes widened slightly, God testifies that although he wanted Mr. Shimomura to remember this favor, he never thought that it could have such a good effect. He didn't know anything about CPU and PUA, and he has always been sincere.

And what he said to the editor of Shimomura was indeed from his heart, after all, he had figured out from the beginning that this pot really couldn't be thrown to the other party, after all, ...... If you can't find yourself as an author to talk to, the editor will always be lonely, and it's understandable that you can't help but want to talk to other people, right...... Hehe......

Smack-

A crisp sound pulled Kyosuke Hojo out of his deep thought.

nice slap ah Shimomura editor! The movements are clean and neat, the voice is crisp and powerful, and without ten years of apologizing experience, I will never be able to slap such an excellent slap, I believe that no matter what mistakes are made, they will be forgiven!

Kyosuke Hojo used his scanning eye to write Tetsuya Shimomura's perfect slap firmly into the hard drive in his brain, and he had a hunch that he might be able to use this trick one day.

Seeing that Shimomura was about to perform the promotion technique "Continuous Big Slap", Kyosuke Hojo hurriedly grabbed the other party's hand.

"Enough! Are you trying to trap me in injustice, Shimomura editor! If you want to continue, then I can only accompany you! ”

As he spoke, he raised his hand, gesturing to give himself a look.

Scare!

As soon as he saw this move, Tetsuya Shimomura was immediately startled, his old face was beaten, anyway, it was already fat, even if it was swollen, it couldn't be seen, but Mr. Hojo's face was still used for advertising, but it must not be beaten!

So this time he came to hold the hand of Hojo Kyosuke, which is also the story of the neon Warring States history is mostly the story of the monarch Fengle (Xia Keshang), otherwise I am afraid that I will immediately think of a fall asleep, Zhou Gong spit out the words.

But I can't say.,After all, neon people really like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms.,There are countless adapted comics and books.,Maybe Tetsuya Shimomura himself has been in charge of the relevant cartoonists.。

No, Kyosuke Hojo keenly noticed that the old man's eyes were a little different.

Oops, this CPU works too well, right?

After being taken aback, he quickly let go of his hand, leaned back and sat back on the sofa, picked up the briefcase and placed it on the coffee table between the two.

"Shimomura, let's take a look at this first." He pulled out a thick wad of printer paper.

"It's ......"

Shimomura picked up the manuscript with a sigh, and on the cover was written "Detective Conan", which was the mystery manga he had been thinking about for a long time.

"Didn't you even finish the character design before? Why did you suddenly draw so much? ”

He was puzzled, although when he communicated with Hojo Kyosuke before, the other party said that it had already been done, but he was already an old acquaintance, and he clearly knew that it must be perfunctory, and those people were clearly the result of the on-site rush when they called.

"What does it mean that the character design is not completed?,I started preparing when you said you wanted me to draw a mystery comic.,These parts have been completed a long time ago.,It's just that you still have concerns about whether to serialize this work.,I don't want to add pressure to you, so I haven't taken it out for a long time.。

You know how productive I am, Shimomura-san! ”

Kyosuke Hojo said dissatisfied.

I see, that's exactly what Hojo-sensei does. is so gentle, you can feel his soft and delicate heart in any detail.

Tetsuya Shimomura was indifferent and lowered his head to look at the manga.

Turning the first page, well, it's true that the stunt that the two discussed last time was a high school student lynching a prisoner with a soccer ball.

The character modeling is completely different from Hojo Sensei's previous works, whether it is "One Punch Man" or "Attack on Titan", unless it is a special character, the head-to-body ratio is basically in line with human common sense, but it will be slightly modified for aesthetic reasons. Even the last time I sent a picture of the person I saw, the head and body proportions were coordinated.,But this time the original draft of the comic has been modified according to my own suggestions.,The head has become a lot bigger.,It looks a little more Q version feeling.。

Oh roar, is it directly with a globe this time? That kind of material is kicked at the old man's head as a football, can the other party still live?!

What is the content of the beginning of "Detective Conan", most people should only remember the classic roller coaster murder case, and then the male high school student Kudo Shinichi was dragged to a small alley to pour medicine, and finally he was found naked with a confused face.

But before the roller coaster, there is actually a plot that is used to show the protagonist's reasoning ability and motor nerves.

A rich man held a banquet and invited a bunch of guests, including the man he wanted to kill. Therefore, the richer the person, the more he cherishes his feathers, and he is not even willing to hire a murderer, for fear of being caught, and he has to do everything himself.

The old man performed a flying eaves and walked the wall, and directly created a secret room that was not rigorous at all and shot the other party, and the basis for him to get rid of suspicion was that he was injured in the leg, and it was impossible to do such a thing.

In the end, when the police were at a loss, Kudo Shinichi appeared on the stage and directly said that the master was the murderer. That reasoning cannot be said to be God, only that Jesus Christ is nothing more than that. Not only did he tell the master's criminal modus operandi directly like a prisoner showing him face-to-face, but he even knew that the master's leg was healed three months ago, so you really have the right to confidentiality as a patient.

And when the old man was still talking about his leg injury, the detective Kudo Shinichi directly picked up the globe on the table next to him and smashed it, and the old man dodged it with agility. That is, Officer Dusk's head is empty, otherwise he will have to sweat when he sees the master's skills. At least Kyosuke Hojo felt that few of his baseball club members could dodge.

Then when the master wanted to escape, the football star directly sent the master back to the west with a globe. Ah no, uniforms, just uniforms, if you want to ask why you didn't die, that's the power of science!

This paragraph in the original work only occupies a few pages, but it is these few pages that have made Kyosuke Hojo sweat when he recalled.

This is completely rubbing the IQ of all reasoning and reasoning comic reasoning fans on the ground.,No wonder this work was never considered a reasoning comic.,No wonder the original Detective Conan was a sub-oriented work.,This is really just right for children to see.。

Not to mention, it's just the news that Kudo Shinichi said that the old man's leg has been healed for three months, which at first glance does feel that the protagonist is omniscient and omnipotent, and it is powerful, but it has completely violated one of the creative principles of mystery works, that is, "detectives must not solve cases based on clues that have not been prompted to the reader".

Reasoning isn't just about showing how good a detective is, uh, well, it's true that at least the vast majority. But a large part of the fun is to let the reader take in and decipher with the detective, even if it is Sherlock Holmes, he will not solve the case out of thin air, the reader enjoys the hearty feeling of the moment when a series of clues are connected and the truth is revealed. It's not that the detective suddenly gets the "apocalypse" to directly identify the murderer, what kind of reasoning is this!

Children will say that you are a liar, why do you only know that his leg is good, I don't know, you are a reader, I am a reader, bastard!

He is also a serious reasoning writer, and if this kind of nonsensical plot is sent out, his reputation will be ruined. Even if it is explained that it is a work of young age, but those readers who support his comics for "The Dedication of Suspect X" are afraid that they will immediately turn to black and write letters to scold him, and the results of the investigation will not be too ugly.

Although Chahan is not ashamed, he still has to have a face.

Based on this, although he has always adhered to the original book and must have his reasons for success, Kyosuke Hojo still revised it a little, not too much, but just gave some small details to show that the master's leg is actually better. It does not affect the overall plot, nor does it dilute the strength of the protagonist, but the rationality is greatly enhanced.

As for the globe hitting the old man's head in the back, he didn't change it, this can't be changed, and there are countless occasions for lynching of the big-headed god of death after that, which can only be regarded as his characteristic.

"It's so joyful, I can't tell it's Hojo-sensei's work at all."

Tetsuya Shimomura sighed, obviously it was a murder scene, and it was obviously a person who was not easy to mess with in pitch black, but as soon as he heard Kudo Shinichi's name, the crowd and the man in black turned on the star-chasing mode one after another.

"Ahh Is he the famous high school student detective Shinichi Kudo? ”

"The savior of the neon cops!"

"Look at it, it's Shinichi Kudo," the little girl screamed.

"Can I shake your hand?"

The headless corpse is still lying behind, but everyone's eyes are focused on the protagonist.

"It's a bit outrageous, but readers do feel refreshed, this feeling of being in the spotlight." Tetsuya Shimomura nodded, as an editor, he should not pay attention to whether the plot is reasonable, but whether the manga is attractive. Fun is the only truth!

"Heh, hehe......"

Kyosuke Hojo laughed dryly, in fact, when he was painting, his rigorous scientific thinking made him very eager to delete it, but in the end he decided to believe Mr. Aoyama.

Tetsuya Shimomura continued to watch and quickly finished reading it, but instead of speaking, he immediately began to watch it a second time. This is a problem.

"Hojo ......," his voice was a little muffled.

"What, is there something wrong?" Kyosuke Hojo was a little nervous, although the other world had confirmed the invincibility of this work, but Bao Buqi would not be able to adapt to the water and soil, and Tetsuya Shimomura, as the chief editor of "Weekly Shonen High" for several years, had absolutely no vision.

"This comic was just finished this morning, right?" Tetsuya Shimomura raised his head with confusion and disbelief in his eyes.

"How is it possible, how can you draw so much in one morning, you don't kid."

Kyosuke Hojo flatly denied that he handed over the pile of manuscripts to Tetsuya Shimomura, but after drawing the roller coaster murder, the smaller detective, the little pervert infiltrated Maori's house, and the little girl was kidnapped Conan with a dog to find someone. It can be said that it has basically shown what this comic looks like as a whole.

He also modified it a little and changed the plot of Conan riding a dog into a dog pulling a cart.

Riding a dog may seem comic, but not only is it unscientific, but it may also give the reader a bad example. If this comic can be successful, the number of readers will be very large in the future, and it will be bad if there are really children who see it and ride their own Wang sauce.

The body structure of dogs is not suitable for riding, and the evolution of canine animals determines that they cannot be used as mounts, even for children. So Kyosuke Hojo changed to a dog-drawn cart, which is much more scientific, his hometown is Hokkaido, do you know that the dog sled is pulled? It is also possible to pull a cart.

In this way, it doesn't matter if someone follows suit, it can also enhance the relationship between the dog and the owner.

In short, how could so much content be drawn in one morning! If this is admitted, there will be no reason to delay it in the future! It will be used as a cow and a horse!

"You guy, you still want to quibble, there's a timestamp here!!"

Tetsuya Shimomura raised the sketch in his hand and poked his index finger vigorously at the corner of the page, where the date of the last revision was clearly written.

Forehead...... Kyosuke Hojo's expression froze.

This...... It should be that Senior Sister Shiyu is not familiar with the software, so she added it, right?

He immediately thought of the reason, after all, whether it was him or Ying Lili, they were used to delaying the draft, and in order to cover up that they were in a hurry, they would never make such a low-level mistake, so it could only be Senior Sister Shiyu, she was involved in the production of comics for the first time, and it was understandable that she didn't pay attention to this kind of detail......

Wait a minute......

Hojo Kyosuke suddenly happened, the guy in Kasumigaoka, is also a procrastination, and her editor-in-charge, Miss Machida, has come to Ruyiliao more than once to urge the draft. And although this guy insists that everything is going well every time, when Miss Machida rushes into the house, he looks like a dead pig who is not afraid of boiling water, and he will not find a bunch of excuses to hide his laziness like Yingli Li.

So, this timestamp may not be that she doesn't care, but that she is used to doing it.

"Look, I'm obediently coding words, and I'm still typing on the keyboard before the deadline, so spare me~~"

That's probably what it means.,After all, that Miss Machida has been taking care of Kasumigaoka-senpai since she was in junior high school.,Even the nickname is "Little Poem".,It's completely playing the role of a mother.。

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