The next day, on the evening of the 29th.

Jiang Xiao sat on the bed and looked at the computer.

When I opened the comment area, I was instantly stunned.

[I lose it! The author is big, you write about the same bed so quickly, isn't it a little early? 】

[I didn't even savor it when I wrote it so quickly, you wrote it all to the same bed.] 】

[It's very well written, isn't it... Isn't that female partner a little stupid? I was speechless for a while! 】

[Can you not write about that female partner? ] I just want to scold her! 】

[Don't do this! This male and female partner is really disgusting! 】

[The male partner is the same as a scumbag, and the female partner is the same as a green tea! ] I'm annoyed. 】

Jiang Lin was instantly dumbfounded when he looked at those comments, he could still understand the previous comments, but what happened to the female and male supporting actors?

Looking at yesterday's new commentary, Jiang Lian was speechless, and stretched out his hand to gently rub his temples.

Trying to suppress this emotion, not letting the angry emotions occupy his brain, I read yesterday's new comments a few times again, thinking of finding some lessons from those comments and finding out those changes.

But after watching it a few times, I finally couldn't hold it anymore.

"™ Yes! What the hell is going on? ”

Jiang Lian's head was a little big for a while.

I've worked very hard to cater to the tastes of these book friends, how can I still make mistakes?

Just when he was helpless, the meow god sent a message.

[Meow God]: Why are you lonely? Did you see those comments?

Jiang Xiao looked at the message sent by Meow God and was a little helpless.

Obviously, the titles of his books are so straightforward that they can be easily understood.

As the beginning of the beginning of his sister next door, it is clearly written that this is a sweet love essay.

It clearly shows that the sister next door is his childhood sweetheart.

As a dog food text, the title must be simple and easy to understand, so that readers can understand what their book is about and what the book is about, which also reaches the basics of dog food literature.

The introduction is the general idea of the book, allowing the reader to see what they are writing about the book.

The introduction of this book is very simple, directly and clearly pointing out that he is an online writer, but his vest was discovered by the sister next door, who is his female book friend, and then started the life of the two of them.

Even if the title and introduction of his book are clear enough, it only achieves a good start to a novel.

If you want to really get a relatively satisfactory result, the first 150,000 words before the channel must not appear a little poisonous, the first 150,000 words of an online novel is the golden period, although there are 100,000 words in the new book period, but you can't be sloppy at all.

Thinking of this, Jiang Lin replied to the message of the meow god.

[Since Meow]: Hey! I really broke down! What went wrong with my book? Can you give me some pointers? I really don't know where the poison spot is!

[Meow God]: Actually! You're just knowingly asking.

[Silent Meow]: ?

[Meow God]: Are you stupid? This female partner has been digging into the wall.,It's just showing love to the male protagonist at every turn.,This reader will feel disgusting, right?

[Meow God]: It's the same with you, the male partner, who has been showing love to the female protagonist, proposing marriage at every turn, tracking, it's going to be annoying!

[Silent Meow]: Uh... Oh yes, but... If you don't write this plot, you can't push it!

[Meow God]: What does it matter to us? We just hate it, no matter how you push the plot

Seeing the reply of the meow god, Jiang Lin fell into deep thought.

After a long time, Jiang Xiao came back to his senses.

He seemed to understand that his own starting point seemed wrong from the beginning.

[Meow God]: I'll give you a hint.,This doesn't have to be used to promote the plot.,Male protagonist's friends,Family,Roommates..... A series of people can be used to promote the plot.,Your writing is too realistic.,Readers will be annoyed to read it!

[Meow God]: The dog food article pays attention to being relaxed and happy, sunny and windy, and the daily text is used to relax the mood, you write like this, it is really disgusting.......

These pieces of information from the meow god instantly woke Jiang Lin up from the endless darkness, and immediately made Jiang Lin come out of the confusion.

This......

It is not an exaggeration to describe it as a sudden realization.

"Oh ~ SO pinch! That's where the problem is! Jiang Xiao looked at these words sent by Meow God repeatedly, chewing back and forth repeatedly, and finally understood his problem.

[Meow God]: So! Pigeon Essence! Do you understand?

Jiang Xiao did not hesitate and replied directly to the meow god.

[Silent Meow]: Thank you Meow! I get it! Let's not talk about it first, my inspiration and plot are here, so I'm going to write it first.

Meow God: Uh-huh.

Jiang Xiao turned off his phone, looked at the computer in standby, and took a deep breath.

Meow God! You are simply the savior of my Jiang Lone!

I definitely want to thank you so much after meeting you.

He exhaled a long breath, then manipulated the mouse and gave a thumbs up to each of the cuties who started a comment.

Then he opened the orange melon code word, and took advantage of the inspiration provided by the meow god to prepare to save some more manuscripts tonight.

And Su Wan in the girls' dormitory.

Lying on the bed, his body shrunk in the quilt, holding his mobile phone in both hands, and the shining beam shone on Su Wan's delicate and fair face.

Because the stinky pigeon spirit of Lonely Meow Meow has been updated too little, it has only updated thirty-seven chapters, and after Su Wan finished brushing it again, he really had no choice but to brush it again, and he had already seen twenty-eight chapters at this time.

[Under the dining table, Su Qingwan stretched out her slender and slender white legs, and without hesitation, she directly wrapped around one of Jiang Sheng's legs, gently rubbing the ........]

Su Wan's cheeks blushed instantly when she saw this scene, and every time she saw this sweet and exciting but still hazy plot, Su Wan couldn't help but clench her legs.

"That.. How can there be this, I was just rubbing my brother's legs and being coquettish at that time~"

Su Wan didn't stay on this paragraph too much, and turned directly to the next paragraph.

"Hmm~Hmph~~It's so sweet~ I can't help ......"

Su Wan's face was flushed, rubbing her body on the bed in the small bedroom, clamping her legs from time to time to relieve her shame.

The bed couldn't withstand Su Wan's friction and shaking, and it made a creaking sound gently.

Hmm~~ No, no!

Well, it's so sweet! I can't help it.....

In this way, Su Wan's face turned even redder, and after slowly closing his eyes, he was ready to calm down.

But...

When he was calming down, the scene in his mind became Su Wan following Jiang Lian.

The scene of the two eating hot pot together that summer surfaced in Su Wan's mind.

Just when Su Wan was just falling into a fantasy, the bedroom door was pushed open, and Wang Wei jumped into the bedroom.

At a glance, I saw the crumpled quilt on Su Wan's bed, Su Wan was lying in it with a blushing face, and her body involuntarily rubbed against the bed.

"Yo! Wanwan, are you watching a film here again? Wang Wei came to Su Wan's bed with a shy, and climbed directly onto the bed ladder.

Su Wan's face turned even redder when she saw what Wang Wei and what she had just said.

But Su Wan didn't watch the film! What I read is the online article written by Lonely Meow.

"I... I didn't watch..."Su Wan's voice became smaller and quieter, and the state just now was too excited, resulting in Su Wan being a little speechless now, unable to use strength, as if her body had been hollowed out.

"Huh!" Wang Wei looked disdainful, "I said I didn't see it, looking at your current appearance, it's really good...... Ahem, do you understand? ”

Su Wan looked at her a little dazed, what is it?

I'm so simple!

I really don't understand!

Su Wan looked at Wang Wei with a simple face, as if to say, I am very simple, I really didn't do that kind of thing.

"Weiwei, you have to believe me~ I really didn't do that kind of thing."

"Huh~" Wang Wei stretched out her hand and gently pinched Su Wan's face, and then said softly: "Wanwan, why don't you go and mess with Jiang Lian, don't suffocate your body, your body is the most important thing~"

Wang Wei looked at Su Wan with a wicked smile.

"I really don't! My brother and I are very simple! Su Wan got up slowly, and then rubbed on the tablet in front of Wang Wei.

"Then you can go to the bathroom and solve it yourself, don't really suffocate your body!

"I didn't! I really don't! ”

"Eh, don't be embarrassed, they're all girls, just say it if you have a need~" After finishing speaking, he gave Su Wan a look that you understand.

Then Wang Wei got out of bed directly, returned to her bed, closed the curtains and didn't know what to do.

After Wang Wei returned to her own bed, Su Wan blushed and held the phone on her chest.

Humph!

It's all to blame for the lonely meow cat! It's all to blame on the stinky brother! How can it be written so sweetly!