At the end of the book, these three words are still the characters I typed for the first time.

The appearance of this book was a complete accident, and the book friends in the book friend group probably knew that this was my second book. I hadn't finished my first book yet, and that book, I don't know if it was too bloody or for some reason, was sealed a year ago.

It was because of this accident that I wrote this second practice book.

The first novel I read was the Throne of the Divine Seal, which was in the fourth grade of elementary school, and the second book was the peerless Tang Gate, so I remember the plot of Douluo Er's book very clearly, and Sanshao left me a lot of regrets in this book, which is listed below.

One: Wang Qiu'er's death, I don't particularly like this role, but after I thought about it, I found that her death was a tragedy directed by Tang Sanyi.

She was born thousands of years ago, that is, she has thousands of years of consciousness, and Tang Wutong is only in her teens and less than twenty, why do you have a part of Tang Wutong's soul in her body?

The only explanation is that she is Tang San's pawn, and she is the stepping stone that Tang San carefully prepared for Tang Wutong and Huo Yuhao. Her death was meaningless, even the love she thought she had for Huo Yuhao was born under Tang San's arrangement and under the influence of Tang Wutong. It's just pathetic.

So I want to give her a new ending, hasn't she been under the care of the beast all the time? Then I will arrange a simple and honest Xiong Batian and an eccentric monkey brother to accompany her.

Her emotions are not controlled by others, so I will let her always be innocent and not touch love. She was the heroine in my heart at first, but then I thought about it, it was not easy to write, and why should I interfere with her?

Her love can be the same as Monkey King, and she will find it by herself at the end.

Didn't she name Wang Qiu'er because of Wang Dong'er's influence, I asked her to be like Sun Wukong, with Sun as her surname, and her name was chosen by herself, although I also thought about it, but in terms of plot, it was taken by her independent consciousness.

In my book, Wang Qiu'er's name is Sun Wuyan, she has a good sandbag, she has a good big brother, her life in the Star Dou Great Forest is not just hunting, her emotions will be searched by herself, whether it is to find a soul beast, whether it is to choose a human being, she has her choice.

Two: The tragedy of Zhang Lexuan.

I feel that Sanshao has added a lot of emotionally manipulated plots to this book, Wang Qiuer is because Wang Donger fell in love with Huo Yuhao, and Zhang Lexuan regarded Bei Bei as her husband because of her kindness to Mu Lao.

Although her emotions have a certain influence on Mu Lao, they are generated by her and Bei Bei getting along day and night for more than ten years, which is better than Wang Qiu'er, but later, the love she cultivated with Bei Bei for more than ten years is gone.

Why is it gone?

Because Bei Bei doesn't like her, her feelings for Bei Bei are gone.

An emotion that she didn't let go of when her savior asked her to let go disappeared in the test of the gods. Just because she needs to fulfill Bei Bei and Tang Ya?

Fulfillment can be her withdrawal, but it shouldn't be a manipulation of her emotions, if emotions and memories can be intervened, what is the difference between people? Wash away the memories and instill another person's memories and you will no longer be you.

Even if it was her decision, who can guarantee that her decision would be the best for herself, and if she could, I would have been right in my multiple choice questions.

So I borrowed Zhang Lexuan's mouth to say my views on emotions and memories, although I took her back seat, I didn't want to write about how she struggled in love, and I also didn't want to make decisions for her, the appearance of ideas can be changed, but there is no regret medicine for the loss of emotion.

Three: The Passing of Electrolux

This also makes me feel unworthy, Electrolux is my favorite character in the Throne of the Divine Seal, he has the best life, and then he was betrayed by his fiancée, he lost everything, but he didn't give up, he started from scratch with a blood feud with his family, and became the only light-attribute necromancer in the world.

And such a strong man who chanted "Holding the sun and moon and picking the stars, there is no such person as me in the world", he died in order to give Huo Yuhao a skill that he had only used once or twice in the whole book, and died in order to introduce a soul system that could not completely cure the contradiction between humans and soul beasts.

It's not worth it!!!!

Four: The rest of the tragedies that occurred in the peerless Tang Gate

There are many of these parts, Feng Ling, who was turned by human nature in the second competition, Tang Ya, who lost everything and was manipulated into an evil soul master to hurt his lover, Mu Lao's death. To make up for these regrets, I wanted to write this book.

After saying these regrets, I was also amazed that I could write such a long book, a high school student, about to face the college entrance examination, I wrote 760,000 words intermittently.

Without signing a contract and generating electricity entirely with love, I wrote for such a long time, and I absolutely can't do without your support.

My last book was about tokusattsu, a fairly small category, and there were basically less than a hundred people reading me. I'm also very happy to see it by fewer people, after all, it's a book for practice, too many people read it, isn't it embarrassing for me?

So this niche theme was deliberately chosen by me. I thought Douluo was also a very unpopular subject, so I chose this book to write.

In fact, there were two options in front of me at that time, one was an infinite stream based on the ending of the 03 version of Steel, and the other was this book. At that time, because of the infinite stream, I also needed to switch worlds or something.,I chose this one because I was troublesome.。

I can't imagine that I am the frog at the bottom of the well, Douluo actually has so many people reading it, and now there are 17,000 people at the starting point alone who have put my books on the shelves, and if you read it on QQ, there are probably more than 30,000 or nearly 40,000.

This is quite strange for the small author who only read the last book with only a dozen or twenty people, and it is not enough to have so many people read it, which put pressure on me to be able to persist for so long and finish the first complete book in my life.

The original idea of this book was the story of a young man with a Lingming Stone Monkey Martial Spirit in the Douluo Continent.

Later, my mind changed him to the story of Sun Wukong coming to the Douluo Continent and losing his memory

It only later became such a story.

I didn't have an outline when I wrote it, and I wrote it in a hurry, because in a normal plot, most of the three chapters lead to contradictions, three chapters raise the villain, three chapters end the battle and lead to a climax, and finally use one chapter to summarize.

But I'll update it on five or six days later, so I write in a hurry, and it's unlikely that I'll write a full 9,000 words about the advancement of the plot, which also leads to me writing some passages that can't advance the plot and set off the atmosphere, most of which are descriptions of the environment, descriptions of the heart of the battle, etc

The detail is improper, and the rhythm should be rushed, but it also seems a little dragging under the influence of improper detailing.

Not to mention the criticism of my own book, this is also my own hard work, and it is difficult to say the criticism fairly.

Let's talk about the new book.,My new book was probably opened around June.,A Naruto fanjin.,The protagonist also doesn't know the plot development of the world.。

Because I hate this kind of open-eyed book, and why did I write about the Hokage? The main thing is that there is a book friend who wants to read it.,Otherwise, I'll probably write steel refining fandom.,Completing the story of Edward that appeared at the end.。

Okay, that's it, thank you for your company. See you soon