Scam corpses
Hello everyone, I don't know when you saw the update of this chapter, but I wish you a good morning, good afternoon and good night.
After a week's break, looking at the number of collections that are decreasing every day, my heart is bleeding (T▽T)
It can't be helped, reform is going to bleed, and I thought about this when I made the stop-change work.
In this era of fast food, leaving is the norm, and people come and go in a hurry.
I don't blame them, but if you think about it, I'll probably make the same choice.
It is precisely because I will make that choice that I choose to leave you behind is even more precious.
If you decide to cut the book because of the frustration of some people's departure, then I am so sorry for those of you who like this book.
I'm really happy to see your messages, and that's the biggest motivation that supports me to keep writing novels every day in my busy life.
Okay, without further ado, let's briefly talk about my revisions and some ideas this time, and while introducing them to you, I also hope to provide some ideas for readers who read these words and also have the idea of writing a novel, so that you don't make the same mistakes.
First, and the poison point raised by the most readers, the great mismatch between the strength of the candle dragon and the dragon world.
I really didn't think about this before I uploaded this novel. My idea was simple, I wanted to write a novel, and then I happened to see an advertisement for the Dragon Anime, so I put pen to paper to write this novel.
And why I wrote about the candle dragon, it is because of my personal preference, I like "as day, twilight as night." "It's really cool!
But I forgot that the Candle Dragon, as one of the pinnacles of existence in the Classic of Mountains and Seas, has a strength gap with the Dragon Clan, which can be said to be the Zhongwu world.
Such a god who controls the rules is indeed a crushing existence for the dragon world.
After seeing the comments of the "Regulation" book friend, after two days of careful consideration, I think it would be much better to change the protagonist to a time-traveler who has been inherited by the candle dragon.
On the one hand, the strength of the candle dragon is too strong, and the villain has no to play.
On the other hand, it is true that I am unable to portray the image of an ancient god.
I am not very old and do not have enough experience to support one of the reasons, but the other reason is very simple, my pen is not strong enough to write.
And the lesson I learned from this mistake is that when choosing the main character, the main character should not start too high.
One is that it is easy to collapse, and the other is that there will be no refreshing feeling of upgrading.
The second point is the most important, after I stopped changing, I referred to a lot of invincible texts, and I feel that the selling points of invincible texts can be roughly divided into: pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, appearing in front of people, and doing things that others cannot.
But once the start is invincible, there are not many bridges that can be written, and I find that there is nothing to write about while writing, and I had this feeling before.
So how do you write a feeling of invincibility while creating a dilemma for the protagonist?
My idea is to have a golden finger that the protagonist can grow quickly, so that it can not only avoid being too boring, but also bring the thrill of leveling up.
My understanding of this is still in its infancy, so I'll just briefly talk about it here, and you can discuss your thoughts together.
In fact, I feel that the reason why there is a market for invincible text is that our predecessors have already given the answer.
The contradiction between the people's yearning for a better life and unbalanced and inadequate development.
Hehe, it's familiar, one of the main contradictions in our country.
The reason why the invincible text is beautiful is not because we are struggling in our daily lives, and we often don't get the corresponding rewards for our efforts...... Ahem, it's far away.
Second, gold finger.
Since the protagonist's body has changed, his golden finger must also be changed.
There are not many modified gold fingers, two increases and one decreases.
First of all, the candle flame was added, a very golden balm thing, which combines a blood bottle, a blue bottle, and a buff. I've already written the role in the text.
Secondly, the protagonist is loaded with the spiritual realm, a pair of more all-powerful "eyes", after all, not being able to see is too harmful to a person, and as the protagonist, if you can't see, it will be very troublesome in many places. So I simply added a spiritual realm, and while enhancing my strength, I wouldn't be so constrained when I wrote about the fight scenes.
One minus, that is naturally the skill of fortune telling. In the dragon world, fortune-telling is still too powerful, even if I have repeatedly reduced its role. In addition, the restrictions of fortune-telling are still very vague, and I don't know what can and can't be counted. So I just deleted this skill.,Anyway, the protagonist is not a candle dragon.,It's normal to not be able to predict the future.。
Third, the outline.
To be honest, I'm still a little confused about this, although the general trend is certain, but the specific implementation, I'm a little numb, there are too many characters related to the plot, how to write each character, and where will their ending go, I'm hesitating now, it's really hard to write.
That's why I didn't save the manuscript for seven days.
The above is what I have been thinking about since I broke off for seven days, not much, but I am really thinking seriously. At the same time, I hope that readers will be forgiving me, a part-time medical student, because it is really too difficult
I'm going to a job fair in a few days, and if I don't have a good fit, I'm going to look for a job next month. So there's no guarantee of an update, but I'll write it as much as I can, and I'm not too hopeful that this book will make money anyway.
I'm an author and a reader at the same time, and I know too much about the pain of reading the above without the following, so no matter what you choose, I can understand it.
It seems like that's all there is to say.,Although there doesn't seem to be a new chapter.,But I've updated some of the previous chapters.,If you're interested, you can go and see it first.,It's okay to see it when I'm all done.,I'll add notes to the revised chapters.。
Finally, I hope you can rest assured! I'm still struggling!