The last sentence of the volume and the leave slip
"Anyway, that's the kind of story."
This is the first sentence I would like to give to readers who have read the first volume.
Although the plot will continue to reverse and change, the tone of this article is basically the same as this volume. Finding hope in despair and light in darkness, magical girls summon miracles to the world, which is the main theme of this book.
Thank you for reading the first volume of The Off-Work Demon, I am the author of this book, Arc Salt. After two months, we met again in the text summary.
Oh, you ask what is the Off-duty Demon? That's the abbreviation I came up with for this book, after all, the title of "A[LI]CE: Get Off Work and Become a Magical Girl" is too long.
I briefly introduced myself in my previous testimonials, so let's not talk about myself this time, let's talk about this book.
First of all, in the first part, let's summarize the first volume: "The Blue Delinch Under the Cage".
Let's talk about what I like about the book.
When I first planned the book, I didn't think of the full plot, but some scenes that made me feel like "Wow, it feels like a magical girl", so I followed these scenes backwards and worked backwards to complete the outline of the book.
Two of these scenes are placed in the first volume.
One of them is a middle-aged uncle who ran in the dark to save his daughter, and finally shouted the word "transformation" in an extremely cold and vicissitudes tone before the battle, and then turned into a magical girl.
I thought it would be a very Kamen Rider scene, but it was used in the theme of magical girls, and it gave people a sense of misplaced beauty, so I didn't hesitate to use it.
In the second scene, in the hall in the dark of night, the magical girl fights with her rebellious old teammates, and then kills her old teammates in tears.
This scene must be familiar to all of you - it is inspired by a classic scene from Madoka Magi, and in this article, this is the story of Delphinium and Red Thoughts and the last part, but I haven't reproduced the original idea here.
At first, I set up Red Si and such a character, in fact, I intended her to be a pure traitor and then be liquidated by the protagonist, and even in the initial setting, the culprit of these incidents in Fangting City was actually this "degenerate old teammate", and there was no existence of the character Mousse.
It's just that with the improvement of the plot outline, I gradually found a problem - what does this have to do with the three little ones? They can't sleep at home, and the matter will be solved by the delphinium, right? In addition, because I was a little soft-hearted: I didn't think it was necessary for Red Si and this character to die like this, so I changed the plot.
After the change, it became what it is now, not the betrayal of the old teammates, but the manipulation of the old teammates - the mastermind behind the scenes is supposed to be a pure villain and a punching bag, who was beaten by the protagonist to vent the anger of the reader and me.
Of course, these are the stories before the book was opened.
It was actually very difficult to reproduce the perfect scene in my vision into a book, but after actually doing it, I realized that there were still a lot of defects in the outline, and I had to continue to improve it.
My planning for the first volume was not as complicated as it is now, and I imagined it to be a short process of the protagonist's comeback - daily life - discovering the mastermind behind the scenes - fighting the boss. But the word "everyday" in the outline is really the devil who urges me, and when I put a lot of effort into perfecting this part, the length of the first volume somehow became what it is now.
In the original design, I thought of a seemingly cool rhythm for the first volume: "The bright line takes the baby daily, and the dark line chases the murderer and reasoning". It sounded very idealistic – and it was, and it was true, and it soon became apparent that the line of reasoning could not be written at all.
Because the plot advancement of the reasoning line is destined to be more informative than the daily line, if I run the two lines in parallel, then readers who focus on the main line will only find the daily drama quite cumbersome; Readers who focus on everyday pleasure will feel that the reasoning line spoils the joyful atmosphere. Regardless of the reader's preference, the reading experience is not really good.
This contradiction is reflected in the early part of the article, that is, around chapter 30, before which I had been practicing the principle of double lines, but after chapter 30, when the delinium encountered the chrysalis beast for the first time, I understood: I can't write like this.
So I decided to make a change at that time: the reasoning dark line was cut off completely, and it was changed to enter the big event in stages to promote the plot.
That's why this book starts with the Sparrow Wars, and the main line is so long each time - I have a lot of cut information piled up in the main line to say, which should have been explained in the reasoning line.
And because writing is just a side hustle, I really don't have much time to revise the outline, which is the direct reason why I have been feeling a little ineffective for a while after it was put on the shelf, and it did lead to a period of quality degradation in the end. Thankfully, the scenes that inspired me – the confrontation with my old teammates – didn't go awry, and they ended up being of a quality that I was relatively happy with.
By the way, because of the tone of the first volume, I actually thought about the stupid question of "what kind of theme song would there be if this was a seasonal anime" when I was writing this part of the plot. What's even more stupid is that I also found out.,The song I chose is "Shadowgraph.,It's also the OP of the TV animation "Don't Lucky Pop Don't Laugh".,Readers who have leisure can go and look for this song.,When I listen to it, combined with the scene of the delphinium advancing in the dark hall of the Strange Strategy.,That's probably all my fantasy about this problem.。
All in all, after this time, I have truly experienced the evil consequences of the high eye, the so-called "double line parallel" is purely a reckless attempt to underestimate my own ability, and I should not dare to do it again in the near future.
I can only say thank you for your continued support, and thank you very much for the many readers who continued to encourage me and keep me going when I was in a slump.
So, let's look backwards and talk about the future plans.
The length of this book is planned to be about four volumes, of which the first volume is probably a relatively short volume, or at least certainly shorter than the second volume, so you should be able to understand that the second volume will be relatively rich in content.
After all, in the first volume, in order to conceal Mousse's conspiracy, I was actually tied up in many of the explanations of the setting, and I couldn't completely roll it out; So in the second volume, the heart of the book, the magical realm, will be presented to you in the true sense of the word.
If the first volume of the text still has some non-fantasy elements, then from the second volume, after a large amount of the focus of the plot shifts towards the magical realm, the concentration of fantasy elements in this book will skyrocket.
I've revealed a little bit of it from the epilogue, but that's not all. New teammates, new old knowledge, new gem scepters, new claw marks, and a host of new characters will also be introduced.
There's also one of them that hasn't been mentioned at all in the previous article.,But I like a new character very much.,This new character will be a very important presence in the future plot.,It's also inextricably linked to the hero's choice of the code name "Delphich", I hope you can like her.
And,After entering the second volume,Because the number of supporting characters will increase significantly,So at that time, I may solicit dragon sets from readers in the book review area:That is, the code name and ability of the decent or villain magical girl.,I'll choose from them to add more interesting characters to the text.,I hope interested readers will participate.。
More content is not spoiler-free, so stay tuned.
So that's all the gossip, all that should be said is pretty much the same, although I have too many things to share with you about this book, but sure enough, I still try to hold it back and put these contents in the text step by step. I hope you will join me in witnessing this story and walking into the second volume of this book: "The Cornflower with the Spire".
Finally, the bad news is that I'm going to take four days off work for the next week, which will continue until the end of the week and start again the next Monday.
The purpose of taking a leave of absence is to adjust my schedule and improve the outline - after writing this volume, I am so tired that my schedule and rest have exploded, and it really takes a while to regroup.
I'm sorry to all of you, but thank you for your understanding, and I would like to present you with a better text.
Let's see you again at the end of the second volume.
[PS1: In the interval between the end of the first volume and the opening of the second volume,The book circle will hold the end of the first volume and Lin Xiaolu's birthday. 】
[PS2: Thank you list]
[Because I was autistic for a period of time before, I didn't pay attention to reviews and news about the book at all, so not only did I not interact with the book reviews, but I didn't even thank the readers who supported the book and rewarded them.] Previously, because of the ostrich mentality, I felt a little embarrassed that I forgot to make up for it, but now that the first volume is over, it seems that I should still express my gratitude to the readers. 】
[First of all, I would like to thank all the readers who have rewarded me: I am very touched that you have spent extra money to express your recognition in addition to your subscription; Secondly, thank you to those readers who have been actively speaking in book reviews, and even creating fanfics, you have enlivened the discussion environment, and intermittent posts have become an integral part of the reading experience; Finally, thank you to all the managers who organized the event in the book review area and managed bad reviews, you have worked hard. 】
[There are also some readers who have switched from unspeakable channels to genuine versions, and thank you for choosing a paid subscription for me.] 】
[Finally, a list of thank you for the tips is attached, including all the alliance leaders of this book so far and the readers who have rewarded this month.] As for the readers who rewarded last month and even last month, I'm too lazy to go back to the previous list and count the names one by one, so forgive me, thank you, I love you. 】
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