A minor redo of Chapter 83 has been made
Today's two updates were posted together, explaining the content of the changes.
The changes started with the real bow locking the door and continued until the end of the chapter.
Then there's time for introspection.
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Really, I'm so sorry!
Because Brother Raven ...... No, the ignorance and blindness of the crow slave led to the release of chapter 83 with extremely serious and huge flaws. This flaw will completely collapse the character of the protagonist, and I didn't even notice it when I wrote it.
In the original version, Zuo Chang knew everything, but without the knowledge of the real bow, he made a transgression (kissing the real bow).
The direct consequence of this episode is harm.
One damages the true bow;
The second is to hurt the birds.
According to normal logic, the lighthearted and enjoyable tone of the story I envisioned will completely collapse at this point - how can Makoku and Asuka not be angry? This is blatant deception.
Unless I use the Great Method of Reducing Wisdom to strip off the personality of the True Bow and the Bird, and turn them into soft weapons that I don't know what to call them, I can continue to maintain the light, comical and ridiculous pleasure of dementia.
Remorse, now is remorse.
After the chapter is released, I read it myself on my phone to see if there is anything I can cut. When I finished reading today's 83 chapters, the reading ranking was already outside the top 100......
I'm sure the 83 chapters I posted earlier were hurtful.
Before me, at least a hundred people had eaten this plate of nine-turn large intestine that had retained its original flavor.
Think about it again, people who come to read the book an hour after the chapter is released should be considered to have a certain liking for the book. And I actually gave them a cruel!
It's really speechless.
I'm sorry.
I'm really sorry.
Can friends who have seen the original version leave a comment here? If there are many people, I will consider finding an opportunity to compensate for more......
Thank you to everyone who has posted your own opinions in this chapter, if it weren't for your questioning, I might not have realized my mistake by now.
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