She has been a Chinese teacher for many years, her knowledge of literature and history is very solid, and she used to like to write something.

Because of these reserves, in his plan, he has the intention of writing and spreading the way of calligraphy in the future.

And if you want to find a hobby and get out of the cranky depression, writing should be a good suggestion.

"When you say writing, do you mean writing prose poetry, or do you write it?"

Bai Wanmao: "At the beginning, I had it, mainly to write, then I especially liked to watch martial arts, Jin Yong's, Gu Long's, Wu Ji's, Li Liang's, I love to watch them, I read too much, I can't help but write a little." ”

Bai Wanmao: "Jin Yong Gulong, you should know that the two martial arts authors, Wu Ji and Li Liang, you young people may not have heard of it, right?" ”

The corners of Li Shi's mouth twitched: "Xiaobai, are you very old?" You call me 'little young'? ”

After a while, Bai blanked: "Uh, that's not (giggles)"

Li Shi blinked and typed: "Well, I am indeed still very young, but I am not small, you can see by looking at my name, the stubborn stone is very big!" (sinister laughs)"

After sending it over, I suddenly had a different feeling of "sneaking", as if I had tasted the fun of hiding my identity and chatting with it.

White Boundless: "(Knock on the head) (Knock on the head)"

Seeing that the emoji was sent, Li Shi felt that she was not angry, on the contrary, she seemed to be quite happy.

Li Shi opened the browser and searched for the two martial arts writers, before he said: "I really haven't heard of these two before, I just went to search and know, I haven't seen their works before." ”

Bai Dammy: "It's normal, you all look at the Internet now, I told you before, in fact, sometimes I also read online articles, there were students in the class who stole in class, and I confiscated it, that book is called "Earth Master", written by an online author named Xu Gongzi Shengzhi, I took it back to the office and flipped through it with curiosity, I didn't expect it to be really good, and I read all the books before I knew it, and then I went to read all the books of that author during the summer vacation, and I was bored, and I went to read all the books of that author. ”

"Earth Master"?

Li Shi has an impression.

He was about to search, and Bai Manmao sent another message: "Tell you quietly, in fact, I also secretly wrote a book on the Internet, and I wrote 80,000 words intermittently, and I didn't tell anyone, not even my family!" (hey) (shy)"

Li Shi was stunned at first.

There is a sense of absurdity that I haven't used my strength yet, and I suddenly find that the other party is actually standing at the end of the line.

Then it felt normal.

She and she are both people who love to read, and such people often have a dream of being a writer.

In today's Internet era where anyone can write, there are too many people who try to write online articles, such as Liu Zhengdong, my college classmate.

Otherwise, the number of online writers who have written online articles would not be as high as 20 or 30 million.

He smiled and asked, "What is the name of the book, and which website is it posted on, I'll go and see." ”

Bai Manmao: "Do you really want to see it?" I feel like I'm not writing very well and I'm a little ashamed. ”

Seeing that Li Shi wanted to see it, Bai Manmao was more hesitant.

Li Shi has also created, but she understands this feeling, after all, this is a private thing that she has been hiding, and showing it to herself is to show the most private things in front of herself......

"I really want to see it!"

"Well, to show you, the book is called "The Only Handle of the Ten Thousand Ancient Immortal Sword", in the starting point Chinese network, after you read it, don't laugh at my bad writing."

Li Shi swore an oath: "I'm not that kind of person!" ”

Click on the app, enter the name, and quickly search for the book.

"The author's name is actually 'Bai Gongzi Boundless', compared to the QQ name 'Bai Boundless', at first glance, it's her, adding a 'Childe' is a bit masculine, but it's also right, her book was posted at the starting point of the male frequency."

Li Shi first read the introduction, and then clicked on the text to quickly browse.

The white writing naturally has nothing to say, condensed and old-fashioned, the writing is brilliant, and the writing is also a fairy tale theme, but the content style is still a bit traditional, whether it is the title of the book, the introduction, or the scenery and background description of the opening paragraph, it may not be very attractive to readers who are used to reading online articles.

A total of 85,000 words, which was completed two years ago, and there is no contract.

After turning a few chapters, Li Shi originally planned to quit, but suddenly saw a large description of a special scene, and his eyes suddenly widened a little.

The protagonist of the book, Sang Wen, got the first immortal sword "Zixiao Sword" in the ancient world, and used this sword to kill a snake demon for the first time, but unfortunately he was poisoned by the snake demon.

Gee!

Such a bloody and vulgar plot, under her excellent writing, is actually written without revealing it, but it causes people's blood to gush, and Li Shi's eyes are straight.

"This Teacher Bai, she is really ...... I understand it too well. ”

"Moreover, the male protagonist Tou Tang is entrusted with the two women, and the relationship is still like that, her inner world seems to be worth speculating."

Li Shi suddenly felt that Teacher Bai had great potential in online writing, and it would be a pity for her not to write online articles, which would be a loss for the entire industry.

After quickly turning through a dozen chapters, I saw that there were several similar plots, and I stopped to read them twice, and felt more and more that I had the responsibility and need to "pull" such a writer with great potential into the industry that should have belonged to her!

In the past two months, he found that although the number of Internet users is as large as a cow's hair, it is actually very rare to attract himself to watch and taste the authors and works.

After thinking about it, Li Shi used the QQ number to log in to the starting point app, added her book to the bookshelf, and posted a few more comments.

Then I clicked on the QQ dialogue interface and started typing: "Boundless, are you sure this is the first book you wrote?" You can't lie to me, right? ”

In a community in Jieyang, it is still the balcony of the master bedroom, lying on the sofa with white blanks, her legs curled slightly, outlining a graceful curve, she is pillowing on the edge of the couch, holding her mobile phone, and has been waiting for Li Shi's feedback.

I was a little apprehensive in my heart.

This is really the first time she has shown the Internet that she secretly wrote to others.

"How do you feel like wearing a swimsuit to a beauty pageant and standing in front of the judges to be judged?"

Bai Wanwan stretched out his hand and brushed the green silk on the left sideburns.

At this time, QQ rang, and she hurriedly picked it up and looked at it.

Seeing that the "stubborn stone" actually questioned himself, he suddenly became anxious.

Quickly typed and replied: "What did I lie to you, this book is really the first time I wrote it, I feel like I made a lot of newcomer mistakes, and in the end I didn't even get involved in signing a contract." ”

Li Shi was waiting for her to say this.

"Can you write so well in the first book?"

"Except for the fact that you don't know much about the routines of online texts, you are very good in all other aspects!!"

"Especially the writing, which is much better than the average Internet author!"

"And your description of the scene is so delicate, and the details of ancient life are also very exquisite, it's just amazing, reading your book, I can even see antique pictures in front of my eyes!!"

"I really like the style of your writing!!"

"Boundless, why don't you hurry up and open a new book, I can't wait to read your new work!!"

……

A series of exclamation marks bombarded Bai Manmao directly.

Two years ago, she secretly wrote this book, but because she failed to sign a contract with the platform and had no readers to read it, she often felt very disappointed and lost.

At one point, he even doubted his writing ability.

Write on, when did she enjoy this kind of treatment!

Faced with Li Shi's series of rainbow farts, she suddenly felt that she had finally met a bosom friend reader and met someone who understood herself!

The depression that had been hidden in my heart because of this experience suddenly dissipated.

Her heart was numb and unusually comfortable.

Open a new book?

Bai Manmao was a little moved in an instant.

Why don't you write another one?

But soon hesitated again.

If she was asked to write traditional, she was confident, but she didn't write online articles.

Bai Danmao: "Do you really think I wrote this book well?" ”

Bai Wanmao: "But I can't even sign a contract, and I feel that I don't really understand online texts." ”

Li Shi thought about it for a while, and replied: "I have been looking at the Internet for a long time, I began to contact ten years ago, and in recent months I have seen more, and I have studied how to create a little, your current situation, just like an embroidery girl who has just learned to go out of the mountain, although the mind is ingenious, the level is very high, but I don't know what patterns of embroidery on the market are popular, as long as you go to understand the market, everything can be solved!" ”

Li Shi: "We can take our time, and we don't rush to write a popular work, let's write a work that can be signed first, and then pursue other good works." ”

Li Shi: "Anyway, I will be your first reader, and I will be your most loyal reader!" ”

Don't understand the embroidery girl of the market?

Bai Mang couldn't help but smile, thinking that Li Shi's metaphor was very interesting, and after thinking about it deeply, he felt that it was very reasonable.

Indeed, I mainly look at the Internet less.

At this time, QQ rang again.

Li Shi: "And as long as you don't say it, except for me, no one knows that you are writing an online article, and even if you know that you are writing, I don't know what you are writing and which book it is, so what are you afraid of?!!

Bai Manmao couldn't help but nod.

yes, no one knows that I wrote it anyway, and besides, I'm resigned now, and I can write it with my door closed openly!

After a while, she seemed to make up her mind.

Bai Mang: "Then I'll try to write another one?" Idle is idle anyway. ”

Bai Dammo: "But before writing this time, I have to read more online articles first, well, if I want to write, I still want to write Xianxia, or a historical overhead passage like "Celebrating More Than Years", I have also read the original work of that drama, and I feel that genre, I can also try it." ”

Bai Wanmao: "What do you think?" ”

Li Shi knew that she needed to be affirmed, and immediately said: "Well, you have solid historical knowledge and good writing, I also think that in addition to Xianxia, you can also try historical writing!" Anyway, I support you in whatever you write! These two types just like to watch. (smiley)"

Bai Manmang bent his two beautiful legs side by side, his head rested on his knees, his hands were folded, he was holding his mobile phone, and a slightly excited smile appeared on his face, sure enough, he also liked these two types.

Suddenly felt a little clutching on his chest, and quickly straightened his back, making the distance between his body and his legs larger, so that he could breathe more smoothly, and then typed: "Well, stubborn stone, if I want to write, can you always be my staff officer?" ”

A smile appeared on the corner of Li Shi's mouth again: "Of course you can, I can give you some advice now, you can advise you." ”

Bai Mangmao hurriedly asked, "What suggestions, you say." ”

Li Shi: "Take your previous book "The One Handle of the Ancient Immortal Sword", you wrote the story of the protagonist growing up through the Zixiao Sword after obtaining the Zixiao Sword, the plot line of this story is actually good, and the overall line is in line with the idea of the protagonist borrowing the golden finger to upgrade in the online text, but the writing is too traditional. ”

"If the starting point of creation changes slightly, and creates from the idea of 'how to write to make readers more enjoyable', in this way, even if it is the same plot, it will be more popular with readers."

"In addition, the title and introduction of the book, I feel that it is not attractive enough, it is better to choose the name according to the popular style, and the introduction can not be written too literary, it must be easy to understand, and the highlights and golden fingers that attract readers are written."

"For example, if the title of the book is 'I Have a Zixiao Sword,' maybe it will be more popular with readers."

……

Bai Mang: "Mmmm, I wrote it down, I'll think about it, is there anything else?" ”

Li Shi suddenly remembered his "original intention", blinked, and said: "The last point is the most important (baring teeth), that is, no matter how it changes, there is an advantage in your writing that must be maintained, such as Chapter 7, when you describe the plot when the male protagonist and the female protagonist interact, it is very well written, from the description of the scene, to the atmosphere, especially when interacting, the physical conflict between the characters, the kind of physical and mental feelings and changes brought about...... The kind of vivid and accurate description, which makes people feel like being placed in it, must be carried forward. ”

Well?

At first glance, he didn't quite understand what Li Shi was talking about.

When did the male and female protagonists I wrote about have had a physical altercation?

She suddenly thought of something, and hurriedly opened the app she had just reinstalled, found the "One Handle of the Ancient Immortal Sword" written by herself, quickly turned the page, and soon turned to the target chapter "Chapter 7 Snake Demon, Sang Wen Poisoning".

The more I read the content, the more I blushed on my face.

And she also saw small bubbles behind certain paragraphs.

Click on one and find that it is a comment from a reader.

The stubborn stone is oversized: "The author's big writing is so good, I see my blood boiling!" ”

belch

The white and crystal toes subconsciously contracted.

The difference between this "stubborn stone is super large" and "stubborn stone is very large" is only one word, and then look at the comment time, it was just posted.

That's right, when I wrote it two years ago, there was no reader comment.

Bai Wanwan took a screenshot and sent it to Li Shi: "This is what you commented, right?" (White-eyed)"

Li Shi did not deny it: "Yes, it's me." (smiley)"

Bai Mang: "Do you like to watch this kind of plot?" ”

Li Shi: "It's because you write so well, it feels very immersive to read, well, in layman's terms, it makes readers feel very good when you read it." (haha)"

This is the advantage of online chatting, you can say anything bold directly, anyway, you can't see the other party's face, and you won't be embarrassed.

He didn't know that when Bai Manmao saw his reply, his face turned crimson.

She felt like she hadn't been so shy in years.

After a while, a series of (head-knocking) memes were sent.

Bai Damao: "(humming) I didn't expect you to be such a stubborn stone, it's too indecent." ”

…… (End of chapter)