Although there is some anticlimactic, the book has been successfully completed, which is gratifying.

In fact, in the original structure of foodies, the story is about two million words, not the current one million and two million, and the reason is naturally not unfinished.

Because in fact, when it comes to Taiwei civilization, foodies already feel that the structure of this book is actually imperfect.

At the beginning, the martial arts competition on the blue star, the inspiration for foodies was the first martial arts tournament in the Dragon Ball world, and I hoped that the protagonist would challenge upwards again and again, while improving the power system of the book, and at the same time, the conflict between psionic energy and old art was performed step by step.

For now, the structure of the first half should be fine.

But from the moment the alien appeared, the foodie felt that something was wrong, and it was written that there was a sense of procrastination and repetition when he was beaten and old, so that when he finally faced the evil god of subspace, this feeling was even stronger, causing the foodie to be embarrassed.

Then to the realm of mountains and seas, Li Changqing preached the path of Taiyi, and I felt more and more that the repetition of the structure caused the foodies to not even know how the enemies of the final Terran Great Expedition would perform.

No matter how complete the setting and foreshadowing are, it is impossible to get rid of that repetitive structure.

If you continue to write according to the previous rhythm, then no matter how much you use the pen and ink by foodies, you will not be able to reproduce the horror of the enemy on the last expedition to the ancient road.

On the contrary, it is like in an online game, where the protagonist beats crayfish with a wooden stick, and the protagonist uses a thunder rod like a thunderbolt to break the sky, and the overlord is as boring as a thunderbolt crayfish at sunset.

In the final analysis, it is still a lack of writing experience.

So the foodie decided to put the story of the Terran Expedition in the next part, and use another perspective and another way of writing to completely improve the whole story.

As for the time when the second part will be written, it should still need foodies to hone their writing skills, and it will not start immediately.

At last.

The foodie's new book has almost been prepared, after all, since the second part of the book is planned to be opened in the writing of Taiwei Civilization, there is a lot of time.

I hope that all book friends will support and pinch a lot

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