Excuse me, by the way, the arrangements will be made later
Stuck ...... Take a leave of absence today.
By the way, Carvin is because he is making up the original book, especially when it comes to the Great Rebellion, there are too many things to make up...... Spitting.
And then there's my main line arrangement here.,On the premise of knowing the plot.,The Great Rebellion has been changed beyond recognition.()
The event that marked the beginning of the Great Rebellion here would be the Nikaia Conference, but the event that really decided to be different from the original plot was the City of Perfection.
Because it involves the setting arrangement of the follow-up core, I am also making up for [religion] related now.
To be sure, including my previous arrangement, it must be about religion, and the last few sheets have to deal with the question of how to write about religion.
I'm going to have a secular perspective here, so I'm not going to touch those mystical speculations, this thing doesn't make sense, just like you can't break the sense of morality in the Warhammer world, from the perspective of absolute interests, he does ...... Sometimes inhumanity is logical ()
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And then say why the Great Rebellion has changed beyond recognition.
For example, the [Battle of Istavan V], then the protagonist and the emperor can completely let each legion send a forbidden army over, holding a small note, if the loyal legion receives a battle order from Horus to go to Istavan V, then the forbidden army will go directly to the original body and open the wonderful little note-
[Don't go to Istavan V, there is a possibility that the commander will defect. 】
Then you say, this is not going to be fought, how is this still fighting.
Of course, the four gods can also counteract, for example, what Horus actually didn't oppose, and the legion who believed in the small note suspected the commander, but it turned out to be a big thing.
…… It's the equivalent of playing tricks on each other, and I prejudged your prediction or something.
I don't want to do that...... So I just rearranged and simplified the Great Rebellion, but it didn't really simplify too much ()
(You don't have to make up a bunch of originals, yes!) (Not))
And there is also the end of death, before the end of the death 1 came out, my character about the emperor collapsed, I originally planned to create a cold-blooded tyrant for him, who would have thought that Big E still liked his son.
Now Dead End 2 will come out soon, just waiting for translation and slicing, but I guess I can't wait for 3 to start a big rebellion on my side, and then there will be any core settings, or the characters will change significantly......
A cool song for myself.
Actually, I didn't want to add a half-immortal at first.,The role of the half-immortal suddenly appeared before and after I opened the book.,And it's very metaphysical.,I was originally resistant to him.,Because after all, I set up the male protagonist here and will also go to the technology side.。
But then ...... Thinking about how to arrange a great rebellion...... It's so fragrant.
(And in the original book, the three artifacts of the network channel also showed their faces, and I had to make it up myself.) )
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Another core difficulty is the emperor.
His image is broken and can't be broken anymore, I look at the perfect city, I wonder why this big brother treats Luojia so much - why does he talk well?
There is also the Emperor of the Lord of Mankind who calls Angelon the Twelfth.
I'm writing about the perfect city now, and I'm going to have to find a reasonable reason for the emperor's behavior in the original book, and I'm almost thinking about it at the moment, and I'm grateful for the idea of a brother who has a promiser.
But there are still many scenes where the emperor is written later, and I have to make his actions [reasonable] while shaping his character image
(I don't pursue writing the image of the emperor who is wise and martial, and who is like a god, I don't have that brain)
Let me ponder for a moment......
The emperor in the current book ...... I was going to write about an emotional, but at the same time indifferent man who came out and loved the original - but not so much.
There is love, but not much. (Except for certain primitives)
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And Brother Pony.
Want me to say (tyrannical)
It's time to just knock Magnus unconscious and put it into the static force field, and then send it back to Terra as a power bank, by the way, Tutu clean Qianzi, what are you doing with so much work.
But it certainly can't be written like that ()
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There is also a perspective arrangement, I have a bunch of them here, one is the main line, one is the follow-up to the events on Motarian's side, and the other is the psychological description and transformation of Koz after this incident.
I'm still wondering how to arrange this section, whether each section should be a separate chapter, or whether each chapter will occasionally follow a different perspective after the main story.
Finally, have a great weekend! All right!