Probably because of the first wave of recommendations, there have been a lot of new partners in the past two days, the first day of the collection added 459, the second day added 308. But I'm still very happy, and in the past two days, people have been putting forward various opinions and talking about the shortcomings of this book.

I'm really happy, it proves that there are really people who like this book, otherwise delete the book and don't read it, and I'm too busy to give opinions? I give advice in the hope that I can improve myself and take the book to the next level.

I don't know if I'm a newcomer, but I should be in general, right? The ability of newcomers and novices is limited, and it is inevitable that they will not be able to take into account the construction of a world, the construction of many characters, too many details and too many settings.

In particular, the book is designed to be very large. From the realm to the theory of exercises, to the structure of the world, to the history of the world...... I've set up too many things...... Now you can say that you haven't even unfurled the fur!

After reading for more than ten years, I know a concept that the collapse of a book starts from the accumulation of various details, and the details in the early stage cannot be done, the foundation is not laid, and it is difficult to think about it in the later stage.

So I'm really happy that people have put forward various opinions these days. If there is an opinion, if there is a defect, I can immediately modify it (unless it is contrary to the pit I dug), once, ten, a hundred times, and if I change it too much, it will naturally and slowly become perfect.

Yesterday, I pulled out a big poison for the first few chapters, and the new friends can't see the poison point. In fact, I don't know every poison point myself, I know that it is poison and I still write it, and I also poison you, am I crazy?

I'm trying to avoid that.

But I'm a newcomer after all, so I inevitably stepped into the river and accidentally got in, and everyone pulled me.

I regard every reader who gives an opinion as a teacher, and really, I seriously consider every opinion. I don't believe you.,Your opinions.,As long as it's not a hole I dug on purpose.,I'll basically be in the next chapter.,Try to patch the next chapter without a trace.,If there's a real bug, I'll go to the original text to modify.。

But the writer's progress is not a day or two, nor is it a thousand or two thousand words. The story is still very long, let's write it slowly and improve it slowly. If you encounter something that doesn't go well with the writing, bear with it a little, and don't smash the table if it's a little salty.

Where is it not to the taste, you tell me, I will change! Even if one day, you think this book is too rubbish to swallow and you want to leave, leave a word to tell me which plot or which chapters are too poisonous, I can also self-check and make progress once, right?

After all, after reading more than 10,000 words, don't you leave without leaving a word, aren't you aggrieved? Scold a couple of words before leaving! Maybe you can teach a mature author with a scolding, maybe one day you will write a work that matches your taste, right?

Don't walk away quietly!

I'm scared every day, and I'm afraid I'll lose a few readers if I update a chapter—even though it hasn't happened yet. I'm proud to tell you that although this book doesn't have a long collection, it hasn't dropped much, and it hasn't been collected since the beginning.

Those who prove that they have collected it have no regrets and have not chosen the wrong book.

Hmm.,This chapter is updated with nonsense.,Maybe it's going to drop the collection? Something else......

I am reluctant to let go of a collection, and I am reluctant to let you go as a reader.

Just like the psychology has been muttering in the past two days, the first reader of my book should be, Ermu Luoxin, not surprisingly, the starting point coin I signed up for investment was also taken by him. I saw him active every day in the first few days of the book, and then he disappeared, I thought that what I wrote deviated from the original intention, and people left quietly, and today he came out to vote again. This kind of lost and regained heart, really, haha is going to cry.

I cherish every reader.,The small disc of the first monthly pass,Book friend 202205221912245553,There is no cat in the North Sea on the QQ reading side,Jealous wanton that has been rewarded,Seven kills Zen,Book friends 2019308132024238 (do you want to change a name that matches your temperament?) ）

Well, I flipped through the writer's assistant when I was writing this......

Nonsense for a long time, because it was so happy. I wrote this chapter for only one purpose, that is, to tell everyone, don't hold back if you have something to say, where the writing is not good, where the writing is poisonous, where it is lacking, you must leave a message to tell me, whether it is a chapter review or a book review, I will not miss a single look!

You're training a big guy who can become lv5 in the future, you know pro? Take responsibility!