The previous chapter was completed with modifications
Well,After two and a half hours of careful proofreading,I gave the last chapter a major overhaul.,The plot hasn't changed much.,But try to describe it as smoothly as possible.,After the modification, it increased from 5,000 words to 6000 words.,Those who have subscribed can refresh and reload it to see the new content.,No need to resubscribe.。
Thank you for all the suggestions you put forward to the author.,If you have any questions, I'll try to change what I can.,I'll explain what I can't change.,I'm not a little bit else.,I just like to listen to other people's suggestions.。
In addition, regarding the issue of Dongfang Bai's illness, because there is almost no description of Dongfang Qinlan and Dongfang Huaizhu's mother in the original plot, I only know that there is such a person, but Qin Lan Huaizhu died when he was a child, and I don't know what the specific illness was or how he died.
But since the protagonist has become the son of the Dongfang family, it is impossible for him not to save his mother, and with the power of the Dongfang family, even they can't find a way to save it, I don't think it should be a physical problem, so I set a soul mutation, which is to try to make the logic self-consistent.
There are also readers who said that Dongfang Bai's illness was before marriage, I don't think I agree, first of all, Dongfang Bai is an ordinary person, this is basically certain, and if it is an ordinary person, I think if she was not in good health before she got married, it is impossible to give birth to two daughters with an interval of five years, at least it should be more reasonable to get sick after giving birth to Qin Lan.
Of course, these are my speculations.,If anyone knows about the setting of Dongfang Bai in the original book.,You can also leave a message to tell me.,It's best to be able to say which word is in the comics.,I'll go to read and confirm it.,The previous plot will be modified.。
Apologies again.
By the way, by the way, this book will be renamed "Demon Fox: Open the Treasure Chest from One Person" from today, because the editor said that the previous name, it is better not to use it, it may be violated......
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