Yesterday's results on the shelves were miserable.

The first order is 350, and the average order is even more miserable.

There are also many friends who come to give a first order, in fact, there should be less.

That's a subscription for 12,000 collections.

It can only be described as a blood collapse.

There may be many friends who have not read the book, but this one may be very ethereal.

You can't keep people for free, and you still expect people to pay for it?

In fact, you can get a glimpse of today's results from the usual data, but I don't believe in evil, and the result is that I was slapped in the face by reality.

What is the problem with this book, I thought about it for a while and made the following summary:

1. The character design is too rough. deliberately pursues the conflict of identity, but ignores many things, and as a result, the characters are flat like a piece of paper, and the reasons for the motivation are ambiguous, that is, they do not conform to the identity and experience. leads to a very poor sense of substitution.,I don't feel anything at all.,The characters of the previous work are stronger than the protagonist.。

2. Unpleasant. This is the biggest problem, I want to avoid routines too much, and as a result, the plot tension is not enough, which can be said to be as bland as water. When I used to write about the city, I thought that the routines I was familiar with were disgusting, but in the end, I found that it was better to write routines. I remember the editor telling me not to think that routines are garbage, because without routines it is more garbage and less grounded. Now that it looks like this is the case, it can be regarded as a practice of the importance of this sentence.

3. There are a lot of forced words. Due to the seamless connection of the book, the sharp momentum is missing, resulting in the writing being full of water, which makes people drowsy.

4. Gold finger. This is also a big problem.,The protagonist is already a protector of the devil's way.,This itself is a golden finger.,As a result, a heavenly talisman was arranged to come in.,Causing the protagonist to lose that sophisticated breath.,Do things like a newcomer who has just entered the rivers and lakes.。 Coupled with the unreasonable filming of the plot of entering the prison, the conflict became more intense. The protagonist is a murderer, but when he goes to prison, he is equivalent to dancing in shackles, and without the rhythm of the plot, he is getting more and more wretched.

5. Beginning plot setting. Many readers can see that it is borrowed from the embroidered spring knife, and originally wanted to be a stepping stone, which caused many new readers not to buy it, feel that they are plagiarizing, and they are too lazy to look back.

The above five points are the biggest reasons for hitting the street.

Writing a book is a brain-using job, guarding against arrogance and rashness, and you have to calm down. In the past, I didn't believe in evil, and I always sought speed and urgency, which led to insufficient effort and frequent mistakes. Fortunately, I realized that the next book could avoid it.

That's all for this book, I really can't write any more.

After all, if you don't talk about income and dreams, you are a scoundrel, and the author, as a practitioner in the financial industry, believes in this sentence more.

As for the miserable sellers, they won't come, the dishes must be recognized, and the beaten ones must be upright.

All of this is caused by my impatience, and it makes no sense to sell miserably.

Approved friends, you can wait for the new book to be opened.

Friends who do not recognize, the rivers and lakes are far away, they are cherished, thank you for your company.

Finally, thank you for your first order and baby, Guanguan, Yiruo and other friends for their tips and support, it is I who am too uncompetitive and live up to everyone's expectations.

If you want to scold when you see this, just scold a few words, it's my problem that caused all this.

If you make a mistake, you must admit it, and you will stand up when you are beaten.

The book will be completed in a few days, so that friends who invest can get back a little loss.

As for the new book, it may take a few days, but now that I have a basic idea, I will settle down and work on it, and I will send a notice when the time comes.

That's it.

Thank you, little brother.

I wish you all a speedy prosperity.