07 Composition instructor Mr. Yan
Lin Qin naturally knew that he would be in trouble.
But there are some abilities that you can't really learn in this life if you don't have them at birth.
She propped her left hand on the side of her face, turned the pen with her right hand, and changed a blank piece of paper on the table to cover the drawing.
The Chinese teacher explained the excellent composition according to the PPT, commenting paragraph by paragraph.
commented on three articles in a row, and released a collection of bad articles.
"The title is not the right one, is this to see what words are easy to use?"
"What are you writing about the necessity of a point of view with a precise opening phrase, naming the subject and briefly stating the necessity of a point of view with a metaphor or a famous quote?"
"I'm too rare to pronounce it!"
"It doesn't matter if the students in the ordinary class can't write well, you all have high scores in science, and you won't be able to do this in the exam if you take half an hour to learn Chinese every day!"
"And the words are so ugly that you can't read, hurry up and practice the words for me!"
The middle-aged teacher roared, took a sip of tea, pushed his glasses, and tapped his fingers on the blackboard, raising his voice again.
"Keep your eyes open for me! Don't think that if you are good at science, you are smart! ”
"People who really have brains are double majors in arts and sciences!"
"The language expression ability is not good, I can't write a 800-word essay, how can I write an academic paper of tens of thousands of words in college?!"
He deliberately squinted his eyes and swept over Lin Qin in the corner, and when he saw that she looked like she was about to fall asleep, he was even more angry.
Directly named the surname: "Especially the first place in the preliminary exam!!" ”
"If you give three hundred, you dare to get three hundred points, and one hundred and five languages, your score is just over half!"
"If you don't finish your essay, you will go off topic and run to the Pacific Ocean! Twenty points are rewarded by the teacher in a good mood!! ”
The top students in the first class were all very naughty, but when they heard him say this, they laughed, and looked at Lin Qin in unison.
took advantage of the chaos to ridicule: "The big guy may just not want us to lose too ugly, after all, it is a dimensionality reduction blow." ”
"That's it! Sister Qin's IQ can still write essays? ”
"Are you polite to call Sister Shang? Are you worthy? ”
The teacup smashed on the podium with a "clang", and the Chinese teacher was annoyed.
"Don't make a noise!" I was so angry that the northern dialects popped out.
The classroom was instantly silent, and the top students who were laughing a second ago instantly shrank into quails.
There's no way, the Chinese teacher likes to complain to the head teacher the most, and as soon as he complains, he has to be caught and write a review.
Qin He is close and easy-going most of the time, and when he encounters a complaint from the subject teacher, he has to be targeted for ten days and half a month, and he can't relax.
"Okay, the class representative came over and sent the composition paper, and the rest of the time was left to write the essay by himself in the next class, and handed it over one by one after school."
He leaned forward with his hands on the lectern, squinting at the back of the room.
Said separately: "Lin Qin, you rewrite the exam essay and hand it over to me alone." ”
Lin Qin's index finger on the side of his face was raised, as if unintentionally tapping twice behind his ear, but his face was still indifferent.
Tan Yubo peeked at her a few times, leaned over and asked in a low voice, "Lin Qin, did you deliberately not write an essay?" ”
"It's not." Lin Qin stared at the pen that turned between his fingers, and his eyes consciously caught the tip of the pen that shook rapidly.
Tan Yubo followed her gaze, and his eyes were straight because of the white and slender fingers.
It wasn't until the class representative put the composition paper in his hand that he came back to his senses and took out one and handed it to Lin Qin, and asked, "Then why didn't you finish the exam?" ”
Lin Qin took the paper, spread it out, flattened it, and said calmly: "I can't write." ”
"Won't?" Tan Yubo was puzzled, "What can't I write in an essay?" It would be nice to choose words and sentences to sing praises and virtues, and then quote a few famous cases. ”
"Hmm." Lin Qin nodded in agreement, and his facial expressions revealed the information of "too lazy to explain".
Tan Yubo naturally saw it, didn't say more, and retracted his attention to the composition.
Lin Qin didn't pay attention to him, slowly flipped out the test paper, and re-read the essay questions twice.
After a while, the bell rang for the end of class, and the Chinese teacher walked out with a teacup.
There was a sparse sound of movement in the classroom, a few people went out to the bathroom, and most of the students were thinking that they would be able to leave school early after writing.
Tan Yubo has completed the idea and written the first hundred words.
He raised his head and rubbed his neck twice, unconsciously looking at Lin Qin's desktop.
It's good, I didn't move a word for more than ten minutes.
Tan Yubo opened his mouth, but still didn't say anything, lowered his head and continued to write his composition.
Lin Qin and the few lines of words on the test paper were big eyes and small eyes, and the people in the classroom who were wandering to the classroom were empty one after another, so they simply hugged their arms directly and lay down in their arms to rest.
Yan Shang finished his work early today and came to pick up the little girl from school in person.
Watching the flow of people pouring out of the school gate changing wave after wave, I still didn't see the figure that attracted the most attention.
When I picked up my phone, I realized that it had been more than half an hour after school.
His heart jumped suddenly, he got out of the car and said hello to the doorman, and strode towards the teaching building.
The first class of the third year of high school (science).
The boarding students all went to the cafeteria and playground, and they did not return to class until the evening self-study time.
Only the long-haired girl in a white down jacket was sleeping on the table, her slender back neck stretched out in a graceful arc, and a neck bone pushed a shallow bulge against the white skin.
It's frighteningly thin.
Yan Shang looked in through the window, and his heart hanging in the air fell to the ground, but the next moment it was occupied by a full of distress.
Lin Yi was busy with work, and lost her husband shortly after giving birth to Lin Qin, and cared very little about her children.
And the little girl grew up with her grandparents and lacked the care and love of her parents, so her psychological defense was so heavy, and she didn't seem to care about anything.
He can also be regarded as Lin Qin's uncle, and he should pay more attention to it in the future.
Yan Shang thought so, walked to the table with light steps, raised his hand and took off his blazer and put it on Lin Qin.
I completely forgot that I didn't wear a coat when I got out of the car, and there was only a thin shirt left under the suit.
Lin Qin woke up when he approached, and only then did he raise his head when he felt the weight of his back, and his eyes were blankly on Yan Shang.
"Uncle Yan?"
Yan Shang nodded, helped down the coat that was about to slip off, and stopped his hand in time to keep his distance.
Explained softly: "I didn't see you out of the school, I don't worry about coming over to see, why did you fall asleep in the classroom?" ”
Lin Qin subconsciously leaned back to dodge, and tightened his collar, "I haven't finished writing the essay, and I can't get out of school." ”
Yan Shang obviously didn't expect this reason, paused for a few seconds, and asked, "Why don't you write?" ”
"I can't write."
Yan Shang pulled the stool in the front row, and curled up under the table with long legs, "I'll teach you?" ”
Lin Qin raised his eyebrows, "How to teach?" ”
Yan Shang caught a glimpse of the scratch paper on Tan Yubo's desk, writing a draft outline of the composition, and put it in front of Lin Qin: "Like you at the same table, first set the core of the title and the main purpose of the article." ”
"Then write the theme of each paragraph in the total score format, come up with three or four famous deeds that fit the theme, and fill them in."
"Finally, the end is closed, and the intention is sublimated."
"Just write it along that lines."
Lin Qin lowered his eyes and looked at the past seriously, and when he finished speaking, he clicked on the test paper with the tip of his pen and asked: "The main idea is to save food, starting with me, why does the title need to be drafted separately?" ”
"That's the questioner's request, you just do it."
She pondered for a few seconds, "Increasing production capacity, distributing on demand, and developing new energy can also achieve the purpose of having a full meal, why write this?" ”
“……”
Yan Shang carefully observed her expression and confirmed that the little girl was asking seriously, not carrying it.
"It's also important to reduce waste, and besides, saving is a virtue. ”
Lin Qin is still very sincere: "I wrote it, and the teacher said that he went off topic and ran to the Pacific Ocean." ”
Digress?
Yan Shang stretched out his hand: "Show me." ”