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Hello readers, this is Mengyun, thank you very much for coming to see my book.

The world of Harry Potter has come to an end, and although there are many twists and turns in the middle, and there are also a lot of places for Calvin, I finally stumbled to finish this copy.

How to say it, I can probably give myself a score of 70, let's talk about it little by little.

First, there is the question of the choice of this world, in this regard, I chose "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" as the plot base, using the world line after Delphi's victory, which is also part of the origin of this volume's "The Wind Rises", after all, as Voldemort said at the end, the wind corresponds to time, and there is such a metaphor.

The second layer of metaphor is that Yang Yun himself represents this storm of change, Chu Xuan has hinted at it many times, and he is also the wise man of the Zhongzhou team, for the first time to independently complete his own layout.

The result is gratifying, Qi Tengyi and Zero Point did not die, and did not leave more regrets like that nothing.

However, the problem is that "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" exists in the form of a stage play, and has not been made into a movie, and its popularity is not as good as where the Fantastic Beasts are, and its own characters also have a lot of OOC and plot flaws, resulting in the vast majority of readers not watching this work.

It can't be helped, who let me pick this world, and I have to finish writing it with tears.

Actually, I originally wanted to write a story about time travel and plot changes, and when I chose Harry Potter as the model, I wanted to write a world view similar to that of the Strangers in the High Castle, where Voldemort took over Hogwarts and Dumbledore was forced to flee or something...... But as I wrote, I found that the worldview seemed more suitable as a separate book, so I ended up with what it is now.

Maybe it would be better to write like that, but who knows about that kind of thing.

Second, there is a problem with the plot arrangement, this volume is about 20W words, almost comparable to the sum of the previous four volumes...... Of course, as a completely changed new world, and it needs to serve as a link between the previous and the next, and bury enough foreshadowing to prepare for the return in the future, I personally think this kind of length is acceptable.

The problem is that I've cram too many elements into this volume.

Zheng Zha, Zhang Jie and Yang Yun's triangular werewolf killing, on the question of "who is the real guide"; The team battle of the Indian continent team allows the players of the Zhongzhou team to be brought into play, so that it will not become a problem of soy sauce; and the problem of arranging the scenes, portraying and foreshadowing of the characters in the plot......

I used the detachment method of writing the story on one side and then writing the other, but this style of writing may not be liked by too many people.

I've tried my best to paint a good picture of the personality traits of all the characters and what they'd do in the current situation, in fact, I don't think I've written about characters with OOCs, it's just that I have to spend a lot more ink on them...... Maybe it's a good detail, and it's something I should learn.

Third, regarding the problem of Zheng Zhe's fight taking too long, this is that I am personally not very satisfied with the fight scenes, so that I changed it seven or eight times before and after, and the longer it was written, about one-third of the length was increased...... I would like to add some details to make the battle scene more exciting.

But at the moment, it seems that a lot of people don't like it, so I'm going to make adjustments to give readers a better reading experience.

Maybe it's because the general environment is not ten years ago, I actually buried a lot of foreshadowing in the fifth volume, and the biggest foreshadowing, butterflies fluttering their wings, and the wind blowing...... As it stands, I haven't seen readers see it.

So, leave the suspense for the plot of the next return.

Finally, a bit of nonsense, I know that the opening chapter is dissuading, and I know that the positive and negative settings are outdated, but these things are not useless.

I invite you readers to appreciate how I can write a different new idea about this "outdated" setting.

Please look forward to the next volume, "Borrowing the Momentum".

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