Executive Summary (Revised Section)
Change 1:
Chapter 105 of the Great War, delete the two sentences originally said by Ran Zhiyue and Shen Nian, Ran Zhiyue did not say a word, because it must be in line with her character (except for treating Elder Liu and her mother, you should not be close to the living, you can't say a word, and you are cold to the extreme)
Change 2:
Chapter 110 The plot of Ran Zhiyue and Shen Nian's re-meeting was modified, reshaping Ran Zhiyue's lonely and cold, unincompatible temperament, and the reason for not returning to Tianxue Palace has also been modified, from the original reason of "rebellious girl" to the fact that her mother stayed on the territory of the Moon Worship Demon Sect and needed to meet her mother to repair her original flawed character that was a little neurotic.
Change 3:
The last scene in chapter 114 was changed to Ran Zhiyue noticing the abnormality of Shen Nian's wound.
Change 4:
Chapter 115 was in a very bad state when it was written that day, and as he wrote, the image of Chu Ling'er appeared in his mind, and he was similar to Chu Ling'er.
Therefore, the plot was modified, from the original ruthless hand to rob the treasure, to negotiate between the two, Ran Zhiyue spoke for the first time, and recognized the root of the Biluo Huangquan tree, and also informed Shen Nian that what he owned was the root of the Biluo Huangquan tree.
After that, everyone could guess that they would ask Shen Nian to help save their mother.
Why Ran Zhiyue was angry when she saw Shen Nian riding a snow elk will be explained in a later chapter.
The subsequent plot will continue the previous changes.
Except for the last chapter, the number of words remains the same.
There are 400 more words in the last chapter, but the amount of coins spent has not changed, and readers who subscribe later still spend 4200 words!
Readers who have read it before suggested that you can reread it, and unlike the previous chapters, which were partially modified, this chapter is completely rewritten.
In addition, say more.,The female owner and the male protagonist are opposed to each other at this time (the good and the devil are not opposed),And the male protagonist was embarrassed by the female protagonist before.,She's so angry that she's not light.,Standing in the position of the female protagonist and after I think about it,,Reshaped image and temperament,It's very likely to kill the male owner.。
So, the meeting was certainly not very pleasant at first. I hope you don't think it's a brainless harem text.,The female owner has a good impression of the male owner or something.,This is pure bullshit.,It's Dick Silk Yin.。
I try to be as true as possible to reproduce the reaction of both men and women when they meet for the first time in their own positions.
Just imagine, the righteous woman will have a good impression of the demon man when she meets, and she is the one who has angered her, right?
In addition, if there are any suggestions, you can leave a message in this chapter, I will absorb and adopt, I haven't written it for a long time, if there is anything wrong with the front, put it forward and I will revise it!