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About DIY, I really didn't expect that it would cause such a big reaction, after all, in the last book, I also tried to DIY the same tone hero element hero of the Salvation Rose Dragon and the tenth generation, and there was no such a big response at the time.

The previous book was a failure for me, I thought it would be an interesting story, but in the case of opening all the cards at the beginning, in the middle and late stages of writing, I suddenly had a feeling that You Ye was playing cards for the sake of playing cards, in general, each game of cards has no meaning, it is one game after another, but what is the point of this? Novels have to have a story.

It's really easy to say that one game after another.,At that time, I ordered almost 1000 for each chapter.,Two more times a day plus the previous chapter.,Almost every day the new subscription can have fast 3000.,That's 120 yuan.,How comfortable.。

However, I majored in animation design in college, and my teacher once said to us that if you become a creator in the future, then I want you to create something worthy of people who are willing to spend money on your work.

I've always kept this sentence in my heart, so, when I realized that the last book I wrote collapsed, I cut it decisively, because there is no point in continuing to write it except for wasting my time and your money, and most people can guess the follow-up plot, and the final battle with ZONE in the time channel, and finally protect the new future created by Brother Crab in the name of the time keeper.

Seriously, I've thought about the duel process of the final battle.

Bully purple, tyrant white, tyranny black war machine god.

But I knew I couldn't write anymore, and the cycle of playing cards in each chapter didn't even give me the desire to open the writer's assistant.

So I started a new book, and it took me a week to design the outline.

In this book, I want to emphasize the story.

I chose the background in the ARCAV world with a grand world view.,This world is not like the other ones.,The world background is explained clearly.,There's a lot of blank space in this world for me to operate.。

So I designed Ryuka Sugihara, a lonely avenger who lost everything and was ignited by the main character, and gave him my favorite Z4 character, Shark, who also lost everything.

So, at present, I haven't followed any main line in this book except for the plot of going to the basic dimension to find people, because I hope that Genyu Hao can have his own story, not the person who does things in Sakaki Yuya's story.

So, I arranged for the protagonist to bring Serena back to the Heart Garden, and laid a lot of plots, my DIY card is really just looking at the effect is a piece of waste paper that the dog doesn't carry, this effect is indeed a summary of Serena's mood change after experiencing a series of things in the Heart Garden.

I hope that in this book, every important hand can have a meaning and serve the story.

And then there's the problem of trash fish enhancement that many people say, saying that trash fish are not worthy of using ×× decks and the like, first of all, this book will not introduce the DT world view, and then what kind of card deck do you use for trash fish that fuse the dimension? Ancient machinery.

If you don't strengthen these people, even if I write a card deck with obvious weaknesses like ancient machinery, it will be boring for you to read too much.

In addition,This book will be on the shelves next week 5,On the shelves 5 more,The first order of my last book is about 400,The goal this time is set at 500.,The part higher than 500 is every 100 first order plus a chapter.,Reward,Accumulate 10,000 points plus a change.,And then there is an alliance leader directly 20 more.,Although there is a high probability of not,But it's still a dream.。

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