The story of the Azurite civilization is finally over, and I am finally relieved that I feel that I have played well.

Some places can also be optimized, and the climax chapter is polished or something, so that the mood is a little richer, but because of the tight time and the pressure of serialization, it can only be like this.

As for the writing or something, I also want to improve, but for a while, there is really no way.

Maybe it's influenced by my last book "Extradimensional Game", which uses a lot of puzzle-solving writing here, and it's not very friendly to follow-up, and the chase fell by about 1-2 thousand at the beginning. A lot of people have it.

However, I feel that the whole story is coherent and should be no big problem, I hope that the later reading can be up!

(You're dreaming, and you won't go up if you read it!) ）

Also, there is a little bit of a problem with the rhythm.

is different from the Xuanwu Continent, the Xuanwu Continent has a group of turtles as supporting characters, and the earthlings are shocked by the mirage's madness, which is easier to write (can pretend to be forced).

And this new chapter, only a few old characters in the past are supporting, and no earthlings are shocked by the side, although these characters can meet some funny plots, but from the perspective of rhythm, the cool point is a little lacking.

In the process of writing, I also noticed this, even if there is a story framework of the blue crystal people, but the overall content, there is still a little less lubrication.

can't pretend to be forced, it's really missing a little bit of flavor.

The problem is not too big, and I am still satisfied with the whole story.

In the next chapter, I will learn from the lessons, meet some new characters, and expand my circle of friends.

Because of the fall of the demon god and the relationship of a hundred years of great development, various civilizations will also run out to wander around and be able to meet them.

It's not good to let the protagonist dig up the ruins all the time, and it's impossible to dig a place just when he gets to a place, there's no such luck!

In addition, progress on the planet must be accelerated.

Earthlings are too vegetable, the power level of this book is still very high, and a one-man show is not good.

In this book, the power of the collective can still play a role, that is, to build a world wonder-level mass killing weapon, which can defeat a strong enemy.

A single individual dish is no problem at all, as long as it can build a spectacle, it can solve a large part of the problem.

Finally, I found that many people don't seem to look at the whole copy, but directly look at the final ending, what's the gain?!

Because those subscriptions are incredibly high!

Isn't this the same as ...... As long as the last three seconds, don't you want an intermediate process?

Well, sometimes I read some books with infinite streams, and I do the same, but I think this copy is still okay...... Not to the point where you need to skip it, right?

That's all for the summary, 500,000 words unconsciously, I haven't asked for leave yet, a donkey at the level of a model worker!

The donkeys in the production team all have holidays!

I hope that the next play will be smooth and the writing will be smooth!