First of all, let me tell you my own evaluation of this volume.

I have to admit that this volume is somewhat unsatisfactory, too loose and prosaic overall...... What's more, the update is heavily stretched.

This is the reason for the book's increasingly dismal results.

However, what touched me was that there were still more than 100 book friends who were silently supporting me, and some book friends still insisted on voting.

Thank!

I believe that the best reward for this support is to write the story well.

Back to the point.

Why was this volume written like this?

I think the main reason is in the initial plot design-

In the outline text, there are more than 1,300 words of relevant text in this volume...... However, its main content is almost an analysis of the original work, and there are very few that really involve the development of the protagonist's story.

But to be honest, I actually designed it that way.

What I think is that after the protagonist has the foundation of the first volume, he really joins the mysterious story in the second volume...... This is a process of integration, and the main purpose is to maintain the original "plot" under the influence of the butterfly effect.

Then, the problem arises.

This is tantamount to borrowing the main line of the second volume of the original book, and my protagonist has become a supporting character in the actual sense......

There are a lot of questions, and it is very difficult to write.

Coupled with the fact that I originally wanted to suppress the promotion of the protagonist in this volume, as a way to reflect the difficulty of the "joy" stage, there are even more problems to solve.

There is also the coercion of the river crab beast, and the lack of his own writing ability-

In this volume, I came "floating" most of the time, and I didn't feel down-to-earth.

So, I lost control of the content weight.

My initial word count plan before I opened the book was like this-

Roughly divided into the sequence of protagonists, from ordinary people to the old days, each stage is about 10 words, and the total number of words is about 120...... Of course, there are a little more stages in sequence 6.

But it shouldn't be as much as it is now!

I roughly estimated that I had actually written about 40 words in Sequence 6 and 12 words in Sequence 5.

It's clearly out of control.

In this process, inspiration is drained, enthusiasm is consumed, and laziness grows...... That's why I will write more and more difficult and slower in the future.

Now, all the difficulties and problems have been circled into the full stop of this volume.

I believe that everything will slowly get better when we enter the third volume!

Let's talk about the content.

This volume is still a story of growth and escape.

The dilemma of the protagonist in the first volume is mainly reflected in the real environment, and this volume is transferred to the spiritual level...... To put it simply, it is "missing out on the inaccessibility".

The witch's heart is already entangled, and the protagonist is a "good" witch, so of course it will be even more entangled.

I don't know how much I wrote, whether I could read it...... All I can say is that I'm done writing, so let's force a little clarity here.

This volume has a (I think) good interaction with the first volume, which is the original fate of the protagonist -

What kind of future would he have if he hadn't crossed over at the beginning of the story?

The first volume is his leader York, and the second is his colleague John ...... These two are the portrayal of the fate of the protagonist.

It's a pity, it's a pity!

Because of the poor state of writing at the end of the volume, I wrote badly and embarrassingly.

But—

Yesterday is over, stay from the beginning, welcome the Ming Dynasty!

The next thing I should do is to clean up my mood and start again, bamboo canes and shoes are lighter than horses, who is afraid? A cloud of smoke and rain is Ren Ping's life.

In the third volume, "The Unruly Sea King", the protagonist who is physically and mentally freed will usher in a new story on the vast sea, grow his own strength, and lay his own path to leadership......

Stay tuned!

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P.S. I talked about the cameo role in the group a long time ago...... I originally wanted to officially post it in the book friend circle, but now it's all collapsed like this, so I'll just whisper it here-

Now open the protagonist crew trick, and I'll be able to set up someone after joining the group.

(There is no guarantee of appearance, and there is no guarantee of authenticity.) ）