"That.... So if you write a novel or something like that now, aren't you worried about causing similar conflicts in your family? Hearing this, Xia Yan asked a little cautiously.

If you play a mobile game, you will be scolded, and Song Lingyun is a rich girl who writes serialized youth novels, which may not be tolerated in the eyes of her strict father.

"Well, now I'm naturally not worried about those.... Because I have reached the age of sixteen, and I have reached adulthood. I can judge the direction of my life and take responsibility for it. Song Lingyun looked at Xia Yan and said softly.

Dragon Country, is sixteen years old and adult! That's why she chose to write novels and do things she was interested in when she became an adult?

When Xia Yan heard this, he let out a long breath.

Although I had only talked to her for a few minutes, Xia Yan.... I really think that Song Lingyun's head is really clear.

"That's... Tang Yin... That pile of consoles of yours.... Can I borrow it? ”

Xia Yan looked at Tang Yin, who was frowning and reading the manuscript of the novel.

"Just don't break it for me." Tang Yin was also reading the novel very seriously, so she responded casually.

When Xia Yan heard this, he immediately came to his senses, and hurriedly ran over, took out a game console that he had been greedy for a long time, plugged it in, and placed it on the table.

"Let's try it out? Adult? ”

Xia Yan looked at Song Lingyun and put the truth. Iron Soul's game cassette was plugged in, and the simple and crude music of the game console resembled the electronic music of the red and white machine was presented.

Tang Yin was reading the manuscript of the novel there, and it was estimated that he would not take care of the two of them within half an hour, and he was idle, so it was better to play games.

Of course, the most important thing is that Xia Yan feels that Song Lingyun is too pitiful, her childhood was not in the game hall. Iron Soul's companionship in this game is forgotten, he doesn't allow Song Lingyun to be an adult at the age of sixteen, and he is still so ignorant.

This is the same as the fact that children in parallel worlds are not accompanied by games such as Contra, Super Mario, King of Fighters, Dinosaur Kombat, and Violent Motorcycles in their childhood, which is absolutely intolerable.

When Song Lingyun heard this, people were also a little confused.

Xia Yan: What kind of brain circuit is this?

Shouldn't two novel authors who are serialized in the literature of Red Maple get together to talk about topics such as novel creation, foreshadowing, and readers' emotional incitement?

Why all of a sudden asking me if I can play video games?

Song Lingyun looked at the gamepad that Xia Yan had placed in front of her, as well as the electronic sound of the broken sound coming from the game console......

I thought about it for two seconds.

"You can give it a try." Song Lingyun picked up the game controller, and inexplicably felt a light and happy emotion in his heart.

True. Iron Soul is a game, in fact, similar to the King of Fighters in the parallel world, the player chooses the game control character at the beginning, and can fight against the computer, or ..... Players play against each other.

"I don't really know how to play this game, I may need you to teach me how to do it."

"It's very easy to operate.... There are only a few buttons in total, mainly combos..."Xia Yan looked at Song Lingyun, and before the words fell, he was also stunned.

Song Lingyun looked at the screen of the game console, and her fingers were ready to go.... Her eyes had sharpened.

As long as it's something related to winning or losing, she'll definitely pay a hundred points of attention.

An indescribable temperament was born in her, Xia Yan originally wanted to have a teaching game with her in a relaxed and happy way, but seeing her eyes.....

What the heck?

Is she... What do you mean by abusing me in the game?

I didn't mess with her, did I?

Xia Yan, who had been in the game hall all year round before junior high school, was very familiar with the eyes of his game opponents.

It's not necessarily hard for a guy to lose a fight, but to lose a game.... I can't sleep at night.

If the opponent fights against you with the mentality of blowing you up, then his response is to show no mercy.

......

Long..... Tang Yincai finished reading the manuscripts of the seventh and eighth chapters of the two novels in his hand.

The plot of Starlight yesterday, after being rolled out from the foreshadowing in the early stage, is now a novel plot integrating fantasy, love and decryption.

Honestly.... The plot is exciting.... The quality is also outstanding. It can only be said that the novels written by people with smart brains are different, the protagonist's IQ is online, and even in the process of reading, Tang Yin once felt that his IQ was slightly suppressed by the plot, and he had to read and think for a long time to understand.

But..... There are too many content elements involved, and readers may seem a little confused. There are four or five small changes or deletions in the plot of chapters 7 and 8 of this novel, which will make it more comfortable to read.

And the journey of youth ......

Tang Yin's expression was frustrated.

She spent four vacations as an editor at Red Maple Literature in college, and worked in Red Maple Literature for nearly two years after graduation.

However, as far as Xia Yan took out the manuscript of the seventh and eighth chapters of the novel of the journey of youth.....

She couldn't fault it.

This is by no means to say that this novel is really flawless, but that she has no way to guide Xia Yan in a better direction of writing than the plot written in this manuscript.

Mature, too mature ....

This doesn't need to be modified, at most, there may be some improvements in the writing description, but the main plot or something, it's a very mature teenage girl love novel.

And this plot, seeing that she, the editor, seems to have returned to her youth, and the girl's heart is full.

Seeing the plot when Xun walked off the train at that critical second and chose to stand with Futaba, Tang Yin could clearly feel that his heartbeat was a little faster.

Tang Yin looked up at this moment and saw the two people sitting on the sofa.

Song Lingyun's snow-white teeth bit her lower lip tightly, her eyes were slightly ruddy, staring at the screen of the game console, but the movements of her hands were not slow at all.

I have a clear plan for what I want to do next.

Small jumps, crotch piercing hands, mines, explosions ....

Right now, Song Lingyun's eyes lit up, and his fingers pressed down heavily.

On the other side, a smile appeared on the corner of Xia Yan's mouth.....

The pants have been seen through, little girl, what you want to do is all under the control of this master.

I've been ten years really. The Iron Soul Arcade Master was beaten by someone you studied for half an hour, how could it be?

Quickly make a block, step back, and .....

A set of combos, the characters controlled by Song Lingyun are blocked in the corner of the wall, and they can't get down directly from the sky.....

Ten seconds....

Song Lingyun's fingers holding the gamepad trembled for a full ten seconds, and her eyes became redder and redder, but in the end, she still held back.

"I lost!" Song Lingyun lowered her head, her voice carrying endless grievances.

"You still have talent, and you can master the role of "Yuan" to this extent after only nine games with me. Practice a little more, and I'll be no match for you. Xia Yan also calmed down from the excitement of the game state.

Suddenly, all the pride in his heart dissipated, and he reflected on his complacent mentality of defeating a game white, and comforted the loser appropriately.

“0-9。”

Song Lingyun's breath was trembling, this record.... She clenched her fists.

At this time, the doorbell at Tang Yin's house rang.

The hot pot for her takeaway has arrived....

The delivery man brought in a whole pot, and then side dishes, all kinds of meat, some seasonal vegetables...

Two minutes later, the living room of Tang Yin's house was already full of fragrance.

Xia Yan and Song Lingyun smelled the fragrance, and their stomachs screamed "coo~".

After all, it's already eight o'clock in the evening.,The three of them didn't eat anything at all.。。

"Okay, let's talk while we eat." Tang Yin's stomach was also growling with hunger.

....

On the dining table, the red oil soup base in the pot was bubbling, and Xia Yan and Song Lingyun were sitting on their knees, listening to Tang Yin's teachings while eating.

After all, she is a treater, she eats people with a soft mouth, and she is short of playing other people's game machines.

"Song Lingyun, your protagonist is portrayed very well, but the problem is the supporting role..... There are too many characters, and there are more than a dozen people in the two-chapter novel, and if those people don't have a corresponding plot behind them, then pass them aside, don't let them come out and disturb the reader's sight. ”

"Also, the plot of the eighth chapter is not good, in the dream labyrinth, I met the classmate who framed the heroine before and fell into crisis, and it didn't fall into the well, why let the male protagonist save her?"

"I think this can reflect the kindness of the male protagonist." Song Lingyun said in a low voice.

In front of Xia Yan, being picked by Tang Yin, the editor, made her a little uncomfortable, after all... Xia Yan is her competitor! How can you make him see a joke so easily?

"Wrong, wrong, very wrong. Today's readers don't like any kind and gentle male protagonist at all.... Or, it's not that I don't like the kind and gentle male protagonist, but the male protagonist's emotions... It can only be released to the heroine. A boy who is kind and gentle to everyone.... It's just a central air-conditioned scumbag.,Even the classmates who hurt the female protagonist are going to save it.,I can say this.,It's an absolute huge minus for the male owner.。 Tang Yin said directly.

When Song Lingyun heard this, he could only keep these words in his heart.

Ten minutes later.....

Tang Yin's criticism of Song Lingyun's yesterday's starlight manuscript is over.

"Okay, that's all there are in your two chapters of the novel, and there are no major problems, it's all small details, and it doesn't take much effort to change them."

Hearing this, Song Lingyun looked forward to it.

My question is over, then it's Xia Yan's youth journey.

Editor Tang Yin didn't have to give me face, criticized him fiercely, and suppressed his arrogant momentum.

Song Lingyun was full of expectations and waited for Tang Yin's next words.

"Xia Yan...."Tang Yin's cherry-colored lips opened slightly.

"Well, I listened." Xia Yan sat upright.

Song Lingyun's eyes were extremely focused.

"Do you feel fresh about the beef from this hot pot restaurant?"

"....." Xia Yan

"......" Song Lingyun.

"It's okay, but it's not as fresh as chasing a cow's butt and gnawing on it." Xia Yan didn't know what Tang Yin meant, so he made a joke and eased up.

I'm afraid it's calm before the storm.

"Okay then... Hurry up and eat, the meat will not taste good if it has been cooked for a long time. ”

Tang Yin's expression showed a light smile, and then... Concentrate on cooking.

"Huh?" Song Lingyun's eyes widened in disbelief.

"That, Tang Yin.... Don't you have anything to say about the novel manuscript about the journey of youth? ”

Song Lingyun took the initiative to remind Tang Yin.

Hurry up and criticize Xia Yan!

Come on!

Don't give him face.

"A journey of youth? There's nothing to say, the plot is perfect and the writing is excellent.... I can't find fault with it, just submit it directly to the book company for printing and serialization. Tang Yin paused, looked at Song Lingyun speechlessly, and said.

I don't even want to mention this stubble, I just don't want Xia Yan to be proud, why did you take the initiative to mention it?

Song Lingyun's mouth opened wide, and her fingers... Trembling slightly.

Tang Yin and Xia Yan didn't notice that at this moment.....

A certain girl's Dao heart is broken.

has not recovered from the blow of Xia Yan's game tyranny on her, and she was hit by the comparison between herself and Xia Yan in her novel career.

At this moment, Song Lingyun's hot pot in his mouth was no longer fragrant.

Why is this happening?

....