Chapter 58: Progress

After Song Lingyun hung up the phone, she looked over the daughter wall and looked at a classroom in the teaching building next door diagonally below.

Well.... She has good eyesight, and she can just see Xia Yan sleeping next to the window seat in the second and third classes of high school.

She was also able to follow Xia Yan for a while because of the competition in the novel, and only then did she find that Xia Yan could be seen from the location on the rooftop.

"He's really.... There was no sense of crisis at all. "Unheard of the flower name" is the thirteenth in line! ”

There are only fourteen novels in the journal "Red Maple", and the "black pupils" at the bottom are works that have long since collapsed and are determined to be cut in half.

Judging from the information about the works at the serial meeting that Song Lingyun learned from Tang Yin.

The evaluation of the first chapter of "Cangzhi Flame Tail" at the serialization conference is generally not much different from Song Lingyun's "Sea of Stars". So....

The results of the first chapter of this issue of "Sea of Stars" can be compared to "The Tail of the Flame".

If there is no accident, wait until the next issue of "Black Pupil" is over, and the writer Red Dragon's "Cangzhi Flame Tail" appears in the "Red Maple" periodical....

"Unheard of Flower Name" is about to become the fourteenth in line.

That's the penultimate one.

Song Lingyun's white palms covered her face, covering her anxious face, and from the gap in her fingertips, she looked at Xia Yan who was lying on the table by the window and sleeping with her head down.

Song Lingyun really didn't understand Xia Yan.....

Even if your novel is slow to heat up, and you have confidence in its follow-up plot, who can predict what will happen in the future? Now I have time, think more, check more, and see if there is any point that can be improved in the plot of my novel.

Sleeping just like that?

"How did you get enough to sleep?"

Song Lingyun stomped on the ground, and then immediately noticed that his psychological mood was not quite right.

Why did she help Xia Yan worry about these things.....

After thinking about it for a while, I vaguely understood that probably she just hoped that she could win Xia Yan, but in fact, in her heart.... I don't want Xia Yan to lose to others.

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In the dream....

Xia Yan dreamed of Yuan Qing's memories again.

Indeed, as he expected before, as long as he thought about a certain matter in Yuan Qing's memory during the day, the more likely it was that the memory fragments he saw would have memories related to this matter.

During this time, what he was thinking about was of course a serialization of novels that he had never heard of.

And after the end of the serialization of the first issue of today's unheard flower name, he just rested on his stomach at noon, and he directly dreamed of the plot of the four to six episodes of the original animation of the unheard flower name.

One noon, he watched the relevant plot animations with relish.

"Indeed, the further back you go, the more interesting the episode becomes. Although the foreshadowing in the early stage is long enough, it will not be discovered until the relationship between the characters is straightened out later. ”

The childhood friends are torn apart by the death of the heroine, and the storyline of this work... It is to promote the action of the male protagonist through the soul of the heroine, so that everyone in childhood can ..... The relationship is restored, and the friendship of the past is restored.

However, after watching the sixth episode, although Xia Yan felt that the story was starting to look better, in fact, until now, this work has only made him feel excellent.

It doesn't feel better than a youth journey.

But in Yuan Qing's memory, when she was chasing on a certain B website, those barrages kept brushing the back of the plot touching and tearful, which made Xia Yan's curiosity more and more serious.

Behind?

How much back?

After Yuan Qing watched these three episodes of the animation with unheard flower names, she started other senseless operations.

I stopped watching anime and went to play games instead.....

A pixel game, the picture quality is so bad that it explodes, but she listened to a friend's recommendation and said that the plot was very good and she tried it.

Island, Wish, Doctor.....

Xia Yan was very interested in everything in the parallel world, so he naturally concentrated on browsing this memory.

In the afternoon, the class bell that rang made Xia Yan wake up from his sleep.

Today is Monday, and it is also the day when Xia Yan comes to school in the last week of this semester.

From Monday to Wednesday, there are no classes, but final exams.

The plot of that pixel game has just begun.... To be honest, the initial plot was boring enough, but Xia Yanquan had time to spare.

For now, it's better to concentrate on the exam.

The next few days.

Wait until the day Xia Yan and their exams are over.....

It is also the date of the official release of the second phase of Unheard of Flower Name.

Unheard of Flower Name Chapter 2 Plot .....

Or foreshadowing.

Lively boy, fat man Bobo.

Studying in a key high school, a proud actress with white skin and beautiful appearance.

is also a key high school.,Excellent and handsome arrogant male merit student Xue Ji.。

Poor school.,Beautiful but seems to like the male protagonist Song In's tsundere girl Anseong.。

Bobo is as lively and enthusiastic as when he was a child, and the two of them are directly ridiculed and deliberately alienated by their former childhood playmates, who dropped out of school, failed to get into a good school, and gave up on themselves and skipped class.

In the plot of this chapter, several people intersect with each other, and the plot also portrays the contradictions between these characters.

But the central point of the contradiction is focused on the heroine Lin Yi....

The plot of this chapter is to make the relationship between the male protagonist Song In, Bobo, and the girl Ancheng who has a crush on him show signs of restoring childhood friendship.

On the official website of Red Maple Literature, many fans of Yuanqing have begun to complain.

"It feels so slow!"

"What story does Mr. Yuanqing want to write in this work?"

"Love? It doesn't feel like it. ”

"There's nothing to write about in love. The interpersonal relationship of this work is already very clear, in the plot of the first two chapters, at least in the childhood of this group of people, "Xueji" and the male protagonist "Song Ren" like the female protagonist "Lin Yi". "Tsuru" likes "Snow Collection". "Anseong" likes the male protagonist "Song In". Bobo has no desires, no one likes to be a monk. ”

"What is that to write? Write about the leisurely daily life between the ghost heroine and the male protagonist? ”

"Teacher Yuanqing feels that there is a problem with the creation of this work! She is famous for writing love works for young girls, how can this new work write such a story of four dissimilarities? ”

"I read the first two chapters of this work, actually, I also think that the writing is not bad. But that is, the quality and youth journey ratio has declined greatly. ”

"The portrayal of the heroine "Lin Yi" is quite good, I have been a little teary-eyed when I see the plot about her a few times, but how to say... The plots of the other characters feel a bit boring. ”

"Don't be too anxious. I believe in the strength of Teacher Yuanqing, this is only the second chapter of the novel, what are you panicking about? ”

"Alas, it's just that I saw Ningyun, who used to be a defeated soldier under Teacher Yuanqing, and now the new novel has received rave reviews, and I feel unwilling."

"Ningyun's book fans are also arrogant in the forum now, stepping on Teacher Yuanqing in various ways, saying what "Yuanqing is a short-lived novel writer." ", "Yuanqing's level was revealed in the Red Maple Journal", "The tide receded, and I found that Yuanqing, who was embarrassed in the first half of the year, was swimming naked, and he had a false name. "I am so annoyed to see these remarks."

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