Preparations for the use of memory instruments are over.

Eva and Neil stopped their aimless search, and couldn't find anything meaningful in reality.

Then go directly to John's memory and ask him.

The two put on the machine and entered the deep sea of John's memory, and for the first time, the machine's memory jumped and came to the memory timeline before John's coma

I asked directly about the old man's memories during that time period.

"Why do you want to go to the moon?"

"I don't know"

The old man John thought carefully, and then, looking at the two people in front of him in confusion.

He didn't know why his dying wish was to go to the moon.

However, this desire is important.

Very important.

"I just, I have to go." John said in an old voice.

Chapter 1, End.

Tang Yin blinked.

That's it?

"Xia Yan, you this, chapter 1. I would like to say that it may be a matter of my taste. Are you sure that's all for the first chapter, I don't think there's much interesting about the work? The setting of this memory machine is quite interesting, but in the development of the main story line, is there a slight problem with the rhythm? ”

"Well, your feeling after reading it is right, this first chapter is like this" Xia Yan probably understood her inner thoughts.

There are many gamers in the parallel world who are dissuaded by the pixel art style and fragmented flashback structure narrative of the original game.

Fortunately, Xia Yan directly omitted a lot of meaningless character dialogues and RPG game elements, and went straight to the theme.

But

Even if it doesn't seem so boring, but thinking about it, Tang Yin definitely didn't experience any fun from the first chapter.

"I understand that what you focused on in the first chapter may be a foreshadowing. What a paper rabbit, a lighthouse, a desire to go to the moon. However, this is the "New God Ascendant" selection! Tang Yin hesitated, but still said.

She didn't really want to talk too much. After all, Xia Yan can write a million-level sales volume per million, can she Tang Yin? The editing experience she is proud of may be just some poison proposal for Xia Yan. However, she still couldn't hold back.

"If you foreshadow, you can bury it a little later, what you want in the first chapter is to be attractive, you can first put the interesting parts of this story, the explosion point in advance. And then write later, and then lay the pen in the ambush, there is still time, and the manuscript of the first chapter can be changed."

"There's no way, I can't change this one, it's a flashback structure, so there's no way to do it. Because one of the main plot lines in the back is to reveal and explore the meaning of these foreshadowings in the first chapter. Xia Yan smiled.

“.”

Tang Yin looked at Xia Yan's serious face, and she sighed lightly.

"Are you a genius confident in yourself?"

As the saying goes, often walking by the river, how can there be no shoes that don't get wet.

I haven't heard of the name of the flower to start with a slow heat, and it is true that the popularity and popularity have risen.

But no one can guarantee that they will always have such a popular development in the later stage, right?

The market, the audience's taste, and patience, who can control this thing 100%? If you're not careful, you'll be completely screwed.

What's more, the first chapter of going to the moon is not only a slow heat, but also a foreshadowing throughout, and the story structure is a flashback.

Tang Yin can probably see that the main line of this book is to help "Old Man John" realize his wish to go to the moon.

From this starting point, the style of this film is completely different from the theme of youth love and youth friendship that Xia Yan wrote before.

And to realize this wish, the protagonists Neil and Eva have to go through this memory machine that can only jump little by little, piece by piece across the timeline.

From John's memories of old age, to middle-aged and old memories, to youth memories, and juvenile memories, he has been looking backwards for his desire to go to the moon.

Slow heat plus flashbacks

And this is still serialized in the national newcomer selection activity of "New God Ascending".

There's really yours. Xia Yan.

"Xia Yan New God ascended to the selection of this event, but all the families who can get the seed quota are all potential newcomers who have risen in the Dragon Kingdom in the past two years. Anyone, in his area, can be called a "genius". Tang Yin looked at Xia Yan with a solemn expression.

"Actually, in previous years, in this event, except for the six people who participated in the Demon Capital Imperial Capital, forty-five people from other regions were basically accompanied."

"These forty-five people, anyway, the ultimate goal is just to enter the top ten picks in the selection, so that basically there is the possibility of being favored and signed by three top bookstores with sales channels all over the Dragon Country, such as "Starry Sky", "Qingze Library", and "Liuli Books". If it can enter the top 20 ranks, there is also the possibility of being favored by four large bookstores such as "Nanyue Literature", "Dawn Library", "Xuanzhou Library", and "Breaking the Moon", which can also cover more than seven or eight provinces in the Dragon Kingdom. ”

Once Tang Yin's topic is opened, she can't stop.

These words should not be said by her, the current "in-service editor of Red Maple Literature", otherwise it is almost a clear indication that Xia Yan is a little more stable in this selection activity and gets a good ranking, and you can jump to the seven top book clubs.

But she still said it, because if she didn't say it, she would regret it. Xia Yan may be young and don't know the relationship, she has to make it clear as a friend, so as not to regret Xia Yan's operation in the future.

"Everyone, in order to have a highlight on your resume, or to broaden your career path, you must do your best to strive for the ranking. Nobody is going to do anything slow-burning. Moreover, in this selection, you, plus the six people in the Demon Capital and the Imperial Capital, a total of seven of them have the historical achievement of selling more than one million copies of this volume in a single line. ”

"Once the journal "New God Ascends" is released, you will inevitably be compared with the six people by a group of good things book lovers and book reviewers in the Dragon Kingdom. ”

Tang Yin made all her concerns clear to Xia Yan, hoping to see even a trace of hesitation and vacillation in Xia Yan's eyes.

How can an example of the rise of unheard of flower names be the norm?

Although she believes in Xia Yan's strength, she is also worried that Xia Yan will be blinded by the achievements of unheard of Hua Ming, and she will be blindly confident in herself.

But after looking at Xia Yan for a long time, he found that his eyes did not waver.

Tang Yin took a deep breath, closed her eyes and thought for a few seconds, then looked at Xia Yan and smiled.

"I see, respect your choice. I'll send your chapter to the editorial office tomorrow, and they'll handle your serialization in the journal New Godstion. ”

"Actually, it's a good thing to seek stability." Xia Yan picked up a small packet of snacks from Tang Yin's table and put it in his mouth.

"But the risk is greater, the benefit will be greater!"

In the memory of the girl Yuan Qing, in fact, there have been a lot of interesting works in the past year.

But looking at the overall quality, those works are in Xia Yan's heart, and it is better to go to the moon

Writing those works that seek stability may only be able to get a mediocre result in the "New God Ascension" activity.

And if you want to be a blockbuster, you still have to take a risk and write a high-risk work like going to the moon.

"For me, if I get a general term in this competition, it's actually no different from winning the last place." Xia Yan finally said.

The next day, Song Lingyun came to Tang Yin's house with a new work.

After reading the first chapter of her new work, Tang Yin was in a happy mood and had a long talk with Song Lingyun until the evening.

Obviously, she is very satisfied with Song Lingyun's new work.

End of November.

The three contestants "Yuanqing", "Ningyun" and "Nanze" in the southern province all submitted their entries to the imperial capital area.

In the past few days, the organizers of the "New God Ascending" event in the imperial capital region have also received a total of 51 submissions from various provinces of the Dragon Kingdom.

"Wang Yong", "Sun Xiao", "Chu Li" in the imperial capital area.

"Kang Ning", "Jiang Jing", "Chen Yi" in the Modu area. and other people's submissions enter the review stage.

Compared with Xia Yan and Song Lingyun, who use pen names, the families in the Modu area are all real names.

After all, after becoming famous, using a real name can impress readers a little bit about them, and it also has great commercial value.

Submissions in other regions are reviewed at a slower pace.

However, when the organizer reviewed the submission to the southern province, "Yuanqing" "To the Moon".

The reviewers all had strange expressions.

They actually said that they were reviewers, but in fact, they were also professional editors temporarily transferred from the seven major book clubs, and they had read a lot, so they could naturally see at a glance that this first chapter was frantically ambushing and setting up.

Everyone started chatting right away.

"That "Yuanqing" in the southern province is it. It's really bold enough to dare to write this kind of in the "New God Ascension" event selection. ”

"Other authors can't wait for the plot of the first chapter to show the story and the breaking points, it's good for her to write this kind of work that only the great gods of the world dare to write."

"Rather, have any of you seen the "unheard of flower name" she wrote? Do you know this man's writing style? ”

"I haven't seen it."

"Me too."

"In addition to the magic capital, there are fifteen provinces in the Dragon Kingdom, and there are fifteen provinces outside the imperial capital region, each province has a few small book clubs, these provincial-level regions are popular, and the number of serials at the same time adds up to hundreds, who can read it, I can sweep the excellence of the magic capital area is probably amazing, from other provinces, I'm really not interested in watching it"

"Me too."

"But this book can actually sell more than one million copies of a single volume, or it is an achievement achieved under the operation of the Seven Books of the Non-Dragon Kingdom. This author "Yuanqing" must have something real, don't underestimate her "To the Moon". ”

"Hehe, when she is really famous in the Dragon Kingdom, I will go to see what "unheard of flower name" is. There's no time right now. ”

"I haven't heard of the name of the flower, but I have read the first chapter of "To the Moon". I feel that with this plot, I'm afraid the results won't be good after serialization. ”

"Lao Li, they are all acquaintances, don't be subtle. Seriously, I feel that the popularity of the first issue of this "To the Moon" serial, even with the blessing of some fans of her "Unheard of Flower Name", should be within the top three in the penultimate order. Whether the latter can become popular depends on the plot of the later chapters. ”

"Well, it's another contribution from the Southern Province. The "rainbow fate" written by this lemon rhyme is well written! ”

"I'll see"

The editors were silent for a few minutes, and soon the review room was lively.

"I'll go, it's kind of fun."

"Really, the first chapter is so fascinating, this guy. The pen is very good. ”

"As far as I know, Ningyun seems to have been deeply involved in the theme of youth fantasy love since her debut. This kind of person is a smart person.,It's not like that Yuanqing.,I just searched.,Look at her family career information.,The first part writes about youth love.,The second part writes about youth friendship.,This "To the Moon",I actually went to write science fiction.。 Really engaged"

"But it also depends on the plot later, the ten-issue serialization period, the length of ten chapters, it is not easy to tell a story well."

On the other hand, the home of Nan Province called "Nan Ze", his is very mediocre, and in this "New God Ascending Ladder" selection of the army, the quality seems to be decent. ”

After the submission review in the southern province was completed, a group of reviewers reviewed the submissions from other provinces non-stop.

A few days later.

The committee determined that all 51 articles had been reviewed.

And on the official website, the titles of 51 works, and author information.

Except for Xia Yan and Song Lingyun, most people are still willing to release their true information.

Yuan Qing, Ningyun's fans saw that until this time, these two people were reluctant to reveal their identities, and they were naturally extremely disappointed.

But immediately, the excitement came over me.

The name of Yuanqing's new work is known." To the Moon".

Although it was only the title of the work announced, no other information was revealed, but.

This does not affect the fans of "Unheard of Flower Names" to instantly become active on the official website of the "New God Ascension" event.

Each entry actually has a sub-forum on it, so that fans of each participating author can freely discuss on it.

Normally, fans of each author will not mess around with other sub-forums and recruit their own authors.

But this day. Many people suddenly found that although this official website forum was opened, the painting style was a bit strange.

Many fans who haven't heard of the name of the flower haven't actually stepped out of the plot yet.,Don't forget to act as this tap water when you see the opportunity.。。

And since everyone is a competitor, there is no shame in it, and they take the initiative to go to other places to spread the word.

[The annual heart-warming, healing god is unheard of flower name, and the single book in major cities of the Dragon Kingdom is on sale! ] 】

[Southern Province's top light family source Qingli unheard of flower name, top funny masterpiece! ] 】

[I haven't heard the name of the flower, I will heal my life after reading it, and I will regret it for a lifetime if I don't see it! ] 】

Promotional posts like this are flooding the official website of the "New God Ascension" event.

This is the case. Many book lovers in other regions are full of question marks.

I thought it was a book lover in the southern province who didn't know how to be polite.

But take a look at the IP addresses of these posters.

Although the Southern Province has the most, there are all regions of Mo Province, Yun Province, Demon Capital, and Imperial Capital.

This unheard of flower name, there are so many die-hard fans? Even the official website forum of "New God Ascending" did not let go, and forcibly promoted it like this?

(End of chapter)