Chapter 210: Review

Did you change editors again? Xia Yan blinked.

After he entered the Liuli Publishing House, counting Li Mu, the publishing house changed three editors for him.

At first, the parasitic beast was a young female editor when it was serialized in "Liuli", but later the parasitic beast was upgraded and transferred to "Liuli" for serialization, and the book club immediately changed him to an aunt editor in her fifties at the speed of light.

Now Xia Yan has submitted a new work, and the book club has changed the responsible editor for him.

Xia Yan sighed, although he knew that this was the editor who valued him and adjusted the cooperation according to his status, strength, and popularity, but to be honest, he didn't like the people around him to change.

"Hello, Mr. Yuanqing, I am your new editor-in-charge, Li Mu."

Li Mu is really cute when he laughs, after all, his chubby round head and sincere eyes make it easy for Xia Yan to have some good feelings about him.

After the three of them exchanged a few polite words at Xia Yan's house, Bai Xuan went straight to the point.

"Xia Yan, you said it last week. There will be a new work this week.,Ling. Is it created? Bai Xuan spoke, her voice crisp.

"That's nature." Xia Yanye didn't procrastinate, and quickly took out two stacks of photocopied manuscripts from his room and handed them to the two of them.

Bai Xuan's eyes froze.

Her main work is actually Xia Yan's personal image operation, commercial value promotion, some single book signings, and Xia Yan's itinerary in the industry.

Although she has a certain degree of appreciation, she is definitely not as good as a professional editor.

However, what should be watched is still to be watched.

If a film can't even impress ordinary readers like her, there is a high probability that it won't be able to impress other ordinary audiences in Dragon Kingdom after it is launched.

And Li Mu was relatively serious and professional, and after picking up Xia Yan's manuscript, he immediately entered the state.

The story setting of Sword Art Online can be said to be a bit rotten.

Of course, this rotten street is relative to the parallel world.

Virtual Helmet Engine, Holographic Live Game.

Whether this kind of setting is in an island country in a parallel world or in China, it is actually a conventional setting, and there are hundreds of such settings, if not a thousand.

But there are always differences in the world.

This kind of setting in a parallel world is rotten on the street, but in the Dragon Kingdom, it is extremely novel.

In the same way, some popular theme works in the two-dimensional industry of the Dragon Kingdom are extremely novel if they can be placed in a parallel world, which will make the fans of the two-dimensional in that world cry out for creativity.

Just in the first chapter, for SAO, a game that requires a holographic simulation helmet to play, Li Mu came to his senses.

It's a bit interesting, it's worthy of being the first place in the new gods, and the genius who can win the top six places in the "Emperor Star Award" in his first work after his debut.

He couldn't help but glance at Xia Yan twice, and found that Xia Yan was drawing something with a pen there alone.

Take a closer look at the content of the painting.

Comic storyboard?

No, it's too rough.

Storyboard drafts?

Li Mu only remembered at this time that Xia Yan was still the creator of the popular comic caption D of the Dragon Kingdom.

What a hard worker!

Don't waste every minute of fragmented time, people's success really doesn't come by chance.

After Li Mu slapped Xia Yan with a rainbow fart in his heart, his attention continued to focus on the manuscript of Sword Art Online.

The cross-generational simulation game SAO and the simulation helmet that was released with the release of SAO and the game.

The delicate description of the kiss text, to the introduction of the game and the helmet, soon made Li Mu, who is also a fan of the game, enter the state, and have expectations for the game depicted in it.

The male protagonist, Li Tongren (Kiritani Kazuto), a junior high school student, has a dizzy brain after starting the machine, and after opening his eyes again.

In front of us, there is a new world.

Login Lobby, Player Square, Sky City, Ayn Grant.

Each element, the setting of the work, is described in short words in the manuscript.

The plot of the first chapter of Sword Art Online, at first glance, is a very everyday plot where the protagonist fights monsters, meets his partners, and shows the fun of this game world.

As a former SAO closed beta player, the protagonist Li Tongren can be said to know how to play this game as soon as he appears.

How to fight monsters has more experience, skills in the game, what is the principle of attack judgment, and how to fight monsters in the game

When Li Mu saw this, he probably understood the style of this work.

A casual everyday game.

This kind of one is also popular in the Dragon Kingdom.,Write the protagonist in the game.,Write.,Engage in the light of the club.。

Generally, career lines and love plots alternate.

Of course, if this kind of writing is brilliant, it depends on the creator's pen power, but thinking of the quality of Xia Yan's trip to the moon and the parasitic beast, Li Mu is not worried about it.

However, just when Li Mu thought that he had seen through the style of Sword Art Online's work, the content of the follow-up game was trending.

The first chapter sees the middle part, where the protagonist and his new acquaintance, who have been playing in the game world for a day, find out. They can't log out of the game.

Li Mu's expression changed instantly.

A qualified creator will not let himself have any superfluous settings.

Can't log out of the game?

What the hell is this?

Then after the protagonist explained the principle of a wave of game helmets, Li Mu frowned.

Game bugs, or so

Soon, in the game's plot, the big boss of the SAO chapter, Jinghiko (Akihiko Kayaba), appeared in the player's square as a huge boss.

The real gameplay of this game, the game that can't be logged out, the conspiracy of Jing Yan as an anti-social person, takes off or turns off the power of the virtual helmet and the head will explode and blow up, and die in the game The setting that you will die in the real world.

Only by defeating the 100-storey Ayn Grant and clearing the game can you get your consciousness out of the game and return to the real world.

And after the game officially started, Jing Yan turned off the beautification of each character's setting full-time, so that players could appear in front of everyone with their real identity and real gender.

One by one, the settings are thrown out like beads.

Especially this beautify game features that turn off and show what the real world looks like.

Li Mu instantly applauded in his heart.

The thing he hates most about playing games is the shemale number.,Played with each other all night.,Finally, I found out that the other party was a man.。

Just to satisfy his own fun, he has involved hundreds of thousands of people in this world of life and death games

And Li Tongren, who is very familiar with this game in the past closed beta stage, can be called the protagonist of this game's novice master.

"I'm going to live!"

The protagonist Li Tongren let go of the fantasies in his mind, ran towards the monster wolf that attacked him, and swung his sword out, piercing through the wolf, while the sound of his inner monologue emerged.

The plot of the first chapter came to an abrupt end, but at this moment, this short kiss text spread out the sense of anticipation of the work.

Li Mu closed his eyes and savored it.

"Awesome, Mr. Yuanqing. For a long time. I haven't read the first chapter, it's so wonderful. ”

Li Mu said.

But not on the back foot, because that's exactly what he thinks.

At least the first chapter, the rhythm, the plot, the setting, he can't find fault.

The holographic world that can't be exited after entering.,If you want to return to the real world, you have to attack this game.,Die in the game.,Death in the real world.

These things are very innovative in the light world of the Dragon Kingdom.

Bai Xuan also tasted it carefully and immediately responded.

"That's how I feel, too. Moreover, this work is not only novel in setting, but also has a plot rhythm arrangement, which is completely different from the past works of the Dragon Kingdom. ”

"It feels like it's your style that belongs to Xia Yan, and other families can't write this kind of taste."

Xia Yan was stunned when he heard this.

What is the unique style, probably the house style of the island works in the work, right?

"That manuscript" Xia Yan paused and looked at Bai Xuan and Li Mu.

"I have no problem here, this work is very good, and there is a high probability that it will be popular after serialization. I support submitting it to the book club. Li Mu said with a smile.

"I agree." Bai Xuan had a smile on her face.

"What day is the most recent serialization meeting for the "Liuli" periodical? Xia Yan breathed a sigh of relief when he heard this, and then said.

"Serialized meetings?" Bai Xuan was stunned when she heard this, and then a smile appeared on her cold face.

"Who told you that your new work would be presented to the serialization conference?"

"What, what do you mean?" Xia Yan looked at Bai Xuan.

"When we just said that we agreed to submit the manuscript to the book club, we meant that the editorial department of the book club directly held a meeting to discuss whether your work could be directly published in the "Liuli" journal and serialized. Who said they were going to have a serialized meeting? Bai Xuan said.

Then Bai Xuan looked at Xia Yan who looked puzzled and explained more.

"At this time, at that time, your award at the Emperor Star Award, and the popularity of the initial D in the Dragon Kingdom comic industry are enough for the book club to cooperate with you to this extent."

Xia Yan thought about it when he heard this, indeed

He has not yet adapted to the change in his identity.

At the beginning, he was only one of the top six winners of the Emperor Star Award, and he was able to serialize comics on "North Boat" unimpeded.

And now, as the creator of the most popular comic initial D in Beizhou Comics Magazine, Liuli must also have some preferential treatment for Xia Yan.

After greeting Xia Yan's house for a while, the two walked out of Xia Yan's house excitedly with the manuscript.

Xia Yan also breathed a sigh of relief.

It's okay, the editor and the agent have passed.

In the next few days, the Liuli Book Society quickly launched a meeting discussion on whether "Sword Art Online" was eligible to be serialized directly in the journal without passing the serialization meeting.

The scene of this meeting was full of verbal swords, and everyone was not convinced.

And the other side.

The animated film promotion campaign to the moon has officially begun.

Today's update is a bit scumbag.,It's a bit of a cardin.,I'll find a way to update it more tomorrow.

(End of chapter)