Chapter 36: I like to watch the steel hunk cry bitterly (beg to follow-up)
Masaki Kobayashi's writing is the best Kazusa Kawashima has ever seen.
It is contrary to objectivity to say this, after all, there is no objective evaluation standard for writing.
Subjectively, Masaki Kobayashi's writing is Kazusa Kawashima's favorite.
So when she heard him comment that other people's writing was better than his, she was very curious to read it together.
How to say, the delicacy between the words overflows, the sense of youth is full, but it is not annoying, the picture is average, but there is just the right amount of haze.
The writing is good, but, "This writing is far worse than yours." ”
"No, I think she's fine." Masaki Kobayashi is self-aware, he can write things clearly, but he stops at writing clearly, as for the writing thing, it is a gift that comes with crossing.
Therefore, it is too arrogant to take the evaluation of 'good writing' as oneself, and if you listen too much, you will gradually get lost in falsehood, which is not good.
Kazusa Kawashima doesn't argue with him, because this writer's writing is really attractive to read, maybe he likes it.
After reading the first few pages, I was sure that it was the love between the uncle and the girl, and the girl was indeed a college student, not a 'little girl'.
Kazusa Kawashima gradually became fascinated, but the evaluation in her mouth was: "The plot development is very flat, but it is inexplicably attractive to continue watching." ”
It's pretty good, but it's far worse than the "Four Lies" written by the tree.
"You're right."
Kazusa Kawashima turned her head, and Masaki Kobayashi had actually fallen asleep on the back of the sofa.
"I went back to bed after taking a shower, I smelled of alcohol." She patted him on the thigh.
Masaki Kobayashi turned a deaf ear, swept away her hand that patted his thigh, muttered something, and collapsed on the sofa to continue sleeping.
Kazusa Kawashima was helpless and took the blanket and covered him.
Looking at his slightly open lips, and then looking at his state that he would not resist no matter how he fiddled, she was a little nervous.
When she looked down, the smell of wine from his mouth made her retreat.
This guy!
By the way, Kawashima and Saari remembered a food video they had seen on the Internet before, making decanting soup.
If you go to bed drunk, your brain will buzz the next day, right?
But if you drink sobering soup before going to bed, will it be better the next day?
After the logic was smoothed out, Kazusa Kawashima immediately took out his mobile phone and flipped through the historical records, watched the method of decanting soup again, and then went out to buy ingredients.
Don't look at it at 11 o'clock at night, but Tokyo is a cosmopolitan city, and you won't want less than anything, unless it's not ordinary.
But what unusual ingredients can be used in ordinary decanting soup?
So Kazusa Kawashima went.
And at home, Masaki Kobayashi didn't sleep long and began to feel uncomfortable.
He is a person who can't sleep well without taking a bath, so after sleeping for a while, he feels uncomfortable, and when he gets up and looks, he is the only one left, and the novel "Love is Like a Rainstorm" written by Snow Poems also accompanied him to lie quietly on the coffee table.
He only remembered the first half of the plot of this short story, because when he saw the back, the stamina of wine came up, which made him dizzy.
Well, it's dizzy now, too.
Masaki Kobayashi sat up on the couch and brushed aside the blanket that covered him.
This quilt is covered with a veil, did she go back to her room and sleep?
"It's so uncomfortable!"
It's really uncomfortable to be drunk!
Masaki Kobayashi took a few deep breaths before slowly trying to stand up.
He didn't dare to go even faster, for fear of falling and hitting his head.
But once I got up, my spirits were much better.
I went to the bathroom to take a shower, and when I came out, I felt better, as if I had been resurrected with full blood, and I was refreshed.
When I went back to my bedroom, I couldn't sleep when I lay down.
Got all the alcohol out of your brain because of a hot bath? Stimulates cranial nerves?
Masaki Kobayashi lay on the bed for a while, then simply got up and went to the desk to continue writing his second novel, "Clannad".
Don't look at it as "clannad", but it is a work that reads "Life", and has been praised as a masterpiece by countless people.
For those who have seen it, as soon as the BGM sounds, the knife hidden in the heart will stir again, and tears will no longer stop flowing from the eye sockets.
But at the same time, it is not a work that most people can easily see, just like Jojo, many people have been persuaded to quit because of its unique painting style.
Getting back to the point, after watching the "clannad" anime, Masaki Kobayashi also went to play its galgame.
Comparing the difference between the adapted anime and the original galgame, he also recognized many shortcomings of this work.
So, can we do a better job of expressing this work in words? With the golden finger of writing that comes through the time, can you tear everyone's hearts?
When he thought about it, he couldn't wait for it!
He's a pervert, and he likes to see the steel hunk's crying expression.
Yes, he's a pervert!
...
Kazusa Kawashima didn't expect that Masaki Kobayashi would disappear after coming back from a trip, so she hurriedly ran to his room, and when she saw the light under the door, she was relieved.
Secretly opened the door and took a look, and when I saw him sitting on the desk, I couldn't help but pout.
It's so late that I can't sleep well, and I write again!
What to do if you burn your body!
I wanted to go in and teach him a lesson, but she hadn't started to cook the decanting soup yet.
Hmph, when you're done, I'm going to educate you so you know the right way to take care of your body!
She went to the kitchen.
She watched the two-minute instructional video over and over again, and took notes.
After feeling that it was about the same, she began to operate.
She may not have too much talent in cooking, but her talent is not negative, and with such adequate preparation, she successfully cooked the decanting soup.
I drank it myself, and it tasted good.
happily put it in a bowl and brought it to Masaki Kobayashi's bedroom.
"Tree, it's time for soup."
How is the structure of this sentence so familiar?
Masaki Kobayashi looked up when he heard the sound, only to see Kawashima and Satsu a bowl of tea-brown soup? Put it on his table.
Masaki Kobayashi was silent and asked, "What is this?" ”
"Decanting soup."
"Oh, it's a decanting soup."
Masaki Kobayashi was relieved, took it up and took a sip, it was not bad, it was a little ginger, he liked it.
So, he drank it all in two or three sips.
"How does it feel? Is it better? ”
"It's much better."
Masaki Kobayashi smacked his lips, and after drinking, the energy after taking a bath began to fade, but at the same time, the negative buff that was dizzy from drunkenness also disappeared.
"It's a lot better, and it's time to get down to business!"
"Business?" Masaki Kobayashi sensed that something was wrong with her tone.
When I looked up, Kazura Kawashima was stuck in her waist, and she looked like she was about to teach a lesson.
It's not 'just going to', Masaki Kobayashi was taught a lesson in the next second.
Go to bed early and wake up early, you can't work in the middle of the night or anything.
He listened obediently, and thought that the way she had taught him was beautiful.
Because, the moment you find that person who is willing to spend time and energy to take care of you, you are no longer alone.
"I see." Masaki Kobayashi took her hand, "Come and kiss one, and I'll sleep after kissing." ”
"Ugh." Kazusa's words came to an abrupt end.
Her heart was touched by his warm eyes, so she immediately caught him and kissed him.